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Member
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: the mountains of yakushima
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zaeger.com - post your review
hey, i just finished my first html website. i made one other a few months ago in flash and it was ok, but i wanted to see if i could learn html too. so here it is, www.zaeger.com. im not doing this to promote my site, i know not a whole lot of people are going to read this, and even less are going to care, but i think critizism from the winamp forumers is just as good as critizism from anywhere else. so tell me what you think, is the design ok, is it too dark, etc. keep it constructive and please, be gentle.
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Forum King
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Nice design, but I have a couple of problems with it:
1. The dark red text can be hard to read. I don't want to have to put my head up 2" from the monitor. 2. The actual area where you have everything is only about 1/3 of the width of my screen. That means that there is a ton of border space on each side. That doesn't look so great. 3. There's no three that I can think of right now. Good design, but i think the above needs to be fixed. |
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Senior Member
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I really like the design. I'll have to agree with the border thing though, But that's the only thing I don't like.
i close my eyes to stay blind |
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Banned
Join Date: Feb 2003
Posts: 2,838
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Nice idea!
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Capitalist Alumni
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The red and greys' values are WAY to close for any hope of legibility.
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Forum King
Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: Hell
Posts: 3,309
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kinda small when your resolution is 1600x1200
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Forum King
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: Norn Ir'nd, leek...
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its small on the one above 1024x768 (i couldnt be bothered looking up what it actually is....)
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Forum King
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Ditto on the red text thing. Also, there are no skins in the skin section.
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Major Dudette
Join Date: Dec 2000
Location: Somewhere no one can find me...in my own head.
Posts: 978
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You've got all this space on the page. Don't be afraid to use it! Like everyone else said, use bigger fonts and get rid of the red text. I like the lay out. Once it's large enough to see, it'll be easy to use and easy to navigate. I like your entrance page. It's stylish without being garish.
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Major Dude
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colours and size aside, for your first site using html your proficiency at it is remarkable.
hooray you
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Forum King
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: Norn Ir'nd, leek...
Posts: 6,287
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the background grey appears to be a gif. whats up with that?
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Forum King
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: Norn Ir'nd, leek...
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i like your walllpapers
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Forum King
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edit button? damn post pumper.
Where did zaeger go? |
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Forum King
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Manchester
Posts: 6,470
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Trust me, your uber-stylish miniature font isn't as stylish as you would think. Please make it legible. Other than that it's a nice style and design, good work.
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Senior Member
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I don't know if this was your intention, but the viewing area looks like a winamp skin. Far too much wasted space on the sides and it's hard to read the red text, but that's about it. Good job!
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Forum King
Join Date: Nov 2000
Posts: 4,757
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You've got some good stuff on your site.
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has no CT
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I like the splash image and teh image on top. ALl teh abd thigns have been covered
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Debian user
(Forum King) Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Arch land
Posts: 4,917
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like your title_____________________
![]() also, a little more lighter those links, dude... good * PC: Intel Core 2 DUO E6550 @ 2.33 GHz with 2 GB RAM: Archlinux-i686 with MATE. * Laptop: Intel Core 2 DUO T6600 @ 2.20 GHz with 4 GB RAM: Archlinux-x86-64 with MATE. |
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Member
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: the mountains of yakushima
Posts: 87
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wow, awesome, thanks guys. i was working today so i just got home, no time to fix anything, im dead tired. but tommorow, heh, i gots some work to do. i didnt realize everything looked so bad with res higher than 1024x768. im usually at 1200x1024 (my pitiful max) but i needed a break for a while. i kept the site design small because i dont have a lot of content yet, but im gonna have to whip up something, learn how to make scalable tables or something. anything. give me a week, and with all the critizism in mind, much will be fixed.
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Forum King
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Sounds good - can't wait to see your updated page.
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