Old 8th November 2002, 07:13   #601
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here i am again. after being lost for all that time.

find someone isaac? i'd love to, but i don't know how.

in any case, here's something that came out of a very bad night with a friend of mind. she did something i didn't/don't approve of, and i cried after a friend came in and asked if anything was wrong. here's my thought on lasting friendship.

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If ever I should weep

If ever I should weep at love astray,
or find that underneath your smiling face
was caught a fading heart lost in the fray
of love's doomed passage through this darkened place
then seek out all the reckless hope I lost
whilst I did tarry on this clouded path,
and keep it close at hand when time has cost
you all that ever kept you from your wrath.
For naught else can I do in such a snare
that I did not forsee appearing here
but send my love and hope that you would care
to save my heart if I should shed a tear.
If ever I should find you feeling lost,
take comfort in the bridges we have crossed.

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Old 9th November 2002, 06:14   #602
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I went a little weird on this one, but I still like it. it resonates of something I don't quite know.

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<SPLASH!> and my body hits the cold water
the last words resonate as the cold seeps in.
"Bye Sucker!"
Light fades and darkness swirls around me
A fish steamrolls by and I try to watch it
"Bye Sucker!"
Who do they think they are?
They can't control me.
I am not a pawn of their little game.
God helps those who help themselves
And I am not Helping.
Really cold now,
Light escapes my eyes.
I try to yell.
Cold water fills my mouth and
"BYE SUCKER!"
My brain goes AWOL.
I struggle.
I fiddle.
I shake.
"Bye sucker." they said and I remember
The Cold water
And the new shoes made of concrete.
One last try at a scream fails me
God helps those who help themselves.
It's too late for me.
Darkness swirls around me.
"Bye Sucker."

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Old 9th November 2002, 06:37   #603
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There is power in the existence beyond the visible observable realm around us in which we live in,
Though we are still, and powerlessless to what lives around us,
everything we do as a whole, as mankind,
creates the direct impact we experience in our everyday lives and overlook as if it were a depressing feeling.

The end is coming, but only because were bringing it!
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Old 11th November 2002, 06:59   #604
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Just in time for Vetrans day...

The War On Peace

Archduke Franz Ferdinand shot in the head
4 years, 3 months and 14 days later 37 million dead!
Everyone was in the ground so we were just unaware
Until planes came in and saw all from the air

Oh my god I’m going insane
This is just too much for 10% of my brain
It’s just like the crooked police
I can’t take much more of this War On Peace

Germany blitzkriegs its way onto Poland
America drops the A-bomb on Japan(d)!
$562 billion was the total cost
This time around on 55 million lives lost

Am I the only one losing my mind?
Or am I the only one that’s not blind?
When will all this madness cease
Not as long as we have this War On Peace

Next up is the Cold War
Now my favorite Union isn’t around anymore
The wall came crumbling down
No more sickle and hammer and Soviet is just a common noun

Walk the streets with my sidearm
Just trying to keep them free of harm
Watching out for myself and my niece
All in the name of The War On Peace

Send our young men unprepared into ‘Nam
Such a useless fight, how were we suppose to remain calm?
The one war we could not win
So we just choose to take it on the chin

That’s it, I now officially refuse to think
I’ll take my camo’ and this 40 to drink
Take time off to retire in Greece
I refuse to be involved in this War On Peace

Nixon decides to start up the Drug War
Kids just doing them more and more
Billions of tax dollars snorted up D.E.A.’s nose
And we still be finding ways for our highs and lows

I declare, “I give up!”
One more fight I can’t win, “Yup”
All this hate just needs to decrease
I’ll wave my white flag for The War On Peace

Oxymoron? The War On Terror!
Did the president think or just have an error?
All over two “twins” shot in the head
Only time will tell how many end up dead...

By: Lyle Wilson

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Old 11th November 2002, 18:52   #605
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Beautiful eyes cascading over a midsummer night sky,
Heading to a wayward boundary sad, wanting to cry,
Traveling over the lakes and mountains,
Trying to find the girl he lost near a fountain,
Searching behind the rocks and trees,
He lowers to the ground and begs on his knees,
"Please my love come back to me.....,

A soft wisping voice is heard through a clearing,
"My love to thee, please come to me"..
He climbs through the brush only to spot his lovely maiden,
Her hair blowing in the wind, so golden,
They want each other for a long while,
So they throw their clothes in a pile,
And make love by the fountain,
Behind the summerglow crescending over the mountains.

