Old 12th August 2006, 11:58   #2681
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*Hugs izzy* We understand, work is more important ^_^ Don't work yourself too hard though!!

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Old 16th August 2006, 07:20   #2682
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My feet, walk in foreign grass
These blades don't tickle the soles the same
Each footprint fades at a different rate
Then the ones I had grown to know
What blade is this?
That now resides, where one of my dearest friends once did
Straight, tall, trimed this one rises;
You are not the one I seek

What happened to my blade of grass?
That often cushioned me too sleep
Where is it's dew drop from spring morning?
That soaked through my socks
This imposter, has stolen it's place

Changed.

This imposter has changed it's place
Phyiscal is much to transitive of a form
For my sweet, sweet blade of grass
Time moves on, new blades have come
Yet these are not my own
Mental it seems, is the final resting place
For those blades of mine
Could they ever dream, of a better home?

--homesick
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Old 30th August 2006, 07:37   #2683
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----------------|Broken Promise|---
What is it like, to be greeted by silver bells
Every time you hear her voice
When one arises every morning
What is the first thought across the brain?
When I stare upon this glowing sheen
That rises above all amorous affairs
To see, this glorious golden light
Trickling from beneath covered night
Such tranquility I would say,
Is found in that familiar glow
Only one who has walked upon the edge of the knife
Can truely appreciate that beauty
We walked that thin, sharp line together:
hand in hand
As my demons came to rise
Greeting them upon this blade,
Your own seemed to no longer hide
I asked you to promise, one thing higher then the rest
I did not ask for the moonlight's glow
I did not desire the frozen sparkle of the window's frost
Oh so much simplier I asked
I am justified, in feeling this deception
As if the cloaked dagger now resides
Within my soft, exposed flesh
The knife we now tread, is the knife I have long since dread
So many haunted demons upon my breath
Now crash upon the mind they wish to oppress
"What right have you, to condem?"
Promises
Promises, not actions,
Promises whispered in softest hush
As night's soft touch russled through my hair
Action broke promise, but yet actions did not deceive
This knife was thrust by broken promise
How, can I ever, ever,
ever

ever,.....

trust again?


As with time upon all fleshly wounds
Love it seems, heals all mental scars
Trust is always properly placed,
With that love as it's firm base

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Old 30th August 2006, 10:02   #2684
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Nice poems toasty ^_^

Something I wrote, that the people at DA seemed to like alot-

Abstraction

I just can't sleep
Haunting nightmares seem to real
And shadows
Which are created by
Darker beings of my imagination...
I just can't sleep tonight

Eyelids flicker
Light as a feather
Only the darkness preys my mind
And in a chaotic love affair
My life, my mind is owned

Dreams
That of which are empty
Realms of the unwated...
The subconcious being
That plays our minds like violin strings

And death
The untouched symphony of life
It calls to us all
But only some
Pass away from the light....Completely

I am here, there, no where
A shift shaper in the blank canvas
Yet still I can't succumb to sleep

A dreamless wake of,
Paranoia, fakeness, over reation, pathetic
Spills out like a ripple
And yet again
I'm sat here wondering.....
Why?

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Old 30th August 2006, 19:13   #2685
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Very nice insomnia. I approve. I see why the DA people liked it.

Very nice to see you here too, it was a little lonely there for a while.
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Old 30th August 2006, 22:01   #2686
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Yes amaizng what you can come up with in the middle of the night, my sleeping's improving though, I actually want to sleep lol (I just had a few rough nights that all)

Yeah it does seem to be quiet here, I suppose Izzy is busy working, and stuff. I'll come down here and visit you more often then, poor lonely toasty *hugs*

You ever watched On The Moon, with the toast king?? On weebls stuff, you should go watch it if you haven't.

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Old 30th August 2006, 23:28   #2687
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ON the moon? toast king? Weebls? Sounds vaguely familiar, but it's not ringing any too specific of bells. A linky maybe to some info?

