Old 17th January 2006, 23:08   #2561
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Record Company eh ...

People who visits and not post be notified your work will now be scrutinize under the microscope of a professional.

Don't say I did not give you guys ample notice.

The only thing to take note is that if anyone's work get published and sung by Jessica Simpson, you have my deepest condolances.

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Old 18th January 2006, 01:20   #2562
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OOOOOOOO!!!

Someone new?! Welcome to the poetry thread. Don't mind me, I don't bite. Or at least I won't bite you would be a better way of putting it. I supposedly have a biting fetish.
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Old 19th January 2006, 05:10   #2563
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HAHAHA yeah I think Jess is the best choice to sing about crackwhores and recording....she has that raw edge, you know? That's what I'm looking for. I made a haiku today, too:



Fuck fuck, bills they suck
So much money everywhere
I can't spend any
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Old 19th January 2006, 08:55   #2564
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: Silent Cry
Quote:
Not that I matter
not to anyone important
but I still wonder
would the world go on
when I am no longer here
is there a need
has there ever been
a subtle requirement
that took my existence into consideration
I don't really know
I am just a lonely soul
murking up the pool of life
with my tears and sorrow


These are the true memoirs of a geisha.

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Old 22nd January 2006, 21:12   #2565
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Izzy my dear still here? *Waves at toasty boy and the new person* So nice to see you all ^_^ I've just popped down to check up on everyone really, I have loadsa new stuff but I think you might like this one -

Combined Glimpse

Hide behind a veil
Let the music endorse you
Flowing, in to your un hearing ears
A secret mutter of betrayl
A scream of trust
Decisions, to many, just throwing themselves at you

Fight, beside me
I can't face it all alone
To many battle scars already begun
I'm to scared to stand up and fight
So I hide in the background, pumping melodys unseen

Can't you find me?

I thought times were unbearable
Gripping on to airless reality
A holler, countless lies
To late I'm gone
Vanishing amongst re born tears

Lost among a waterfall

You came in to my life
Swept all the cobwebs and blood aside
Gave me a new breath
A new light
But now......I'm just crushed up again

To late to be lost

Angry sobs I thought I'd hide
Tearful crys
Muffled by harsh reality,
Jamming at my throat for silence
And now......your not here to save me again
I'm left here wasting

To late to be found

I lost my faith down a waterfall
Come find me
I lost myself too long ago
Can't you find me?

Found myself on the blink of a verge
Pity and self argue
I thought you'd gone
You thought I'd gone

So we're both just a shadow
On the battle field
Of the dawning of time


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Old 23rd January 2006, 00:11   #2566
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Old 23rd January 2006, 08:52   #2567
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Hello Jedi,

I am never far away.

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Old 23rd January 2006, 20:25   #2568
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lol Hey guys I'm back after Toasty here shouted lol So heres a couple of poems to keep you all merrily reading!

Bitter Sweet Symphony

Bittersweet symphony
You found out what was wrong?

Have you figured your dreams and insanity
To the cure that washed away your life

Perhaps your meant to be by god
Forever a wondering spirit

Perhaps your just meant to be
Alone

Bittersweet melody
Echo words of mourn

Like pictures playing on your mind
Forgotten thoughts of yesterday

Somewhere you belong
Is all you want to be

Somewhere to belong
Just tired of being lonely

You want to be free

Bittersweet symphony
Have you fallen from grace?

A retiring fold in your mind
Bends and curves

A long lost memory
Reborn

Bittersweet sound
Have you found your pain again?

Lee was the only person to take a real intrest in that poem so meh, but heres another one you peeps might like-

Crack Of Dawn Before You Die

Words echo, across a glass pane
Silent tears condensate
Clouds beckon, and become whole again

Light shimmers
Crackles immerse the sky
Blue upon blue electrify the world
In their silent concution
To rule

A breath upon breath
A kiss upon life
Lost among this world angel's will appear
Bringing salvation to those wishing to be saved
Bringing redemption to those who once more sinned again
Leaving those who...
Didn't live life quite right

Immerse yourself in pride, greed, gluttony
Pray to be saved
Try to mean it, and see it
So you won't be left to pety exsistence

Immerse yourself in sloth, lust, envy
Only hope you can be saved
Try to see and not get in too deep
So you can save yourself from this manifestation

Lost in wrath
A misleading lie
Kicking and screaming just won't get you by

The bell tolls ring
Hollers within
As trumpets salvage the world.

^No clue I just mixed some ideas together and this came out.
Actually looking on my DA account Lee's the only person who ever really commented on them.....I shall have to thank him!!