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Old 12th November 2002, 12:41   #606
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Memories
by Janet James
Memories shared and forgotten,
The moment hopes laid on it
Cowardly goodbyes;
Loss of compassion towards another alike
One who faced everyday looks back
A plain pail forgotten image
Stairs back meaning nothing
Who can strongly be at fault?
The good,
Can’t do anything wrong.
The Angels of the past
The ghosts of reality
In an illusion of peace


11/11/2002
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Old 12th November 2002, 20:27   #607
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Wow athene. I was wondering where you were.

The Future is Yours

By Unknown author, late 23rd century.


The future is yours
It shall not wait
Drifting forever
In a quiet wake
Leaving only a trail
Of its hollowed spell
And then fading
Into the present and past
The future is yours
But not all the time.

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Wow, the 2 weeks of my absence and I get works of arts like this on the thread. ... I am so happy that people are still contributing.

Thank you all for the support.

Photo, well ... I finally found the secreat to finding a partner. DON'T TRY TO FIND ONE. when it happends it just happends.

Fickle ... nice little set of words you have there, given that you did loose me the first time I read it.

Dynamik .. ... If memory serves me right, you have posted once before but it has been sometime since then. Keep it coming man ..

Lee, we are getting to see more of your sentimental side, no? .. ..

Athene, one of my favourites ...Is Janet you or am I reading some other talented poets work ... .. either way, I love it.

QHOBBES, forever you live up to your namesake. HOBBES the thinker .. ... yes the reasons for war has always been the wrong one, but eventually, we forget why we fight, and why we should not. As for the war on terror, apparently, the US wants to bring some of that war into my own backyard. Hopefully, he does not just accidently bomb my house, it is the only one I have.

Cameron221, a late 23rd Century work? I must be having too many time traveling novels on my shelf that I don't even question the possibility of it anymore ... ... anyway, I love the way the words are used. Simply marvaelous.

My absence for 2 weeks was due to being bed riden by my sprain back. Was in serious pain, and have more than ever put my perspective under the microscope.

Too much has happend and too many more not done.

Hope to write something new soon.

as for the time being, I hope that more of you will start to contribute again.

Enjoy your weekends people.

Sometimes it is just being me that counts
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Old 18th November 2002, 03:47   #609
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This sounds a bit off as if I am drunk. But it is a poem after a long period of resting. My brain is still foggy.

Enjoy.

: A way to love

Sometimes when I move away
I feel your eyes on me
leaving a mark on my back
hoping that I will be
safe and sound
to return to you
never leaving again

I can only tell you this
like the lyrics on the song
I will love you forever
and forever is not too long
I will return to your side
no fear of that being a lie
because of you therefor I am I

Like no promise made before
I pledge my soul to you
hold me preciously in your heart
as I do the same for you

Sometimes it is just being me that counts
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Old 27th November 2002, 03:27   #610
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izchan, i got my handle from Calvin and Hobbes (or Qualvin and Hobbes
and I do believe the creator of Calvin and Hobbes named Hobbes after
the thinker Hobbes)

I Don’t Care

A stab in the head, a knife in the back
Now I feel like jack
I’m just trying to leave this place
Where everyone has the same face

I remember the good and the bad
And all the punks and chicks that made me mad
But most importantly I’ll never forget
That time I took my very first hit

Of weed, oh yeah it was heaven
I believe I was just eleven
Now my friends and I are just drunks
But we like to think we’re punks

Like we have made it to the big time
But we don’t care as long as we make a dime
Bag, is what I put on my head
Whenever I think I’m dead

Tired, of waiting for you
I’ve been waiting and you’re slower than glue
Give me a reason that you’re late
But I don’t care, cause I’ll never have this first date

I wonder if I’m better off without me
When I’m gone, how’s it gonna be
And the only card we need is the ace of spades
Cause this just another one of my masquerades

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Old 30th November 2002, 07:16   #611
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Hot Home Arizona

We’re the last one to become a state
Founded on V-day, February 14th was the date
So what if Arizona smells
At least we don’t get our water from wells

Jake Plummer you have the arm of a girl
No OFFENSE ladies, his spiral makes me want to hurl
It’s time to bid fare well
Pack your bags and leave Mr. Bidwill

Sheriff Joe is just a fat, lazy cow
Toughest sheriff in the country, wow! *sigh*
Everyone seems to hate him
What dumb asses are electing the guy? Certainly not Slim!

