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Old 1st March 2002, 01:04   #329
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Thank you Xara and Alan,

Both poems came out of no where, and just poped into my mind. So I wrote it down.

I am happy that you guys enjoy it.

If you think about it, a relationship with anyone requires the giving up part a lot. And it is not just giving up part of our life, but giving it up totally. If in our heart, we still have any part of ME, it will seldom be able to commit to an US. It is totally or nothing at all. Yet the strangest part of that kind of commitment is that when we have given up everything, we suddently gain back the exact thing that we gave out and more. It is this totallity that have given me the freedom to be more than myself.

I hope I did not confuse anybody.

Will post something up later on.

Again thank you for liking what you read.

Sometimes it is just being me that counts
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