Old 23rd June 2003, 21:46   #961
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no. I'm not a kiss ass,...unless, you want me to kiss your ass? LOL

anyway....

Poem was very good

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Old 23rd June 2003, 21:48   #962
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nah, honest opinion will work just fine and thank you very much!
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Old 23rd June 2003, 22:51   #963
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i really liked that one Lee... and here's one of my rambling dribbles, took me long enough to gather some cajones to put one out here after reading y'alls


Untitled (mainly because i'm not done with it)

this feeling of being halved,
nothing to remind me of what was
or what's to be
loneliness is the state to be avoided...
not what i was meant for

life just dragging by
endless in it's monotemous cycle
here i sit
wondering
waiting
wanting completion
what i was meant for

fulfillment...
to be loved
wanted
needed
no more searching
or reaching for what was once unattainable
being where i was meant for


Damn baby, that was really good..I'm proud of you
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Old 24th June 2003, 00:34   #964
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Old 24th June 2003, 00:41   #965
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Yes, one person liked my 'sick' poem! YUS!
About that one, it was meant to be seen in the courier font but I didn't know how to change it...

You make me real
Amidst the falling shadows
And the craggy branches of time
Random metaphors of silent thoughts
Flitting through the blackened flames
Shriveled and withered with the strangeness

A tiger's eye watching a sparrow's wing
A clock melting in ethereal codes of wavering reality
What's real
You are, or at least to the touch
But never mind that, just listen to it flow
Like a mist of a billion souls floating around us

We can hear the rumble
As that last drop of water separates
And the world within it grows and flips
To split itself from all
And fall upwards

Such ugly beauty this world possesses
Doesn't matter about this language
Because it's all shadows
But what I can feel
Is the real that you make me

Sharp crescents of everflowing light
Spread from my soul
And bust apart distance
Contradictory reality
Rewinds itself and plays forward
At it's whim

But the real you make me
It holds me firmly
So I can shed all else
And watch those shadows
Fade away

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Old 24th June 2003, 03:00   #966
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I'm Not Your Goddess Anymore

I would always rule the skies
Forever more and ever always
Control the four winds and which ways they go
It all was mine, once upon a time of clear azure
When I could look into my eyes and see

A grey falcon high on the winds, flying with wings that were my own
And if I wanted, I could cause the breeze to send him soaring
That grey falcon of mine
Free rider of the skies was he
And dictator of the winds was I

The words that were whispered on the wind gave me solace
And reassurance of what was to come
So I let myself rise up into the sky, robes flaring and ribbons twisting
And placed myself up there, despite my nervousness
And I reigned, and I thought I made you happy

A flickering candle
Wax wreathing down its tall frame
Taking a bit of its own life bit by bit
To feed the all important passion above
The small flame... It means everything...

But I was ripped from the sky
A hand of lies burst forth from the ground
Amidst the blackening sky
A rose withers
A falcon falls
Crashes to the ground and twitches as the feathers
Slowly are taken away by the breeze no longer my own...

I'm not your goddess anymore
Am I...

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Old 24th June 2003, 07:00   #967
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hello people.
Mark improvements in all angles. And I hope more will be posted in the near future.

Here is one of the many that I scribbled down today while sitting between two beatiful girls in the train today. Had to have something occupy my mind or else I will be ogling all the way to my stop.

: Collateral Damage
Quote:
It is "NOT FAIR!" we cry
as we are all condemnd to die
why are we the one to pay
for your sins of yesterday
why should we be born with such charged
when it was never ours to bare
We deny it all and give it back
So take your punishment else where
fight your wars in some other land
just leave us in peace we say
for we are the innocents
not just numbers at the end of day
go away you hell spawned fire
go back to your cave across the sea
we are not yours to besieged
as we are all GOD's children
and not your scape goat on democracy


The things that comes to mind when a guy is horny ...

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Old 24th June 2003, 07:03   #968
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Here is another.

: Journeyman Philosophy
Quote:
One must accept the futility of it all
and stop struggling from its coming
because know that which ever path we choose
life will still be abundant
where in the end of the road
it is ourselves we answer to and no one else
our choices, our life


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Old 24th June 2003, 07:07   #969
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Much more to come ... ... it came like a flood gate.

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Everyone dies eventually
It is not where and when we die
nor is how and what that caused it
what is important is how we lived before it ended
that which our actions defines ourself totally
Is that which makes us a hero from a zero


... what more can i say.

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Old 24th June 2003, 07:12   #970
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Now this sounds religious, but it is not. It is rather persona, it talks about the struggle of my inner most demons.