We couldn’t legalize pot if our lives depended on it
3 or 4 propositions, pass or fail, we’re still treated like shit
Oh yeah, Mr. Simington, you can suck my fat cock
Robbed the elders and left them to live under a rock

A billion dollars in debt
At least terrorism is not a threat
Too poor even to rob
Janet you better get us out of this, it’s your fucking job

We got the worst education
And we’re the 7th dumbest in the nation
Allwhitetukee seems like it’s own persona
But nothing will ever replace good ol’ Arizona

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Old 3rd December 2002, 11:40   #612
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i still have writer's block....but i managed to produce this poem..
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Time to Say Goodbye by Lee

When times were tough,
And our lives were rough,
I knew there was something I had to do,
To separate myself from you.

Life was crazy after we met,
It still is even as I slept,
Left without a doubt, a bedroom of lies,
I know you told me, and I cried.

Should've known you didn't care in the first place,
Teased me at the club like candy and lace,
A most prized possession that you seem to partake,
Soon after blowing out the flaming heart within like a bday cake.

You tore away my heart the minute I set foot into your home,
Piece by piece degraded over time I stayed there,
And you being the selfish girl, didn't really care,
As I watched myself become your property.

I've changed now, you wouldn't recognize me anymore,
A person with a changed heart, with the hole you tore,
Not that you knew me back then,
But now I remember in the end.

Remember what happened between us,
What you did to me was unjust,
When I say this don't cry,
Forgive me.....
But it's time I said goodbye.

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Old 3rd December 2002, 11:42   #613
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and this one...
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Look to the Sky by Lee

Look to the sky,
To the stars above,
Seeing the person I love,
A love that will never die.

You're the star,
Always burning bright,
Keeping my hopes alight,
Eventhough you're so far.

I'll always will keep wishing for you,
Also with my lucky charm too,
To share the love together,
I'll keep looking at the sky
............forever.....

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Old 5th December 2002, 18:56   #614
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Something that I came up with...what do ya think?
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My Last Stand by Lee


We have come a long way,
Ever since I met you that night.
Side by side together,
That our ring will say forever...

By the dawn of the sun,
Our lives haft turned gray,
We fight, bicker, everyday,
And it is misery instead of fun.

I'm tired of it all,
I must remain strong,
Honey, even though this is wrong,
I must make my stand,

..I hope you can understand...

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Old 10th December 2002, 06:18   #615
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QHobbes my friend, I did guess that you took the name from the comic. But the amount of thought that you put into your words reminds me of the the thinker himself. Your work is as always thougt provoking.

Lee, well ... what can I say, you are grown? ... ... good for you.

As for me.

Today ...


: Another day
Quote:
Just another day
like yesterday and the day before
I woke up feeling sorry
for all the things not done
Seldom do I know
what is and what not in life
but fear is the worst thing
that drowns a man's delight

Seeing all those that was night
is now day and bright
why not my soul
which is in demise

My heart aches for release
for all the sins I know
the pictures in my mind
do not let me forget
only a solemn prayer
to that is forsaken
my worst nightmare
a knife in my heart
the final nail into my coffin
Something is bothering me within my deepest thougts.
I have done something that I am not proud of, and it haunts my soul.
To some others it might not be important, but to me it is everything.
The very foundation in which I stand on.
Just have to let myself fall, so that when I read bottom, I can stand again.

Or else .... only time can tell.

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Old 14th December 2002, 09:54   #616
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Why the sadness in such a poem...you normally bring the sad side in you? Great read btw...
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Resident Evil

Untouched by the cold wind
That graces my supple body,
Encircling it with it's icy grip.

Unfazed by the glint of dark,
Which surrounds the inner eye
With uncertain beauty.

Unbroken by the stony path
In which my feet lie in its wake,
As I walk towards my destiny, my fate.

Unaware of the evil that resides
Inside this broken mind,
Setting my conscious into a whirl.

The girl whom I once loved,
Vanquished under the mist
Of darkness, never to return.

As I leave my home in shame,
Never to come back; never to come in;
But untouched, unfazed, unbroken

By the evil that resides within....

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Old 14th December 2002, 21:27   #617
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heres one of my poems which I wrote the other day-
*it hasnt got a names yet*

Nothing matters to me anymore,
not even you,
with darkness falling around me I don't know what to do.

Having a short time to react,
the darkness is all around me,
my soul turns black and everythings pointless except for rage.

No-one can svae me, love me or help me,
all they can do is stand back and watch me change,
they never understood me and never will.

