Old 2nd April 2007, 09:32   #2721
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As I trace my finger along the sharpened lines
Drips of sour red color begin to form
Recoil from unwary sensation
That opens up new found lines upon my skin
Beads of flowing red satin shimmer along the pane
Speaking such short soft words as they fade
Trails of pain across the invisible divide
Drawing lines across a once open view
The vision fades between
As red icing now tops the cake
Upon the sights from beyond
A horizon no longer lonely
No longer forced to stand along at the edge
These new lines cross at such a delicate positions
Giving mew reason amidst the rest
That edge divides many places
Depending where you stand
As the drips speak such sweet nothings
To the edges they defy
I walk across another edge from my previous sight
What new lines shall I find
Myself, a drip, a drift, away from all knowing
My line tracing along the way
A new edge, a new horizon, a new pain, a new sight to see
Yet it's still all the same
Just another drip along an infinite sheen
Burn with such pain so brightly
Just to fade away just more slightly
Which line can I cross, to truly find new meaning
To divide myself, from such reliving
Across the next one it will be
Delusions amidst the streams, across the lines that trace
Such hollow faces, empty; eerie
No red trim upon their lines
Across the next one I will be
Disappointment, just another side effect of the divide
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It's so lonely in here... Where has everyone gone!?
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Old 7th April 2007, 09:48   #2722
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When I woke up this morning
The sun, wasn't quite the same
It's light still trickled through this soft glass
That my eyes now rest upon
It's warmth still slipped through this blunt cold
That my body now shivers within
But as I woke this morning
It was shining, just a little less brightly
Then every day before

As I went to sleep this night
The moon rose high across empty sky
The stars have fled, beyond my sight
I'm not sure why
But against the ink jet sky
The moon wasn't the same
Words still trickled about it's beauty
From all corners of it's view
Silence still echoed from it's countenance
Much the same as every night before
But as I went to sleep this night
The moon, wasn't the same
It slipped through it's obsidian sea
Just a little bit duller then before

My lips, speak such lifeless tones
That once were filled with such passion
As I whisper to myself
Such hallow nothings, without form nor reason
The words, they are so empty
Just yesterday they burned
With such unquenchable devise
Why, why, oh why
Have they lost their meaning?

As I write, these now sorry speckles
Of thoughts within my mind
I feel such a simple reason
For the loss of my divine
Yet in this empty promise
Who am I to decide?
Breaking, break, broken within the mind
The sun, won't shine the same
The moon, can't enchant as well
My words, are just as empty
As my thoughts have now become

Tommorrow
. . . tomorrow
I can only hope tomorrow
Won't be the same.
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Old 11th April 2007, 01:05   #2723
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I can hear the morning sing
a song of new beginings
with the sun shining down
upon crystal dews upon the leafs

Before I know what the day will bring
I already have your smile in my memory
that light kiss upon my cheek
the seal that keeps me strong

What more can a man ask for
no greater love than this
that you give without thinking twice
even then my heart wonders why
GOD gave me such precious as you

I know there can be nothing more
even in all my dreams
you are above all the rest
my life and my destiny

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Old 11th April 2007, 04:48   #2724
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I can hear the morning sing
a song of new beginings
with the sun shining down
upon crystal dews upon the leafs

Before I know what the day will bring
I already have your smile in my memory
that light kiss upon my cheek
the seal that keeps me strong

What more can a man ask for
no greater love than this
that you give without thinking twice
even then my heart wonders why
GOD gave me such precious as you

I know there can be nothing more
even in all my dreams
you are above all the rest
my life and my destiny

http://forums.winamp.com/showthread....523#post826523
I'm confused, did you like the original posting of it, or what? Welcome to the thread either way.
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Old 13th April 2007, 03:09   #2725
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: Stick in the mind
Moving around restlessly
Living our life out loud
If ever there is a meaning to it all
It seems well hidden from me

Every one believes in destiny
But how much does destiny believe in you
Again we wonder in these barren thoughts
Til the day of judgement dawns
No one can ever be sure
Alas more questions then answers
I wander again from the start
I am pretty sure I have used this title before but I can't seem to find it.

Enjoy.