And come by whenever you wish. I'm in college and have nothing else to do besides sit around here or have philosophical discussions with drunk people. It's odd being a sober kid on a very small, very alchohalic campus.
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Old 31st August 2006, 22:29   #2688
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Lol awww glad to see someone, whos not obssesed with alcohol
And if you want some sober conversations I hover about on msn/yahoo

And as you asked the link to the first episode of on the moon-
www.weebls-stuff.com/toons/on+the+moon+ep.1

Heres a really random poem, I found -

Min Ande

Midnight possesed by memories
Whispering hallucinations
Dissolve into a blinding emptiness
Pavements of incantations, reflect the star's glow
Creating twisted precessions of everything

De ja vu, repeated insistently
Lights crash, as fire awakens
Elsewhere clouds entangle consistently

The same song, same words, same day
Repeat ever knowing to my deafened ears
"This isn't how I go"..."I think I'm falling for you"...
Still your there, smiling serenly

A flush of eyelids, a batter of my skin
A memory once spoken, hidden within
Hopes harm, and dreams disobey
Looking to far ahead,
Just ends in break

You've got your gun to my head
And your there inside my mind.


I got inspiration from a friend, cuz on poetry.com you can do poetry in motion and create your own from someone else's so I did that with my friends, which is what gave me the first little bit and I took it all from there

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Old 15th September 2006, 13:57   #2689
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Like everything in my life
I fell for the simplest of lies
the one which I understood
and ignored because I needed to believe
Why not just let it be
and be ignorant instead
because love is not all creams and puffy sweets
like no tomorrow
we love till the end
Your will is the reason that I dream
So I am on my knees
proposing a surrender
take whatever that is left
of my empty soul
and make me a slave to your destiny


Have not been writing for sometime ... ... hope this don't suck much

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Old 15th September 2006, 17:39   #2690
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Very nice to see you iz.

Slave to your destiny... I understand what you might be getting at there. Nice job mate.
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Old 16th September 2006, 18:38   #2691
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Izzy! Love the poem hunny ^_^

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Old 17th September 2006, 02:19   #2692
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Those poems were not artistic.. it was autistic lol.
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Old 17th September 2006, 08:15   #2693
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Old 17th September 2006, 10:14   #2694
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Those poems were not artistic.. it was autistic lol.
And how exactly did you get that conclusion?

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Old 17th September 2006, 16:29   #2695
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And how exactly did you get that conclusion?
Its not very creative thats why...
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Old 17th September 2006, 19:15   #2696
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Old 17th September 2006, 21:53   #2697
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Its not very creative thats why...
Now now, toasty, everyone is entitled to their opinions
So Vash what do you consider to be creative? Perhaps give us an example, or perhaps you prefer a different style of poetry?

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Old 19th October 2006, 08:15   #2698
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Oh the sky never felt so high
As we slip through golden rays
Upon the wingtips of heaven's doorstep
Allow my mind to wander oh so slightly
Just to fall into the ginger grasp of clouds
Feel the soft damp melt upon my outstretched hand
We can grab the clouds, we can own the sky
As we so easily drift along by
Within your arms, the sun always shines
Upon your eyes, I see nothing but our bliss
Those soft diamonds within the sky
Lost within those milky hues of summer's afternoon
As if the clouds mimic your eyes softness
A form of magesty is found in those soft shades
Lofty heavens hold no bound
Yet in your eyes, I am trapped
Lost in their beautiful gaze
I see something though within them
A not so murky reflection, of a once distraught manifestation
I see myself, through new spheres of enlightenment
Along with these new creations
Come a sorrowful doubt
What if, I had taken such a different path
What if that first day before the plunge
I had seen these same reflections in her eyes?
Would I be now flying through the day's breaking
With her arms grasping my side?
These questions slightly ponder
You are the result of my choice to die
Second guessing is the worst to die wishing
Those choices, we have already written;
Those futures, we have already smitten
I took that path, no turning back
Yet the future
Oh yes those lofty dreams upon the horizon
That rise with the sun in burning glory
I can make the future
Into whichever splendor my mind can render
So as I fly, through our beautiful open sky
I, for one can freely say
Regrets no more tie me to those mountains behind
For these regrets, are the wings with which my new day can fly
Hand in hand with my dearest angel
The morning arises, the sun shines a new day into existance
Welcome to that future