My body empying of happiness and filling with hate,
what will be everyones fate?
will they be like me and watch hope fade and swoon?

or is there another way?

and I'd like to say that everyone's poems are really good

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Old 14th December 2002, 22:30   #618
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I'm bored so I'll post another one of my poems

The World
When will this crumpled up piece of paper known as the world be perfect again?
Nothing can stop in this land of pain,
Darkness is moving for eternity,
not giving up,
engulfing the world in flames,
black and bitter is the fire of dark licking and flicking hatred among the world,
Will Light ever battle the darkness?
The Light crys out a yellow light but the dark shadows stay,
When will we use the worlds resources sensibly and extinguish the earth of hungry, cold heartless flames before its to late....
When will we realise what we've done?

I'll put up another one

*hasn't got a name*
My heart says yes,
but my mind says no,
I'm unaware of which way to go,
lost in a maze of emotions I look back,
seeing hatred and pain and bad thoughts fill me once more with rage,
I look forward seeing hope and light,
happiness flows through my veins and sight,
blinding all of darkness and plight glimmers and dwindles.
For now the road is clear,
but who knows for the future is what I fear,
Will things change or stay the same?
When will the coroption and torture stop among this world?
or will we have to pay at our own ill fate?
all these questions we're just to late.....

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Old 15th December 2002, 02:23   #619
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*The Field*
One Day I Crossed By A Thicket,
And went over to see its size
Chirping away were cricket,
And above me were beautiful skys.

My, my the field was massive,
to grasp its full length,
was hard for my thoughts so passive,
I certainly did not have the strength.

I made up my mind,
to venture ahead,
But fate was not kind,
And now my legs felt like lead.

Four hours to cross the expanse,
A circle I walked,
It could not have been chance,
I stopped and stood there and gawked.

*Love*

Oh, L is a lovely letter.
I dont think there is a one better.
When coupled with O,
It makes for a show,
and begs to be said without haste.

When added a V,
We all shout in glee,
And then we may just add an E.

But what does that spell?
I'm sure you can tell,
That its Love for you and for me!

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The Day America Died

Gather around now everyone
For this war has just begun
Let me tell you about the day
That our peace loving country lost its way

Now we have to remember that Saddam Hussein
Isn’t the only leader that’s so damn insane
There’s another man that just wants to fight
Seems he was only born last night

I just want to hold his head under water
With the dolphins, which he just wants to slaughter
We’d be better off without him
Since he just spends all his time at the gym

He’s asking us, “To give war a chance”
I’m just don’t want a military advance
Into the country of Iraq
Try reading a book and laying off the crack

America died on Election Day
Of the year 2K
Don’t fuck this one up you republican
Especially since Leader Lott is part of the Klan

One tin soldier rode away for good
He gave up on peace like W. and maybe we should
“After all, this man tried to kill my father”
War equals revenge? Why even bother...

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Old 18th December 2002, 15:47   #621
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As Time Passes
by Janet James


As time passes us by,
We can see everything around us
But, are blind to what is in front.
Hold on to what is there
For it may leave you when you look away


Books help the imagination take flight
But, the imagination is very powerful
It keeps us from our reality.
The pages of yesterday
Soon are the leaves of today.

Imaginative thoughts indulge us while awake,
Visions of the past haunt us,
Visions of the present keep us content,
And visions of the future keep us desiring
For what may never be.


12/15/2002
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Old 20th December 2002, 03:15   #622
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Old 20th December 2002, 07:11   #623
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Hello guys.
Have been away for a long time. I went away into the moutains and sat beside a waterfall for 1 whole week. You could not believe the calmness that came over me during those times.

No phones. No TV. No one to bother me with anything in the world.

Just me.

Anyway. QHOBBES, Anthene, Lee ... thanks for keeping the thread alive while I was away. will be posting more often.

Here is one of my recent works.


: Life changing
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And there are things in life
that we seldom talk about
like the feelings we have
the thoughts we keep to ourselves

What is really inside our eyes
are seldom seen by those around
like a mirror to our most inner thougts
it tells the tale of absolute truths

If only we were frank to it all
maybe then we can free ourselves
shackles and all these chains
would fall away like dust

Yet lives are binded to the power
trying hard to break from its web
our shoulders bare the weight of lives
the ability to make or break eternity

Just decisions of one mortal soul
yet enough to change the fabric itself
lies in the strength of one mans heart
and all the devils within him


Hope you enjoy this.

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I'm new to these forums so I've decided
to post this poem. Hope you like it.