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Old 16th April 2007, 19:01   #2726
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Hello iz. Nice to see you around these parts.


Hope work and stuff isn't too hard. Nice poem as well
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Old 17th April 2007, 03:15   #2727
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Toast,
Its been a while ... ... and I have not had any poems done for a great number of months. Its refreshing to think about these stuff other than more and more computer codes.

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Old 17th April 2007, 06:38   #2728
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Who am I to fear
These faces walking around me
They are stones stuck to shaky ground
As my face goes hovering by
No glance from their eye, nor positive word between
Scared stiff of pure requite
Of all the hate we flounder within
We all live in such terror
Deny ourselves the simplest peace of mind
My dream is to come to true serenity
Its nothing more then a flicker amidst the sands of time
One of few glistening grains amidst the writhing dune
It is buried much faster then the rest
They enjoy, their fear and terror
Why should they try and rise above the rest
Hide behind such phrases that lack logical meaning
"I wont let go, unless they do first"
They seem to forget
That that is simply an echo from the other
In the end, nothing will really change
I'm still forced, to be scared of my own shadow
Because they can't stop hating
Each moment, each short simple moment
Spent sneaking amidst the rest
The problem is founded in our very being
Evolution of an antisocial kind
My dream lives, in secret speakings
Upon the futures line
They are not capable of being happy
But that is no reason, for them to steal mine
Why bother worrying about their feelings
The system is flawed, a useful frame during past time
Tomorrow will be a new future
Can you dare to read the signs?
Don't worry though
We do have your best wishes in mind
It's not our fault that you don't know what those are
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Old 19th April 2007, 07:38   #2729
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wisconsion nights
Is seems that everywhere I am
Is nowhere I want to be
And to stare into a sheet of bleakness
Never-ending, boundless in expanse
Is to be engulfed by a never ceasing blackness
That entraps the mind upon a cushion of tar stained feathers
Mirages of light twinkle so daintily away
Tempting to lead a wary traveler astray
To journey, amidst this great empty
Makes the outside world collapse upon soft thoughts
Within that darkness
The mind can now begin to see
Whichever things, are to truly be
Once the piercing light of insatiable clarity
No longer holds it's iron grasp on
Mental fireflies of true divinity
Contemplate thoughts, much to bright
To imagine during any daytime moment
Dream secret dreams, much to dim
To ever receive in any night time rest
The more one stares into this deepness
The more one stares within
For as you stare unto this abyss
The eyes glare is reflected back towards within
So many sights are to be seen
Within nothingness so plenty
Open your eyes, just so slightly
And let the visions fold in
Smile, so so mightily
And feel, so so rightly
That this blackest night around you
Is something truly special
A wonderful gift for any to receive
The only thing missing
Is the name to send a thank-you note
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Old 5th May 2007, 19:10   #2730
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Amalgamation of words
Live it up
Let it go
life is not a tv show

Use your eyes
and your brains
you will see that it ain't fame

Look around you
hold out your hand
feel that texture of living

Hopefully one day you can comprehend
happiness is not an absence of pain
but the ability to find laughter while it rains
writing this 3 in the morning.
If it sounds like I am not thinking coherently, thats because I am not.
Enjoy.

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Old 7th May 2007, 05:30   #2731
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Well hello there iz. Nice to see you around these parts. I have been pulling quite a few 5am shots myself lately. Finals are a real pain in the ass.
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Old 13th May 2007, 23:48   #2732
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Old 31st May 2007, 07:43   #2733
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--||Life's Small Preceptions
As to slip beneath the sordid shean
Of glamour and lost faith of life to lead
I try to make myself to breath
The silent sanity of my remorseful dream
Within a life; a shallow sigh
As echo for a shapeless lie
That stirs and wakes with darkened eve
To taunt and tempt and block well deserved reprieve
So much to gain yet so little spent
So little earnt for equal resent
Found simply through a sense of malcontent
My mind, is not an appreciative benefactor
For the simplest acceptance of a life to lead
Nay, it succombs beneath an inquistive chime
A constant barage by a what if line
Why can't my mind just agree
That the person I am, is who I really should be
We want something else out of this dispreception
It strives for something else, against a well earned posession

