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Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: NYC
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I just read people's reply which i appreciate and unfortunately im drunk from the whole thanksgiving everyone in town thing...so will make my point more coherentently soon...
but i can write a song about how i used to count as a way of dealing with my parents fighting, i have, but who wants to listen to it. i guess my point is, stay totally true to yourself when writing the song, and then see which ones might be commercial and go from there, because you do want the tree that falls in the woods to be heard. i dont want to be using this website as promotion, but to the few who asked, my cd is free at huntingbigfoot.com/music downloaded songs tend to be halfway out my mind, why wont you talk to me and the expletive laced 3fn wives: chicago...am so done with concept albums. but never mind that, here are lyrics to my newest song...maybe it's not about trying to sell out, maybe it's more about not wanting to sell out to what's expected...i dont know im confused, but would love feedback on these lyrics which to me was getting real Wake up, five minutes till dawn with the flashbacks from last night when things went terrribly wrong the last thing i remember was you saying we're done as i kicked on your door, saying things i shouldn't of....said and i know im messed in the head ive got brains but i dont use them instead i find a way to sabatoge all the good things in my life when my common sense has gone to bed I tried everything to repay for last night but my words are so broke and so utterly meaningless, I'm gonna buy a big jig of wine and head out for the hills I've looked in the mirror, I've said it to myself and just cause you've changed, doesn't mean you are somebody else never wanted to be no one else always liked just being me (last stanza is more of a rap) It’s freaking strange all the ways how times have just changed Everybody’s getting married but I’m still the same Dumb loser who’s throwing what he’s got down the drain And if I go out in flames I wont forget all the names... Of people who tried to talk some sense into me That little old lady who told me what I could be If I would just take life more seriously Stop climbing up trees, that are about to just be, Chopped down... |
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