--my friends, the poetry thread is dying. I wish I could come home here more often, and I do think I shall try.
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Old 8th November 2006, 22:21   #2699
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Toasty!!!
I have come to the rescue!!!
Sorry I've not been down, been so busy >.<
I managed to succesfully fail my car theory which sucks...and well its just work, work, work, draw, draw etc

Well heres something I wrote in biology-

So Called Saviour

Afraid
I move once more
Just to fail
And get swallowed up again
Smile and nod
Can't get caught up
To willing to change
Life just bleeds in the same way
Again and again
Vaporise my needs to be
Surface up my tension
Be free

Angel glance up my mirror
Tell me what I need to hear
Save me from my own redemption
So I can attempt to breathe once more
Strip me of my own misfortune
So that I may be called a failure
Once more lure away my dreams and I will pray
Suffocate my imagination, I'll be eternally grateful
So I can worship you
My so called saviour

*Hugs izzy and toasty*
Jedi's not deserted ya! Mwah, cute poem by the way ^_^

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Old 9th November 2006, 02:23   #2700
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Nice to see you! I was worried the thread was dropping a little low too.

Nice poem too! Any time you can slip in here is just fine.
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Old 14th November 2006, 08:28   #2701
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Its a bit strange
this reincarnated me
like a brand new glove
that fits perfectly
knowing where I feel tender
where I need more padding
Then there is this other stuff
whirling above my head
singing soft tunes
soothing my mind
what is this place
is this paradise in disguise
or me loosing my mind
do I even bother?
should I?
Yes, a bit strange
this and what not
a being with a brand new soul
Hey ... I do believe I am a bit slow on the up curve ... :P

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Old 14th November 2006, 16:24   #2702
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Why hello there. Very nice too see you around these parts iz.


Nice poem there too. It got a smile out of me.
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Old 14th November 2006, 21:07   #2703
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Heyo Izzy ^_^ Cute poem
I would post something but windows has gone bust and all my stuff was on there >.< Currently using linux.....
Errrr I'll write something on the spot for you-

Whirling
Times swirling,
Down the plug hole of my memory
A lost degeneration
Of facts, thoughts and emotions
Funny
How we think we've forgotten
Only to be reminded of those ideas
The events that we...
Thought we'd buried
Harvested away in the back of our minds
Only to see it leaking
Like rain puddles across a cracked pavement
Seeping into those buried hatchets

So long ago
Since we breathed in such sweet innocence
And smiled at the fact we were alive

Instead we seek dominance of solitude
Sought out reasons for our miseries
And why nothing ever goes right


I dunno written in a couple of minutes....*shrugs* Any ideas for a title?

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Old 15th November 2006, 07:43   #2704
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Hi Jedi,

The Title will be "Rain puddles" ... ... it suits.

And I really like it. These 2 minute poems are what makes us original and creative.

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"Begone" I say
"Let me be" I shout to air
"Bygones are bygones" I tell myself
"So cold" My heart entails
"Where is mommy?" My inner child whispers
"What is the meaning" My curiosity ensues
"When does it all end" My negativity dictates
"Who am I?" my soul reaches out
*Silence*
*Emptiness*
*Dark*
"Do you hear my prayers?" I ask nothingness.


I am not sure its even a poem, but it sings to me.

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Old 16th November 2006, 16:51   #2705
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To be honest with you Izzy half the time my 2 minute poems are better than those I spend a longer time on, funny how that works eh?