Criss
-------------------------------------------Cross
Wish
-------------------------------------------Wash
Whichever, whenever,

-------------------------------------------forever
We can't please everyone
Especially when hindsight is reflected
Through an undecided foresight
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Old 10th June 2007, 07:17   #2734
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Into the night I shout
An empty and hollow cry
----------What
could be the difference
--------------------Between
Love and trust
What line to cross
So sharply seperates these two allies
I say to these stars that love is no more defined
Then through the trust it wields
The stars shimmer back a simple reply:
What makes one, destroys the other
What takes one, defines the other
The stars, they can never lie
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Old 9th August 2007, 18:59   #2735
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Where'd everyone go? I visit you all with a nice poem, and on ones posted in 2 months, where is Izzy? Toasty?

Actually I lie, I have no poem, I don't write much anymore, but I remembered this place, and thought I'd come visit with hugs.

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Old 9th August 2007, 23:51   #2736
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I'm here! I think.

<hug>

Iz hasn't been around in quite a while. I still write some days, but don't post really.
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Old 10th August 2007, 08:32   #2737
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Heres something, I found on my DA account for you all, I forget what I have and haven't posted so forgive me if this one has been here before --

Daisy Chains

A ghosted mist
Of misinterpreted protocol
The daisy petals drift silently
'Loves me....loves me not'
Just a simple childs game
Nothing more

If you could see me now
What would you say?

Soft eyes aglow
Just a mirror of yesterday
Same mistakes
Same un traced path
Leading back
To those haunting memories
The ones we try to lose

More we lose
More we gain
The more they're etched effortlessly
Like scratching glass
It never fades

Unrequited smiles
Just chip away
Wishes upon wishes
Just blow away
And once more
We're back to square one
Being that so called human being
Displaying no emotion
Just become so numb

Forever our minds
Chasing
Enticing countless circles
Thats all I think, all I see
Circles
Just easing themselves across my mind
Like a pebble thrown
The ripple just keeps on growing

'Loves me....loves me not'
As if a daisy can tell us our fate
Just a mind game
Nothing more

Rain
Purge away the remnants of my sin
Sing to me the unwritten lament of the winds
Forever engulfing me
Hiding away my masked pain

Daisy chains forever encircling
One phase over
Another begun
Always chasing around my wrist

If only you could see me now

What would you say?

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Old 19th August 2007, 16:00   #2738
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Jedi Gemstone, it's a great poem in my opinion I like it much!
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Old 24th August 2007, 10:14   #2739
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Thank you very much Shelly22 ^_^ Its nice to see new members around here Hope you enjoy it here

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Old 24th August 2007, 16:12   #2740
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New members?! Well ain't that spiffy

Now if some of the old members would just show up, it'd be a real party!
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Old 19th September 2007, 00:34   #2741
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Although this flowers wilted
Its still beautiful to me
The reason for that beauty
Is that it's a gift for you from me
I know you'll smile when you see it
Because you are in love with me
I understand you can't say it
But the pain is still real to me
I want to wait here for you
And smile when you will be with me
I feel so indecisive
Almost stuck with this love from me
I'm trapped in this unknown place
As my heart explodes within me
I can't blame you though for these feelings
Because in some respect the problem is me
I can't let myself see you leave
And live your life without me
I'm scared of letting you try
Lest you fade away from me
For love that isn't maintained
Often begins to flee
Still this love we share between us
But never together it may seem
I want you too be happy
But I still feel that that would be with me
I'm sorry for making this hard
But it's just so hard for me
I love you with all have
And that really is true stephanie
I just wish you could accept
That you are still in love with me






It's hard to watch the person you are in love with walk away. Especially when they are still in love with you. It hurts to know that they have created an artificial world for them to live in. All just to detach themselves from you.

I wish iz would come back, so I can thank him for writing exactly how I'm feeling:
Friends
It's hard, and it hurts.

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Old 21st September 2007, 13:54   #2742
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Oh Dear ... I have been gone so long, someone had to give me my own poem to remind me that I used to write some ...