Heavenly Way

I feel your words
move and crawl over me
with a warmth I've never known

To be in your presence
is a captivating sensation
with fireworks and butterflies

I can see in you
everything I hope to be
and know that in your eyes
I will be more.
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Old 20th December 2002, 09:01   #625
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Old 20th December 2002, 09:02   #626
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Old 20th December 2002, 09:54   #627
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Welcome to our little gathering Willow Friend.

The thread is for those who likes to express themselves, via phrases or poems alike. but most of all, it is for the people who cares enough to become our friends.

Here is another for today

: The things I do for you
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I have came and made life seem real
Should it make a difference to anyone
I would hope it made it difference for you
That is the purpose it is done

So it is
Good Times
Great Times
Now that it is my plan
You will then decide
You will then say
that everything is just fine
for I have just gave you my entire life


A bit ruggish. But it is still mine ...

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Sometimes it is just being me that counts
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Old 20th December 2002, 10:23   #628
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This poem is a dark/goth love/romance. I only made Part 1 today.
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Vampyric Lust

December 20 2002

Crept through the darkened halls,
Feeling the scriptures on the walls,
Wandered into the wrong place,
Cause I got a good look at her face.

I felt a sharp pain in my neck,
....blood flowing into her mouth...
My mind and body in a sexual trance.

Moving her blood soaken lips to mine,
Her tender, cold hands gripping my side,
Her kiss engulfs me..
I try to pull away, but I can't resist.

Her tongue dances in my mouth,
The tip of her breasts
Pushes against my chest.
She says something that I made out:

Return to us....become us....

I bend over in pain as I began to change,
"Need to get out of here and seek help"
Stumbling out of the room and running out the chateau,
Into the night I run with a voice trailing me from behind....

You will go far, but you will return....

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Old 20th December 2002, 10:26   #629
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I miss your hands
even though we've never
have touched,

I miss your eyes
even though they've
never mezmerised,

But most of all,
I just miss you
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Old 23rd December 2002, 15:32   #630
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: Sometimes I wonder
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Why do men go through hell
just to find love unwanting
trying so hard to be understanding
giving up all self esteem

What does a woman want
a weak knee when it comes to begging
or just another jerk that leaves them crying
what is it that a woman wants
a man or a dog that wags its tail
or the vibrator that last all night

I wonder what it is all about
why do men go through hell
just to find nothing at the ending
I mean I love her. I still do. But why don't I feel loved at all?

Sometimes it is just being me that counts
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Old 23rd December 2002, 15:37   #631
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why do i never contact you
even though we're far apart?
why do i never call you up
to say what's in my heart?
i know it sounds quite silly
i just want you to see
that even when we're both away
that you are here.
with me.
that's my (pish) contribution.

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Old 23rd December 2002, 18:15   #632
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been a while since I put up a poem here, heres three I was writing in some carol service

Life

Life ticks by as the sun sets in the west and rises in the east,
Like a present thats a diffferent gift opened everyday,
unexpected of what happens in the future,
known of what has happened in the past,
aware of what is happening in the present,
life is a box full of hidden treasures,
some are oppurtunities,
and oppurtunities can slip by,
life can seem like an eternity,
but in the end you die.

Hope

hope is but a glimmer,
shining on in life,
flickering when pain inflicts,
a little flame inside the heart,
keeping brightness alive in sucha bleak world,
isn't it amazing how one little ray of hope can make such a difference?
like how one person can alter the course of mankind.


and heres one I haven't named yet

Whats the point I hear you ask,
Well theres always hope thats why we carry on,
We stumble and fall make mistakes,
But life goes on making strong,
No matter what taks's lie ahead,
Don't forget who really are,
We can all lose our true personality in the dark hours,
But it will come back,
Just keep this in mind,
I'll stand by you till the end of time.

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Old 23rd December 2002, 18:16   #633
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some days can be so hard
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Old 23rd December 2002, 18:23   #634
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some days can be so hard
oh sorry are my poems to depresing?
thats what I thought when I wrote some of them but my friends say their good so I carry on writing them.

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Old 23rd December 2002, 18:27   #635
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oh no, dear! it's not you i'm just having one of those days
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Old 24th December 2002, 18:15   #636
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lol everyone has one of those days Willow I have them all the time
heres another poem I done the other night

Love

the thought of you crosses my mind,
and time seems to take eternity when I'm not with you,
and when I'am it goes to fast.

I don't want to risk losing you,
my hearts with you all the way,
and its about time for you to know.

I'm sentimentally crazy about you,
if only you understand,
but my love for you is banned.