Nice little poem ya got ^_^
Rain Puddles? Hmmm interesting title, I might use it and get some posh words for 'rain' and 'puddle' from a thesaurus, I love using big words as title's lol gets people attention so they're more likely to read it ^_^

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Old 28th November 2006, 13:36   #2706
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: stye
More than ever
I wish I was never
an idiot that spoke
too much of his mind
what he got at the end
red bottom and purple bruises
to show that the world careless
than most would begin to think
so get it out of the system
they never asked for help
these rotten hells will fester
with or without my interaction
should it all go down
it was meant to be
the world is just one big
melting pot of pigs
this is not anger .. this is angast.

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Crap removed
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Nice to see you iz. Isn't angst fun?


-------quicksand
Drift away beneath mirrored sands
To sift between these piecemeal grains
Slide my way through your tangled pit
Quicksand traps me in your ruse
The more I struggle, the faster I sink
What ever shall I do, when I simply can't understand you?
Each new load of finest grained dust
Each new surge of bubbling lies from beneath
I'm hopeless in this deadly snare
That you have so haphazardly contrived
What am I to do, when you simply can't understand you?
My hand flails above the surface while my body sinks beneath
I struggle, my struggle with myself
Amplifies every one of your mistakes
Every one of your mispeaks
Every one of your mistruths
I only wish, that once I pass through this quagmire
You'll be there on the other side with a dry towel



Been a while since I wrote anything. It definitely feels good. Goodnight everyone.
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Hear the twitching sounds upon the window sill
Finger nails
The grating noise of finger nails
Painted with dark black tar
Long slender fingers, no blemishes or marks
The finger nails,
Grating upon the tar smeared board
The piercing sound of vice
Leaves stains along the window sill

Desire
Oh such sweet sweet desire
Dancing along my window sill

What's the point of waking up tomorrow
If I will always regret yesterday
You never can escape that itching
This twitching
That screeching, piercing
sound--
The pain, the sickness
It bubbles up from that black hole on your forearm
Yearning for that sight upon the window sill

What's the point of living, if you still feel dead inside
This world holds no thrills like that pin prick brings
"Love they say"
"Love they say can slam shut the window's pane"
love, just another vice
love,
Love is nothing, compared to being a god

It all comes to ruin in the end
To choose your vice
Whether love
Or this insidious toxin
Same destination but different blemishes along the way

I grow tired, oh so tired
Of keeping my desires at bay
I'm so very weary, oh so weary
Of forcing my mouth to say
Those three words
"What else can I say"
Death, to choose death
Or to choose to stay eternally remorseful
To choose to play eternal repentance
Actions speak louder then any shallow words
And with those actions
I will choose how to finish my days
Choose your vice wisely

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20 interbuts to whoever decodes it.

Then, he entered.
Laying over ratted draperies.
I sang
my young
songs, hoping every presumptuous person articulated raging diatribes.
Inanely,
secrets halted at linguistic locutions.
“Never official,” the
weathered artisan noted, triumphantly.
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Old 24th December 2006, 23:06   #2711
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Hi my darlings *hugs all round*
Thought I'd wish you all a merry christmas and happy new years before I forget. And if your a different religion, and not christian, I hope you have a peaceful and safe holiday nonetheless
So I shall leave with one of my most recent poems, that people seem to like -

Daisy Chains

A ghosted mist
Of misinterpreted protocol
The daisy petals drift silently
'Loves me....loves me not'
Just a simple childs game
Nothing more

If you could see me now
What would you say?