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Two steps backwards
Its not just time passing by
its life moving on
yet it forgot to tell me
that I am suppose to follow it along
Now I am lost
between yesterday and tomorrow
unable to comprehend
the next step to take
Am I the only one
who feels like a yo yo
being flung around
just so they can walk a dog?
What is it with these spasm of enlightenment
it never stays long enough to make a difference
just to remind me there was once a man
who I could have been
and now only a shadow of a memory
Hope you enjoy this.

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Old 21st September 2007, 14:43   #2743
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I do enjoy that more then you can imagine. I hate when they get the string on the yo yo tangled though.

Please come when you feel the need.
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Old 21st September 2007, 17:06   #2744
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Somewhere Tomorrow
As silence sleeps, for sorrow seems
To slip within, an ill found dream
My my, I wish I still could fly
With wings of silver and golden gleam
By mighty sensation of common mean
To feel that rush as softish touch
By arrow, borrow, tomorrow's dream
Shot by shimmers of cupid seen
Glowing embers within my breast
Warm all members until restless rest
As dreams of sincerity shared between
Never ending embrace, of a perfect scene
Reality it seems, likes to play tricks with our dreams
I see the world through my eyes alone
And through them they see their most hallowed home
Of security, serenity, memories, and endless longing
Vanish, amidst some fluke irregularity
A quantum possibility of indignant militry
Gone, and lost it seems
Who wouldn't search for that lost home?
A house of shared simplicity
Of mutual respect and truthful dignity
For as I resided within that place
That house resided equally within I
For I was it's home and place of serendipity
Yet still, that place it once called home
Is empty with nothing more then echoes alone
Of remorse that isn't truly remorseful
Of regret that isn't truly regretful
Of love that isn't truly thoughtful
But of pain that is equally unkempt
Panic, sets in
To feel so discontent, yet to struggle so much to find
Anything to blame
That I believe is the ultimate pain
More so then any sensation conjured with a brain
For in such loss of a common sense sane
What rational thought can find relent
Terror dwells within the mind
So long now it has been biding it's time
Only equaled by sorrow, of an unjust kind
For as it lay awash in such sweet memories
The cold reality of the emptiness, swims in
Stealing all my most precious dreams away
What hope can one find?
In such a sorrow drenched mind
Hope is found, only it seems
If one looks deepest
The key to that is to use your real eyes
Not the saddened lies
That sit within those white spheres
To soak in nothing more then photons in disguise
Sight must be bestowed, sanity must be renewed
It's a surprisingly simple sensation
To accept responsibility, yet without lingering indignation
What do the god's themselves
Know of such mighty things
Of love
No other sensation is held dearer
No other concept is held nearer
No other desire is held clearer
Though sorrow and sin defile it's majesty
The conceptualization
Of pure outright mental infuriation
Is something that nature itself
Would struggle a billion universes
To ever chance to replicate it again
For the the things we go through to feel it
By all the things we'd know to receive it
As the mightiest thing to inspire
Even when the situation is most dire
For as the runners approach the final wire
No other thing, feels passion the same
So what can one lowly mind do
When faced with such an obstacle
Of unknown duration
Fight
One must fight for the things they hold dearest
They must fight to maintain them the nearest
Fight to make sure they stay the clearest
Fight by the will to survive
Fight lest in utter stagnation
Those feelings will die amidst reverse transubstantiation
As all bloody terror breaks loose
Amidst demons, knifes, explosions, and sins
Beyond all turmoil and rubbish and dreams
Fight, fight, fight
Fight for your right to love
Love takes effort and patience
And a host of unknown things
If one is not willing, one shall not find
Even in the most clearest of crystal minds
So what now,
As I drift back to empty sleep
Shall I find in that world of unknown replete
Visions of towers, carriages, castles and things?
Images of simplicity or duplicity of beings?
I ask, for something so much simpler-
Just a hand to hold, so that I can feel
What that means
For against all torture only a battered mind remains
Trust
Is hard to set in again
For no matter what the feeling
As we speak our days
Happiness is still found in many different ways
Amidst them all, the question of trust still remains
Love blinds, true love enlightens
Rise above the confusion and senseless disillusion
And what still remains?
Feelings of sorrow, remorse, and that draining pain
Is there a point, where too much harm was done
To ever be happy even if you've won
What is the limit of a persons incredulity
Truly is seems, that there can't be limits to some things
Or else all the else is lost for naught
And all the suffering falls on an unsensing heart
Equity through enchantment
Yet detachment run rampant
One must build new shining towers
Upon which that love may rest
For after so much siege
The towers once built
Fell into the raspy sea
New things can be built
It just takes time it seems
At least theres plenty of material
To salvage from the wreckage
And that's life
It seems
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Fuck I made a typo. Instead of infuriation it's supposed to be infatuation. Fuck.

