Need comments

[Nic01]

Something that I made yesterday...
I just need comments... it's going to be in my 4th pack (Look at mah sig for 3rd one), and I just want to see if I'm doing good =þ

It's not the best out of the 14 that I made so far, but I think it looks pretty good...

[Jaheckelsafar]

That's pretty cool. I found that sometimes I couldn't see what was going on is some sections for a little too long, but unfortunately that can't be helped with fireworks.