View Full Version : Contructive Critisisim ( AVS )
3rd May 2003, 03:49
It's really no where close to what i have seen everyone here do...but i thought i would get some condtructive critsisim from some of you.
Enjoy, Lots of funky colours.
Well you've got further than a lot of noobs by not giving us all a seizure ;) good job for that. This is a good noob preset because i can see you're experimenting with movements. Try to experiment with some simple scopes next. Have a look around the forums for tutorials. The tips and tricks threads in the main forum would be a good place to start. Ateros primer, soon to be updated for the past six months.
Some tips: "i" is only a set variable in scopes. It doesn't do anything in movements unless you set a variable with the name "i". A unique tone tone sets the tone for things before it in the list so it doesn't do anything at the start. I suspect you want the screen to start orange so you want a render/clear screen to start.
Overall it's a very noob preet but it's watchable and not stupidly fast or bright. keep avsing and welcome to the forums :)
3rd May 2003, 10:30
you can achieve some more movements using another dm and rotating and zooming this thing, keep going on :up:
3rd May 2003, 13:52
Thank's for the tips.
Its just Dm's look very hard....i have tried a primer and i didnt really get it. any tips for that?
3rd May 2003, 22:33
Just mess around. That's what we all did. Try and pick other's DMs apart.
4th May 2003, 04:22
"a primer"...my primer?
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