Anyways this'll be the last one for today as I don't wanna bore you all, this is a very special poem (although I don't think is good) as I wrote it for my boyfriend Mark (we've been together for over 2 years yay ^_^), just to let you know RegnBåge means rainbow in swedish!! -

RegnBåge

I've thought a thousand times of how I could say these words to you
But everytime I try to figure it out it turns out to go wrong
And the words that had inspired me turn to mould
Cleverly witted you say I'm good with words
As I whisper into the wind and un knowing minds
'Your my hero
Because even though it may be raining
And the sun doesn't always shine
You always put a rainbow in my sky'

Thinking, thinking
Times ticking ticking, and someday it will run out
But.....
How to express emotions in black and white?
Gliding sequences
Lines and curls
They'll never be able to represent my heart

People have tried to capture beauty and love
In so many ways
To capture an essence is hard
To capture love in a word is impossible

The only words I can seem to find is
You saved me, I craved you
I'd go to hell and back just for one kiss and hug
Together we promised
Never to part, and even though we cannot fulfill this dream yet
One day it will be reality

So the sun can die
And the rain can storm the worlds
But I always know
You'll put a rainbow in my sky.

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Old 23rd January 2006, 21:48   #2569
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Why thank you. My favorite of those three is bittersweet symphony.

I'll have to apologize for not writing any lately, I've been preoccupied with other people.
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Old 24th January 2006, 00:46   #2570
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My girl is on a rolll ...... vrooommmmmmm

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Old 24th January 2006, 04:45   #2571
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|-Come Fly With Us
|We can fly
|Upon night's glistening wings
|Such soft embrace a breeze beneath my feet
|A shimmer upon the evening sky
|Lost to the whole world
|Lost, just lost in our own cloudy playground
|
|So far and far away from that world
|A different dimension
|Beyond the cares of that old prison
|Into the light of such euphoric tranquility
|Dancing across waves of silk
|Soft whispy sheets as far as the mind imagines
|Fly away, just fly away, into this wonderful night
|
|Upon the crest of the highest peak
|Moonlight dances across our dream
|Playing a game of hide and seek
|Joining us in our devious dance
|The world to envy our secret paradise
|As it slips into silver lining
|To blend in with the moonlit sky
|As a merging painted with the roughest brush
|On the softest page
|Tearing into the fabric of a perceived existance
|If only, if only, if only
|Just to fly away into another once-lost dream

Like marshmallows I guess.
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Old 25th January 2006, 18:59   #2572
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My girl is on a rolll ...... vrooommmmmmm
You referring to me Iz?

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Old 25th January 2006, 21:40   #2573
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I'd assume so... you are the only girl who has visited us on our island for a while...
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Old 26th January 2006, 02:18   #2574
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of course I am refering to you, unless you tell me your a boy and I have been fantasizing on the wrong gender.

Please tell me that your not a guy.

Pretty please?

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Old 26th January 2006, 05:42   #2575
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does it exist,
in our strange land,
a girl who likes sunsets?
Will I ever find her?
Can she be mine?

I've looked high and low
although i gave up long ago.

But still I try,
to find the one,
the likes to sit
and watch the sun.

There's more than sex,
I say to some,
There's more to love,
Than when to come.

I want to find,
A girl like me.
I want to lay,
under a tree.

Why has it become,
good to act like bad.
Since when was disrespect
a virtue to be had.

There must be someone,
somewhere who likes romance.
She'll be mine,
if only i have a chance.

Maybe it's my age,
i'm only nineteen you know.
Maybe girls get smarter,
the more they grow.

One day they'll say,
Now what?
When their all-star man,
left with a slut.

Come hither fans of love,
Let's go look at stars above.

So I ask you girls.
Do you exist?

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I know I didn't really stick to a rhythm or rhyme structure very much. I think I kind of like it that way although I'd like to hear some opinions. The poem is more a reflection of a recent experience with a girl who wouldn't date me presumably because I wasn't exciting enough. Not the same one as in my other thread. But the whole ordeal has made me seriously consider not looking for someone until I get out of college, maybe the girls will have realized that football captains and frat boys don't make good husbands - usually.

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Old 26th January 2006, 07:25   #2576
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I like it. Rhyme scheme and rhythm are nice additions, but mean pretty much nill in my grand scheme of poetry. It's more about imagery and using the words artfuly. In those aspects, I really like how that turned out. My only comment is that it seemed you tried to force the rhyme scheme and rhythm in a few spots. Still, a very good poem.

I also wish you luck in finding that girl, as a reassurance, don't worry, girls like that do exist. They can come at any age, it just depends on if you are looking in the right spots. I found one, I hope you can too.


My poem for the night:
|-Lucid Dreams
|Infinte dreams upon this lucid plain
|A secret rendezvous by the sandman's lane
|In this encompassing darkness, I see
|A place molded by you and me
|Intangible, most secret golden shrine
|A secure sensation, washes over my mind
|I lie in anticipation of your arrival
|A welcome journey before morning revival
|Into our mystical stolen night
|A lucid fantasy by dreamlit light
|Impossible union across the distance
|A simple meeting by ethereal existance
|Inside this dream world we meet at last
|A sweet serenity, as all else, drifts past