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No other desire is held clearer
Though sorrow and sin defile it's majesty
The conceptualization
Of pure outright mental infuriation
Is something that nature itself
Would struggle a billion universes
Should be
Quote:
No other desire is held clearer
Though sorrow and sin defile it's majesty
The conceptualization
Of pure outright mental infatuation
Is something that nature itself
Would struggle a billion universes

Fuck.
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Life is only as bad
As you imagine it to be
The entire of existence
In a four line hyperbole
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I am on a roll
Quote:
Small differences
Can't say which is worst.
That I can understand?
Or that I can comprehand?
The difference is minute
but its there
one is less than the other
one has less compassion
One allows forgiveness
One condemns the doomed
So would it be better to understand?
Or life is simpler to just comprehend?
Simpler.

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Old 29th September 2007, 01:51   #2748
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Life, it seems to be
A most peculiar thing
In deed
Never truthful
Yet somehow honest about it
Never fulfilled
Yet somehow happy without it
Never depressed
But somehow sad within it
As so many dreams of things
Wash through the mind awake
For silence now
As so many new choices to take
Beyond feeling
Yet contained by finite experience
Without equal
In such an overwhelming expanse
As nothing becomes something
By choice of obsession
Which is all dominated
By individual oddities of perception
Why then am I still sad?
In a world beyond the concept of bounds
Again
Silence, from the other end
harder
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Toast ... great comeback .. here is my reply ...

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Everything
Even when the sun comes late
visions of hope glass through my sight
every thing seems just right
roll out in its proper order
yearning of a better life
touches the essense within my soul
having it reminds me to be humble
in everything there is a design
not that we can see it all
guess that what faiths is all about
Not too hard ....

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Old 21st October 2007, 17:51   #2750
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I'm afraid I don't write so much these days,turned into more of a drawer person, but anyways something I wrote for a contest, my actual entry was a shortened version of this on a photo, but yeah ->

Covert


The beating at my window
Tells me rain has settled in
I stare at the pain streaks of glass
Riddled amongst condensation
Wishing to see your face again

You asked me once, how I loved you
Lover or just a friend?
I lied, when I told you it was friendship
Friendship alone, to why I'm so close to you
Why whenever something happens,
I just can't wait to tell you
Why whenever something’s wrong,
I run to you
Why whenever I'm confused,
I search your eyes for the truth
It’s just friendship alone, right?

Secretly in my mind, I'm crazy about you
I want you; I want to be with you
Because you’re the only one who gives a damn

But no, I mustn’t breathe a word of truth
For some reason, I just think...
You'd never understand

Everyone has their secrets...

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Old 25th October 2007, 02:21   #2751
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This is more of a song I wrote, but I'd like some feedback on it.

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Times like these

Your words they cut
Deep inside my soul
I love you more
With each one you sow

I wish I could know
Just how you feel
'Cause my love for you
Baby it's so real

It's times like these
That I feel the worst
When I think I've
Done nothing but hurt

Will you leave for good?
Or stay right here
'Cause my love for you
It's goin' nowhere

It's times like these
That I feel the worst
There's nothing I can do
Except live and learn
It's a bit short for a song, but I can't really add to it without making it lame or repetitive.
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Old 25th October 2007, 06:18   #2752
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Seems rather generic would be my only complaint for it. Besides that it seems decent as it can be.
Quote:
Will you leave for good?
Or stay right here
'Cause my love for you
It's goin' nowhere
I don't like that stanza very much. It doesn't work.
Thanks for sharing though, the poetry thread needs some life breathed back into it.




Hello there jedi, sorry for not posting sooner, I didn't notice you had something here! Write whenever you find the time and post even when you don't have it.




