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Old 5th March 2002, 00:09   #350
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Originally posted by izchan
sscw46, wow ... your kingdoms are really good. The emotions that you are portraying is vivid and strong. Both the sadness and the happiness that you are portraying is marvaelous. As for the metaphor, you are talking about your elder?
Actually, the two kingdoms represent two different types of people (or their minds, I should say). If you re-read the poem and keep this idea in mind, it will make sense.

Your poem "Faith" is very good! No need to tweak it; it's perfectly fine. You did a good job conveying the idea that everyone needs to move on, despite the reminders that are always in view. Great job!

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