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Chick God
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poems/writings..
im making this thread to post a couple things i just wrote.
if you wanna leave some crappy comment or talk about its body not being right...DONT i dont care and the point of me writing them has nothing to do with you. anyone feel free to post your stuff too. first one.... ever sit and think of the times that past Wondering why it all has gone so fast depressions of the times you never thought it would end like this it always seemed so bright and dark i never thought id start like this my mind always remembers the times that go with joy it never remembers the seconds that pass in hi i seem to always appear in a time past my friends that die or the memories that fade seem to always find a place back in my mind how do you stop the memories and make new ones my ranted drivel and highlights of depression just wont fade i got a green light and a new life but it goes no were fuck it now its all the same im playin a game that drives a crazy name i cant find the things right to say i cant find the things i need to sustain damn damn damn what is goin on its like a bad dream at the same time i dont wanna wake up from this dream thats the best god why, if i ask that question why im gonna just draw the line ill find my memory in time itll always be a memory though you cant forget them i dont want too i want to relive them things that make you remember what do they mean why should it have a meaning damn damn damn its a straight shot its not a hard line to walk it feels like intoxication and a sobering experience at the same time. i said my peace and yet i still have none oh damn damn damn its fine now really it is fuck it. second..... ive had just about enough its always enough now its just to much i gotta stop this train i gotta have enough im over the edge i gotta get away from me its over now just about enough just about enough just about enough just about enough just about enough just about enough grrrrrrrr its a rage of silence its a dismay i cant handle this silence anymore im taking my time away from you its gonna have a beat to it it wont stop till i sleep i had enough just about enough i can hear the beat now stomping it in beating this whole thing im looking over the edge im gonn get away i can take as much as i like i gotta get away from it this thing \damn i can fell it now the vibration of the beat i dont wanna let it go this is why it cant have that beat this is the whole reason damn i hate my thoughts being alone i can feel the beat again its stomping and throbbing thinking agin its got to be enough just about enough i think thats enough I just died in my thought |
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Chick God
[Major Dude] |
i think im a depressed person, i worte those for songs i could just scream. i wrotwe them in about 10minutes i think i may have erased on line while writing one. but it was all just thought coming out and me typing it. your comments are fine i just didnt want to hear some asshole telling me i need periods or what ever else they feel thats wrong with it.
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