You already ahve a loved one,
and my heart just frowns,
the site of you two together makes me want to cry.

What can I do to make you love me?
And for what its worth your my sunshine
my moonlight, my world my all
my love for you is unconditional and it will never fall.

one of my happy poems hope you all likes it

I also have more upstairs on my floppy disk I'll put them up to

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Old 24th December 2002, 18:21   #637
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heres another

When ever

When ever you feel like giving up
a rainbow shall fall and bring light to all
the shards of a broken dream
shall be restored.

when ever you feel unhappy
the sun shall shine a ray of happiness
the emptyniness inisde
shall become full.

when ever you feel like you've lost the world
a burst of everything nice will erupt inside
and will it only be then
you'r world will be found

What ever you feel remember these words
its never the end of the world
just stand tall and face you'r problems
no need to run no need to hide
I'll be behind you till the end of time.

and another

the questions of the heart mind and soul

the world isnt it a harsh place?
everyones surviving
but some wont win the race
the pace of the other is just to fast they wont last
its not the one who catches and eats
but who eats that surivives
but why is their so much hate in the world?
what happened to the love?
did it just die?
surely love must mean something to
people go crazy over it
and it can tear people up inside
people die and shed blood over it
surely it must mean something too
the only problem is at humans right hand
our instincts
it controls us and watches our every move
its our instincts that make us survive and die
its always the fault of man that makes mistakes in the world
thats why nothing is ever perfect
thats why this worlds not perfect
but one day we'll learn
we'll learn to live in peace and end wars
but will that one day ever come at all?
these are the questions of the heart mind and soul.

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I'll put two more and leave it at that for today

my life

the souls of the dead are avenged
yet one still remains
in this house alone I stand
alone to be frightened
alone to be scared
yet no-one cares
I want to die
the sharpest knife I have found
but why?
is their a reason to my lonliness inside
why I crave this darkness?
why I'm lost within?
my world is crumbling around me
I can't move the same dream plays in my mind
dieing and being happy leaving this awfull world
not being remembered
fine lines break this world into separate things
once one of them is broken a terror begins
forget all the happiness all thats left is sad
what will happen if I do it?
if I go ahead and stab my heart ridding of the evil
maybe the world will be happier without me
maybe I'd be happier without a life
then my questions might find the answers
maybe I should do instead of think
do instead of say
do instead of speak
for the world is coming to the brink
and for the good of it should sink

heres one about christmas

Christmas

now christmas is here
snow flakes are settling on the ground
the kids are making snow men
the adults are joining in too
it all seems so happy but take another look around

people are homeless sleeping on the streets
begging for food of anyone they meet
poverty is a predator
of whom many people are its prey
yet we can end all this

we just have to act quickly
instead of saying what might happen
it should be what is happening
then maybe the poverty will become extinct

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oh sorry are my poems to depresing?
thats what I thought when I wrote some of them but my friends say their good so I carry on writing them.
and i thought mine were equally depressing...and dark...

I love your writing style and choice of words...sorta equals mine
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Happy New Year Winamp Forums by Lee

Sitting by the tree on a snowy night,
The fireplace crackling, shedding some light,
We talk of all the good times we had together,
Memories that will last forever.

Popping the cork on the bottle,
Mmmm..red zinfandel..
Smells great and pours with ease.

A toast to you and everyone around,
It's been a wonderful year,
I wish WinAMP forums a happy new year!!

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and i thought mine were equally depressing...and dark...

I love your writing style and choice of words...sorta equals mine
lol Thanks your poems are good too, the only reason I have a choice of words is because I use something called a thesarus, lol its very handy I'll put up some more poems I wrote these last night-

Love

love is it suposed to save us?
at the end of the film the bad guy is defeated and theres always a hint of romance,
and goodness reigns as the curtain falls,
but maybe love isnt the way,
love has lead poeple to death,
love has brung sorrow and envy,
love isn't the option my heart tells me its true,
but then again love could save hmanity,
love has bought joy,
joy has brung strength and happiness,
or maybe we should abandon love and stray another path,
just leave love the way it should be,
theres got to be another way,
Love will just have to stay.

Come What May

You never know what the furute holds,
so stride down oyur path strong and bold,
and when you think the brink is near and your about to fall,
I'll be there to guide you just remember that,
Come what may rain or shine,
I'll stand and guide you not leave your side
I'll follow you on into the night
and tarry with you throught the day,
yes I'll stay with you forever
Come what may

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