Old 9th June 2002, 10:10   #1
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poetry

i don't know what's wrong with me anymore
there're thoughts here that weren't supposed to be here before
all our lives are fading away
who's going to save me at the end of the day?
Day has fallen, night has come
when is it my turn to be the chosen one?
What happened to our childhood?
Why are we all misunderstood?
I saw her hurt, i saw her fall
Why were they to blame afterall?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Another's newly healed

feel the hurt and the pain
knowing we have nothing to gain
except death, and ridicule
all our days wasted doing nothing
When we could be out, doing something
Loving the unlovable
knowing our knowlege will never be enough
because we aren't enough in our own beings
never good enough to be picked
or brought to the top
because of our looks
Why, when you make up cry, do you laugh at us?
why, when you know it hurts, do you make fun?
why, in your hearts, does it not matter?
How could a person be so horrible to another
Why cant we all love each other
Because you hide what you have hoping none will find it.
Drawing the attention away from your invisible wounds
to another's, newly healed
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I could probably tell you you're my wonderwall
But I'd still never mean anything to you at all

I could say a million things
To try to change you

But nothing i ever say will ever make you look through

The clothes we wear and how we look
The fact that i read one too may books
The way that i never really fit in
with any crowd
When will you ever find the silver lining on my cloud?

Maybe never
You'll never know that i was there, through every show
Beliving you could do it
But you'll never look through it
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I don't know what to do
And i don't know which choices I will choose
I don't know where I'll be
When a fading star sets on me.


I know that i've not tried my hardest
And that sometimes i didn't act the brightest,
but i've had lots of fun
and although my life is not done
it'll never be the same as junior high.
sometimes i think as myself as a passer-by.
Seeing our world through an hour glass.
watching peoples' lives quickly pass.

Where did our childhoods go?
and as the clouds part we watch as our futures are shown.
all the things we are to become
and when our paths are done

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


I watch as the sky melts away
fading and waiting for another day
and as the last drop leaves
i feel the life slide over me
cos my mind is gone for now
it is time to be alive
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It's not fair
that I am here and you are there
with all your happiness
mine's been and gone
how did you get yours to stay so long?
I've loved you enough to hide
all the real thoughts going on inside

the world isn't ready for what I have to say
perhaps it will be some time far away
you are better, great and strong
maybe that's why your happiness isn't gone

You're the only thing left inside of me
Why can't you let that be?
And all the thoughts of spectacular momentum aren't helping at all
And when Michelle gets on her throne I hope she will fall

Because it isn't fair
That I am here and you are there…….
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Old 9th June 2002, 19:41   #2
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im going to jump to the conclusion that your poems are good but we
already have a poetry thread, go search for it.
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