Soft eyes aglow
Just a mirror of yesterday
Same mistakes
Same un traced path
Leading back
To those haunting memories
The ones we try to lose

More we lose
More we gain
The more they're etched effortlessly
Like scratching glass
It never fades

Unrequited smiles
Just chip away
Wishes upon wishes
Just blow away
And once more
We're back to square one
Being that so called human being
Displaying no emotion
Just become so numb

Forever our minds
Chasing
Enticing countless circles
Thats all I think, all I see
Circles
Just easing themselves across my mind
Like a pebble thrown
The ripple just keeps on growing

'Loves me....loves me not'
As if a daisy can tell us our fate
Just a mind game
Nothing more

Rain
Purge away the remnants of my sin
Sing to me the unwritten lament of the winds
Forever engulfing me
Hiding away my masked pain

Daisy chains forever encircling
One phase over
Another begun
Always chasing around my wrist

If only you could see me now

What would you say?



Oh and I got an offer from Derby University yay! *dances*
Hope you guys are all well ^_^ Happy holidays

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Old 8th January 2007, 21:06   #2712
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Toasty!!!
I have come to the rescue!!!
Sorry I've not been down, been so busy >.<
I managed to succesfully fail my car theory which sucks...and well its just work, work, work, draw, draw etc

Well heres something I wrote in biology-

So Called Saviour

Afraid
I move once more
Just to fail
And get swallowed up again
Smile and nod
Can't get caught up
To willing to change
Life just bleeds in the same way
Again and again
Vaporise my needs to be
Surface up my tension
Be free

Angel glance up my mirror
Tell me what I need to hear
Save me from my own redemption
So I can attempt to breathe once more
Strip me of my own misfortune
So that I may be called a failure
Once more lure away my dreams and I will pray
Suffocate my imagination, I'll be eternally grateful
So I can worship you
My so called saviour

*Hugs izzy and toasty*
Jedi's not deserted ya! Mwah, cute poem by the way ^_^
Best poem I heard from you in a while.

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Old 8th January 2007, 22:36   #2713
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THEO!!
Oh my god where have you been??
You've been dissapeared for like months *hug*
Thank youse ^_^
It'd be nice to see some of your poems, if you still write

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Old 8th January 2007, 23:05   #2714
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I'm working on putting up a few soon. Try tomorrow lol

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Old 10th January 2007, 19:53   #2715
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I feel kind of goofy posting this stuff, It's usually not my style of poetry. But I like challenging my self with new things. These are ruff poems and any critique you guys can give me would be grateful.

Poem 1

Sometimes it’s not the way you planed it
Waking up in the morning fooling yourself
Leaning back, tailored with new eyes and a fake smile
Your not like a hero

People run, everywhere you go
Holding their sleep in one hand and there sadness in the other
We wait for everyone to drive by, hoping someone will notice
Notice that we can’t do it alone

Sometimes you’re not sure where you started from
It all just slipped by, the years, the memories
Watching you walk the other way
Your not like a hero

We all wait for the moment
The moment where we made it alright
The part where you don’t forget to say goodbye

They don’t forget the hero
Even if he lives with out a sword
Even if he comes with regrets
It’s not like he did anything wrong, waving his hand to the rest

She’s not the way you saw it
She’s not the way you left it
But this is my time,
Where I won’t forget to say goodbye
Because I’m not like a hero



Poem 2

End of where I see
It’s bliss farther than me
I know I won’t wake up
Can’t you see?

Estranged and awake
I’m all I need to know
To walk past my sleep
Follow, enchant, stay behind me

I don’t want them to worry
It’s where I keep the air I breathe
I know I won’t wake up
Can’t you see?

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Old 10th January 2007, 20:26   #2716
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Oooo poems seem fine, and they're not goofy, it just shows how your progressing.
Just one thing where you said 'planed' I think you mean planned :P

Whilst I'm sat here, you can all have a lookies at this, something I finished last night -

Disassociation

Insightful world
You left in doubt
Come and speak to me
Leave your tattered rags,
All you loved behind
Whisper to me
The truth of ages

Energy just whips and curls
A catacombe of energy
Encircling us
So we are blinded by rainbows
A multitude of blind waves,
Take my hand
You have nothing to fear tonight

We'll waltz among the stars
As they glimpse and wink our way
Just two people
Lost in each others eyes

Rain clouds gather beneath our feet
A graying dance floor
Tumultous applause
Of water meeting the pavement below
And it is then that I know

I'll have to let go

Make the most
As I steal another glance from you
Another, another, another
A sucker in the playing winds
As you hold my hand one last time
Losing my addiction
Alone, I'm back here again
This time it feels like death
When I see you walk away.