: I
Quote:
I am that which tempts the forbiden
the one that defies the law
I am that freak of nature
I am the lost and found
when hope is abandoned
and all is lost
I will unite it all from within
For I am those that have been
I am those that are now
I am those that will be
I am an abstract in reality
I am there for I am
I am me


One of my more stranger poems.
Hope you guys like it.

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Old 24th June 2003, 07:16   #971
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Finally last poem of the day. Unless I get another flood of it going home.

: Mystery
Quote:
It is in this fragile mind
that we ponder the mystery of the universe
with our limited comprehension
we ask the ultimate questions
what is life?
when is going to end?
why are we here?
who is GOD?
Is this the end?
or is it the begining to something greater.


Thank you for reading it all ...
Plus Raven, your poems are so good, it makes me cry ...
You will forever be my goddess. The Goddess in my life.

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Old 24th June 2003, 15:10   #972
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Izchan went crazy on the poetry..i think thats the most i've seen u write in one sitting..lol and they're all short and good...
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Passion for your Pain by Lee

When I try to hold you
You push me away
It aches so deeply
You only fueled the flame

You smile when I cry
Make me want to die
But, when you breathe a sigh
I feel so alive

I have a passion for the pain
Yes I do
I have a passion for this pain
Must be love

Nothing gets me started
Like a stab to my heart
You never look as good
As when you’re tearing it apart

You’re a bit sadistic
My heart masochistic
One thing in common
We’re both hedonistic

I have a passion for the pain
Yes I do
I have a passion for this pain
Must be love

You have a passion for this pain
Yes you do
You have a passion for my pain
Got to be love

When you sleep at night
One theme in your dreams
In the morning light
New torments for me

Perfect for each other
Perfect my misery
We play our rolls so well
Your pleasure, my sweet agony

I have a passion for the pain
Yes I do
I have a passion for this pain
Must be love

You have a passion for this pain
Yes you do
You have a passion for my pain
Got to be love

Hurt me baby, the way you do
I have a passion for you
I have a passion for you
I have a passion for only you

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Old 24th June 2003, 18:17   #973
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Izchan, short but lovely poems.
Arcane, I love that poem alot.
White Raven, how do you do it? You always seem to come up with such imaginative writings of such a darkness that I'm purely sat their in awe thinkg how the hell did she come up with that??
Knight Fairy, such a sweet comment so say at least I make someone smile.
ShyShy great poem keep them coming.
Well I need to write something, I'm working on one at the moment, speak to you all later, I have food to attend too.

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Old 24th June 2003, 19:51   #974
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*Smiles* Thankies, Jedi, I enjoy your poems, too. ^_^

Temporary

From once a translucent wind
That paraded over the hills and such
made the firelight glow even brighter
Taught the stars to shine
Slowly, turned black went the light that lived
until it was nought but a shadow
Done what it could for this world
Nobody missed it...

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Old 24th June 2003, 19:59   #975
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Here's another.....Just wrote it...


I
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I am one;
I am none.
I am free;
I am enslaved.
I am myself;
I am you.
I am the cries of many;
I am the deaf ears of the few.
I am your unborn child;
I am your burdens in life.
I am your feelings of uncertainty;
I am eternity.
I am hatred;
I am love.
I am your everthing;
I am nothing.
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Old 24th June 2003, 23:21   #976
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Interesting write DS, its like looking at a mirror and say that stuff and have the your mind saying the other part..

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Old 25th June 2003, 00:07   #977
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Old 25th June 2003, 00:21   #978
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Here's another...


Alone
------

Sitting down;
Look around.
What is there?
Does anyone care?
Or are you alone?

Stand up;
Move around.
What do you see?
Is it eternity?
Or are you just alone?

Run;
Run away from the pain.
Can you escape?
Or are you running in vain?
Or are you just alone?
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Old 25th June 2003, 03:37   #979
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Strawberries and cream
Floating down my mouth
Endless flowing rhapsody
Exploding ever slowly
Time delayed
Rivers of taste
Sweet sharp fragrance
Water mixed with pleasure
Deep ethereal heavens
Over in an instant


How's that? Gives a change from the normal dark stuff, hey...

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Old 25th June 2003, 03:41   #980
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Fuzzy wuzzy was a bear.
Fuzzy wuzzy had a lot of hair.

How's that for not depressing?

