its missing something....

[PhexTwin]

i made this recently and it needs something extra. But scince is suck at dm's i cant get anything that looks good.

the 3 sc in the el are just electron type orbiting things that i was experimenting with. i decised to go with the random movement ones though.

[anubis2003]

Yeah - it does need something. It could be nice if you took out the center thing and just put a flowy DM in - try to learn DMs - they are cool.