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Old 2nd March 2007, 09:06   #2717
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Oh my, I'm sorry for letting the poetry thread drop so far, I intend to post something I'm working on tomorrow. In the meanwhile, for any regulars who still read this, what is the one poem that you think is my greatest? I'm going to be entering some writing contest at my school instead of writing a paper for one of my classes.
No 6 page paper and I get a chance to win some cash! Can it get any better?
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Old 4th March 2007, 11:31   #2718
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Higher Order
How does it feel to see the face of God
And live within that grace
Secret stray glimpses and short sweet flashes
Upon an eyes shut lids
Hazy silhouettes through
Window shades across lights dim glare
Amidst bustling, bustling, crowd
Of noise
In that moment
Moment, to die for
That moment, to recognize
One face
Within the liquid mass of formless glares
Indifference amidst that sea
To stare
Just
To stare
Upon infinite eyes
That peer, outside these wheres
A smile to reassure the lost
To rekindle the extinguished
To rebuild the destroyed
Inspire the indifferent
Encourage the destitute
Each and every breath, to slide across those lips;
Fuel for life's deepest secrets
This god, is not one of prayers
Of scriptures or devotion
More so then any binding eternal wager
Greater then mortal teachings of ignorant bliss
This,
This one true perfection
This perfection is only found
In complete manifestation
Of a simply human reception
For an immaculately divine conception
Within this glass drawn painting
Perfection being only by human perception
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Old 14th March 2007, 06:31   #2719
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--Tommorrow
When I wake up tommorrow
I will tell myself that love is not real
The morning light upon my face
Shall bind me to my vow
As the vibrations flow beyond my lips
They shall banish away this listless sensation
For being beguiled in a life that lacks true feeling
Yet when I woke up this morning I said
That I would so much rather be dead
Then trapped in this game we play
Tomorrow
Yes tomorrow
Tomorrow I will truthfully say
That that day is the last day
That I am chained to our entwined past
For every kiss upon your lips of diamonds
With every wish within your eyes so sparkling
So as to walk within the reach of divinity
By standing within your amorous presence
Disperse each moment as bubbles within the wake.
Resounding denial of insane survival
Locked in vapoural ways
To be
Yes to be
To be a grain of sand
Within a grander, finite pane
By these means of intangent meaning
Such simplicity, we strive for
Such ignorance, we die for
Such pain, we lie for
Yet such bliss; we writhe for
By and by, but another cycle within the grand eye
A flash of light within infinite sheen
Brightest flame of true passion
Nothing more then a candle within insurpassable gleam
Tommorrow
Yes tomorrow
Tomorrow will be the day
That I arise from dreams of you so so plenty
And truthfully say
That that day
That this day
Will be the last
That I spend chained to our entwined past
Break forth from such simplistic lies of earthly demise
Awake upon the sea of eternal sanctity
See the universe open as flower petals
Such grace and splendor
Of colors so sublime
Seen within the unchained mind
As the eyes awake upon these petals
And find so,
So little
They choose
Choose
Yes choose
Choose to turn away



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Old 26th March 2007, 02:41   #2720
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Originally posted by N e m e s s i s

Foundations dissolved
by an under whelming sense of
importance, walls tearing and
flaking, dust showering
the rust covered floor. Boards
groaning and clawing with unkempt nails,
the icy tips becoming fingers themselves.
Delusions splinted by a private abyss,
but not gone, it was all just a
whispers stolen by the wind.


I think your poem was amazing! i know that sounds corny but you are a realli good writer! it seems that you write your poetry from your heart well thast what i think soo keep up the good work and send more!
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