I am so important I feel the need to let it be known like a liberal discovering the internets for the first time. Uh hur hur hur. I also wash myself with a rag on a stick.
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Old 25th June 2003, 03:48   #981
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Fuzzy wuzzy was a bear.
Fuzzy wuzzy had a lot of hair.
Fuzzy wuzzy turned around to see my 12 gauge.
Fuzzy wuzzy's not so Fuzzy anymore..


How's that for a mood killer?
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Old 25th June 2003, 03:48   #982
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FUZZY WUZZY WAS A BEAR
FUZZY WUZZY HAD NO HAIR
SO FUZZY WUZZY WASN'T REALLY FUZZY
WAS HE?


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Old 25th June 2003, 03:53   #983
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I dunno it depends on your definition of fuzzy.

I am so important I feel the need to let it be known like a liberal discovering the internets for the first time. Uh hur hur hur. I also wash myself with a rag on a stick.
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Old 25th June 2003, 05:37   #984
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Quote:
Originally posted by DragonSon
Fuzzy wuzzy was a bear.
Fuzzy wuzzy had a lot of hair.
Fuzzy wuzzy turned around to see my 12 gauge.
Fuzzy wuzzy's not so Fuzzy anymore..


How's that for a mood killer?

kill joy...

and yes, i'm working on right now, and yes, i'll stop being a wussie and will post it soon
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Old 25th June 2003, 06:00   #985
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Here is something new.

Love all your work. Especially fuzzy wuzzy. ... might even start a thread on that ... a continues poem creation ... ?

: Kingdom Come
Quote:
No one wins forever
Even the legends retire
thats what myths are created from
everything just fades away and blur
like the clouds into the seasons

So what if no one remembers
You imagine people think of Edison when lights turn on?
No one gives a damn about others
it is just the way man is made
with short attention spans and shorter tempers
not thinking twice before they lash
it is a wonder if we all disappeared
will anyone even shed a tear

Man, Conquerors and Destroyers
but then so am I.
what futures lays in front of us.
will it be paradise or hell asunder.
Damn it, why should I bother?


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Old 25th June 2003, 06:03   #986
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Wrote this in the subway. While passionately looking at a young woman.


: Living in my mind
Quote:
Reality is a state of mind
It is as real as we wish it to be
Is the world of the sane
any different or better than the insane?
It is us with our limited view
that which shrinks our capability
to be more
to be better

Has it not been proven time and again
that it is the exception that rules
and the norms that follow?
So why do we fear that which we do not know?
As it is the path to a different beginning
A chance to be more than ourself.


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Old 25th June 2003, 06:09   #987
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What can I do but let the music pulse
Feel it moving
Twisting beneath me
What can I do but let the music jump
'Cuz I don't care
Anymore

Like a fairytale song we started
Jump jump
Like a scroll from hell we ended
Skip skip
But see you're a part of me
I just can't give up!

What can I do but let the music pulse
Feel it moving
Twisting beneath me
What can I do but let the music jump
'Cuz I don't care
Anymore

I found myself a new note
Jump jump
Sing a song for sixpence
Skip skip
Just let the beat pulse around you
And maybe we'll find each other again

What can I do but let the music pulse
Feel it moving
Twisting beneath me
What can I do but let the music jump
'Cuz I don't care
Anymore


Part of a pop song I wrote...

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Old 25th June 2003, 06:23   #988
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awesome White Raven.
everyones stuff is awesome!




p.s.

you can't talk on msn anymore today?
oh, ok.
well me still on, tah dah. lol

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Old 25th June 2003, 07:12   #989
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eh ... A Knight of Euphoria .. u still on msn? can i add you in my list?

Just wandering ...

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Old 25th June 2003, 07:20   #990
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sure you can add me to your list. I'll send a PM. to you with address. but I'm going to bed now, so we can talk tomorrow. ok?
alright. good-night everybody.

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Old 25th June 2003, 09:14   #991
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duh vs. izchan: Round One

izchan: weed makes my mind numb ...
poem make my mind free ...

duh: but without it life would be dumb...
if only it grow up like a redwood tree

izchan: now that will be a nice poem ...

duh: now what are we suppose to do?