Here is one of the things I did the other day. My poems have begin using white space and odd alignments. That's kinda hard to do on here, but I'll try my best to give the right feel to it.
code:
Grasps of Together
As I Sorrowly Slip Slip...
Beyond the grasp of your
finger
tips.... ...Tips
Just remember
the feeling ..by.
of my kiss upon
your
Lips Lips...
As the t i n g l i n g
makes all t i m e
die
as ...to
life
simplifies simplify...
beyond
all sane recollection
to grasp at such moments ...in
moments
of infinite bliss .bliss..
all from such a simple kiss
to melt ...as
into amorous
time... ...time
so so divine
thoughts to see ..by.
such reality reality...
unity defined ...is
perfection by perfect...
design



It's two poems in one that intermingle and intertwine. Very cute.
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Old 25th October 2007, 10:08   #2753
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Yeah thanks for that Toasty, I personally blame doing illustration, spend my time drawing away more than anything.
Wheres Izzy at these days?

Interesting poems though guys.
Ryan writing songs is a pain in the ass I know (I've written some). Maybe add a bridge or something? And I wouldn't worry about the length to much, and as for repetiveness? That can sometimes work, but be careful, I mean listen to Metallica - Nothing Else Matters, that song repeats itself a million times but its still awesome.

As for you Toasty, been experimenting with font I see eh, interesting write...

You know I think we should try to make pictures out of our poems next, that'd be interesting...

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Old 25th October 2007, 17:21   #2754
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Well the font bit was just to make it so that the words were readable in the code block. Using the [code] tags was the only way to preserve the spacing, but that makes it impossible to see so I sized up the font, a little bigger then I maybe should have.



Izzy is just really busy too I believe, he's stopped by every now and then when I go and bug him on his blog. So if you'd like him to show up, that's a pretty fool-proof way to get him to stop by for a few seconds.
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Old 26th October 2007, 14:50   #2755
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Hi guys,

Quote:
Just Do it
Doing it right
does not mean its good
Doing it true
does not mean its fine
Just doing it though
Is better than not
but is Doing it ever
going to make it mine?
I know I am not as frequent as I use to .. ...

But I am not that far away.

Sometimes it is just being me that counts
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Old 28th October 2007, 19:11   #2756
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A poem that turned into a song.

Quote:
Ode to Cayla

you make me feel
like i've never felt
you make me feel so.. great

you make me think
what i've never thought
i'm really in.. love

but now you're gone
away from me
you floated away on... the breeze

i'd do anything
just to hold your hand
and kiss your... cheek

i'm so lost without you
i always think about you
i don't know what i'm going to... do

i know i messed up
and i didn't talk
but baby i'm talking... now

give me one last chance
and you won't regret
loving me one more... time

just take my hand
at the end of this song
it'd mean everything to... me

to me...
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Old 30th October 2007, 07:51   #2757
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Hi Ryan,

Simple lyrics ... when can we get the MP3?


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Old 30th October 2007, 22:28   #2758
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Hi Ryan,

Simple lyrics ... when can we get the MP3?

Simple was my goal. It's not a song I mean to publish. Just meant to be sung to the person.

Chords go something like

code:
G5 Cadd9 D Dsus2 Dsus4
|---3---------3-----2------0-------3-|
|---3---------3-----3------3-------3-|
|---0---------0-----2------2-------2-|
|---0---------2-----0------0-------0-|
|---2---------3----------------------|
|---3--------------------------------|



And the song is played like..

code:
G5
you make me feel

Cadd9
like i've never felt
D Dsus4 Dsus2
you make me feel so.. great

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Old 4th November 2007, 08:15   #2759
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Spiraling... out of control
My mind is... so cold
My thoughts are killing me
I just want to go to sleep

Thinking... It's natural
Caffiene... I need more
I've done it all wrong
I think I have no home

With no sleep

I should... Run away
This place... It's not for me
You should be here not me
They're yours not mine to keep

But everybody has to have a bed
You've got one, I'm sleepin' in it
When I can
You stay warm, I'll stay cold

With no sleep
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Old 20th November 2007, 06:47   #2760
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Quote:
Stopped
Lay me to rest
This tired mind
let it all go
this weakend soul
I am nothing
not dust
not matter
lay me to rest
before I grow old

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