(mindless chatter be here)

duh: damn it, your were suppose to rhyme something with poem

izchan: i know... just busting ur chops ...
what will i do without them
life is a bit strange when silent
even on words it seem more
i can't imagine a world less damning
if poems were to be outlawed
people say we are not talented
just novelist being absurded
like the pimp down the street
selling ourselves for a dish

duh: of dolphin filled with tuna fish

its whales with wooden pigs
eating everything that comes its way
poor pinochio lost his dad

omg, it was so sad
to watch him die
i thought i never got the chance to say goodbye
but maybe someday we will all pass on
and bring ourselves to a place of new a dawn
peace willl flow in the stream

so the wooden boy started again

and everyone will be full of self-esteem

walking towards on his wooden end

only to find a road with plenty of bends
4 lefts and 4 rights

which will he pick

jack races off as days turn to nights

trying to catch those lovely eyes
was it worth all those tears
seeing an angel come in waves
holding swords which will end the world
"Curse you all that had comth before"
"Broke the world when you went to war"
"Now it is time of judgement all"

"to see who must win and who must fall"

"Say your prayers but it wont matter no more"

"it wont matter the 2nd time before"
I wil not leave you like I left my wife

but i might still consider it if you die

Dead on the floor with a rusy knife
I know I ruined my life

a 6 by 6 will by world
1 window and 1 door with bars
with a maniac as a friend

everyone polluting with suvs and cars

i wished it was my life that i ended

swords in the world

not to mention the concordias

i got stabbed in stomach and hurled

yestedays dinner was an ordeauv

when i stopped spinning the earth still twirled

who said that it takes nuke to move the world
all u need is say this loud
"fuck you all and then good night"

were all the same color when you turn off the light
end of it all in last final fight

yet, bats sees better without the lgihts
thats why they sucked us dry

and its why real me do cry

izpoor baby don't move away
i just wanted you to stay
i am horny as a bee right now
please give me a piece of that mount

not a touch for you
hell when your balls are that blue
man you couldnt laid if you dropped the soap
you even suck dick for dope
ran through a corn patch backwards

got a corn up the hole
seeing that all has stop
might as well fuck the son

bitch, you cant have none
how many times do i have to tell you thiss
the most you ever got was golden shower of piss

now now lets play nice

you aimed for pinker but you happen to miss

put the brand away
i am not into this
no please put that out
it hurts when the fire is about

fine should we take this battle to the final bout?
should i care you shout?
or have no doubt?

this has gone too far

am i gonna give you black out?

life is not just about sex
there are other ways to max
take weed, read poems or pee sometime
shit, it might even make me rhyme
so no more killing scenes
in these PG-Eighteens
there is life beyond pleasentville
like a good hug
or kiss in the lips
just no more blood spill that needs to be cleaned

thats it, its over, its done, its dead
becuase as or right now im posting this on the thread
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Old 25th June 2003, 09:19   #992
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For the above poem.
It was a spontaneous poem fest ... ... enjoyed myself crazy.
As i was in a staff meeting while it all happend.



Hope my boss is not a member of this forum ...

see you all tommorow.

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Old 25th June 2003, 12:17   #993
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Great stuff raven!!
I feel the darkness coming back izzy..it'll never leave me.
The title may be unoriginal but oh well..
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ShadowBane by Lee

Your shadow reflected upon the obsidian floor,
Its menacing gaze locked upon mine,
As I look through the glass door,
Eye of sight burned through like a line.

The darkness laid deep in the burrows of its heart,
Ghastly as it may seem, the random images in it's head,
Fleeting to and fro, and then some had to part,
An outside look of death, the inside is dead.

We both stare at it for a long while,
Tension building under all the pressure,
And the thunder crackles above for a mile,
A new unfolding of a rapture.

I plunge my dagger nearby with all my might,
But for some reason, I felt the warmth of my own blood,
Ahead, a glowing soft white light,
And there he was laughing where he still stood.

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Old 25th June 2003, 18:37   #994
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Arcane great poem.
Duh and Iz that is one unusaul poem very intresting.
White Raven intresting song you got their, nice food poem, reminds me must make popcorn later.
Iz your poems are getting more frequeantly posted and are good keep posting.
I love that fuzzy poem by the way.
DragonSon great poems like usaul.
Heres a new poem I wrote with some advice from Knight Fairy whihc made it alot better enjoy-

You

If my life means nothing to you
Why do you even care?
If I'm nothing to you
Why do you bother with me still?
After all this time in a sensless cozmos
You still try to inflict a mass of everlasting gripe
On wounds that are enduringly gone
I've let go so should you
Yet you wont abandon it will you?
I stand here alone on the horizon of the world
Watching the life of morning set
Stars of depression twinkle
Moods and aromas whip the eventide hour
I still wait here alone desolate
You took all I had
My aspiration you torn to shreads
My acquaintances you stole leaving me desolate
My soul you took and made it betray me
My tribulational horror you made real
Alone we stood
Divided we fell

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Old 25th June 2003, 19:34   #995
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Last poem for me tonight-

Why do you do this?

Save me before I cascade into misery
My tears panick streaken slice my face
Leaving dappled purified bitter cuts
I have to discard our friendship
But I cant I'm still clinging on
Like a helpless limpit stuck in an angry sea
Thats what I'm like bound and confined to you
Yet you keep getting furios at me
Like a fire ball entangled in darkness
Why do you do this?

Help me from this desolant darkness
Before I go in to far from help
Fears play vividly before me
Your admist them
I'm to worried to move or speak
Unless you get distraught and me weak
Your like a lost song
Words dont rhyme
Rythm doesnt go
Just a lost soul twilighting in the music
Yet you still consist to fight and moan
Why do you do this?

Rescue me from the darkness within
Yet you push me and lock the only exit
I fall to the ground and sit alone
A tearless face covered with bitterness
With all the tears I'd saved over the years
Come spilling out
I call clearly your name
No reply bounds back
You leave me in this deserted domain
Why do you do this?
That question still lingers in my head
Un-answered I shiver from the cold
The walls surronding me are built upon hatred
Made by you, left to stand by you
Like me
I was made from you
Now I'm left here alone
To die.

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Old 26th June 2003, 04:18   #996
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Hope you guys like this.

: Single Minded
Quote:
I don't like forevers
it means that nothings changed
it means taken for granted
it means the end is near

And forever is a fiction
a lie that is accepted
those that believe in forever
are those destined for doom

So I will not say
that I will love you forever
for I know that is and will never be true
I can only tell you this
I will love you
as long as I am alive
I will hold you
as long as you wish me to
but most of all
I will be here
as long as you hold me near
because I love you
thats my final say


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Old 26th June 2003, 04:19   #997
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a sappy contribution, hope you like

For Shy

She makes me laugh at the oddest times,
this comedian of mine
She looks upon her world with discovery in her eyes,
this explorer of mine
She makes me cry with her smallest hurts,
this brave little soldier of mine
She learns something new everyday
this scholar of mine
She smiles and laughs and loves
this bundle of joy of mine

I take no credit for being blessed with this wonder
But my heart swells with pride
By knowing that whatever the future will hold for her
She'll take it in stride
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Old 26th June 2003, 05:51   #998
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Whispered voices in the dark
Surreal
Every silent scream I make
Is lost into the empty vaccuum
A sky full of pulsing dust
A single point of light
For the final focus
Subdued words
Kept to a muffled humming
Poison leaking through veins
Like lightning bolts announcing themselves in ebony horses' necks
Dirt caked on the black diamond hooves
Straining with the effort
Of pulling Time along
Fathoms of a child's nightmare
Reborn into an adolescent's daydream
Eyes of the truth
Watching for the everlasting
The reins that grip the horses
That run across the desert at night
Free spirits are those
As the instruments fade away
My gaze shifts and is broken
Away from pain
Away from the imagery
And back to the sounds rushing like feet running on water.

just as feathery as ever | portfolio | a poignant quote
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Old 26th June 2003, 13:14   #999
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Gem, those two poems are superb!!! Lots of depth in them.
Izzy, such a philosophical POV on that one, good job!
ShyShy,rhyming with the best, great job and interesting write.
White Raven,I must say, the dark side has captivated the blood in your heart and tainted it with the poison. But heck you spill it out on the net and thats good. Work on a lil grammar and structure then you'll be a good poet.

Here's my two:
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Shadows in the Light by Lee

Shine a light deep into this midnight shade
So we may discover shattered mirrors
Dark pieces, reflections of our charades

And though we will deny
Our hearts and souls know the difference
Between the truth and our self-deluding lies

Umbras lengthening to the end of day
Only in the dark, absolute
Do they seem to fade away

There is only One wholly made of light
Even His Son had pain and doubt
In an ancient spring night

Put the Golden Rule to the test
The Domino, Butterfly Wing Effect
Touch one, you touch all the rest

Not here to change your life
Not me
Don't want you to change mine
No need
Expose the secrets
Let hearts bleed
Illuminate, let us see
Our shadows in the light

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Terminator by Lee

Rusted iron, corrugated steel,
Wired structure, tormented face,
Patched skin, cracking seal,
Same species, different race.

Main Power, ON,
Rotator cuffs, ON,
Systems, GO,

Forward, march, creaking,
Like tin buckets colliding,
In rusted coalition,
Scraping against each other.

Wired destruction in it's hands,
Programmed to annihilate,
The human species, their fate,
Wipe them off the face of this land.

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