Slightly forced pattern and rhyming, but I like it.
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|-Winter Gods
|To wander amongst the gods
|Twinkling and shimmering in divine light
|Dancing and swaying in timeless ballet
|Amassing quantities of firm beleivers
|A ravaneous horde of mental underacheivers
|Vainly they try to emulate your ways
|Every step, every twist, every twinkling sway
|For honor, for justice, for MY god
|A possesive singular, an ownership of the infinite
|Yet such a simple thing to claim as one's own
|This beautiful, mystical, entrancing deity
|Picked from the sky to be something more
|Then another shimmer in the falling dance
|Personal and warming, yet cold as ice
|The being is nothing more then what's in your mind
|I see the beauty amassed in the swarm
|No particular favorites arise
|For I wish to distance myself away from the lot
|Who seem to feel that obediance is the key
|I use these gods to paint across the sky
|Amazing pictures in my unchained minds eye
|Order in chaos, majesty in the random
|Still to watch and worry at every word they say
|Their constant blathering, is melting my snow away

I like snow, as long as I don't have to shovel it...
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Old 31st January 2006, 04:38   #2578
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Made this poem a long time ago March 2005.
Been a long time since I've posted anything on winamp. Came back to post some poetry.

Absolute red

Skies of ether mist
Stranded inside like the desert under rest
Can't see the stars past the sun
My Eyes willowing in a quest

The sky was in a trance
Dreams are coming through
My fingers carving into the air
Dancing under the blue

Stains of yellow thickening across the sky
the mark of prey playing with sound
sorrows spread across where I lay
Drawing history my feet are bound

The dawn crawling through
Silence dressed in flight
Can't feel the earth beneath my feet
Flowers hazing into sight

Eyes of pride; I hope she can see me now
Stranded in red
Clean cut metal black
The rest is set; clear, shot, dead

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Old 31st January 2006, 19:24   #2579
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Iz yes I am a girl hence 'major dudette' lol and if its fantasizing your after...well look in the post your picture thread and you will see the ugly beast I am and k_rock923 yes we girls who aren't obssesed with sex do exsist, but I have a boyfriend lol :P
Theo lovely to see you hunny, I've missed ya *hugs* You should get your butt on yahoo or msn so we can catch up k?

My Saviour

Still there
Haunting the notion
Taunting my every step

Still here, forever engross
Lost among a speckled moon
Tainting my very self

All I wanted was to be free
My saviour
All I wanted was happiness
My saviour
It seems your wings have flown you away
So for now
I won't believe in myself

Still breathing
A shallow depth of life
Forever moving, walking on the border line of hell

Still hurting
A pain that just grows
I've yet to find the key
That will one day unlock
My sanity

All I wanted was to be saved
My saviour
All I wanted was raw passion
My saviour
It seems your wings have flown you away
So for now
I won't believe in myself

Still waiting
Just one touch is more than enough
Still longing
For you and your midus embrace.

Randomely came across that on my pc, so no clue where it appeared from, it could do with some work I know but right now I'm supposed to be doing chemistry revision lol

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Old 2nd February 2006, 01:05   #2580
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Theodis, nice to see you again. That was an amazing peice. I especially love the first stanza.

Jedi, marvelous as well. I like the notion of a key to unlocking sanity. It sorta fits into my warped perspective of the world.
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Old 3rd February 2006, 02:43   #2581
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Birthday Dreams
As I lie here on the pavement, tears march down my face
I visulize the last time I saw you, trimmed delicately in lace
My one wish right now, as I see the light fade away
Is that I had been able to see you, just one more time this day
As the darkness deepens, I feel that awkwardly familiar sensation
Inside this listless abyss, a wonderful joyous vibration
Symphonic and delicate, as the songbird sings
Monotonous and redundant, as the beating of dragon wings
Consuming and devouring, as the purest sight of radiant light
Yet repugnant, torturous, devious; it caries the sound of eternal blight
In that most sanctified paradise, a finite infinite apart
That deepest impassable chasam, seperating you from my heart
I lie here on this pavement, the chill begins to set in
This shivering sensation, freezing my senses from within
The music is growing louder, a deafening roar within my mind
Ripping apart my consciousness, reluctantly leaving that world behind
In this spaceless moment, I remember a long forgotten time
When as I lay on the carpet, I thought deaths grasp was simply sublime
Yet here I am, on this doorstep again
A world of difference within my mind, hardly any comparison back to then
Much more then merely night and day, polar opposites but just trivilaities
Beyond real-world definitions, no such named categories
Even still I lie, slipping into that indescribable land
Not yet across the fence, but simply walking along death's hand
The familiar scenery lulls my mind asleep, de ja vu of the worst kind
Formless hills merge with toneless sky, a world made of colors seen only by the blind
This eerie sensation shivers throughout, I feel at home here
In such a dastardly wonderful place, it's splendor only seen in my tear
For through it's curved reflection, amidst this empty perfection
I see a beautiful vision, the object of my minds affection
Sitting beside my favorite tree, I paint the land with our memories
Red sky with turquoise stars, dancing across the moon like butterflies
Aqua grass with fuschia flowers, timeless nights sleeping in our secret field
Indigo clouds with silver moonlight so plenty, lost to the world so carefully concealed
A molten playground of colors, bubbling and thriving in my joyful reminisce
The only thing missing in this abstract paradise, is your soft soothing kiss
No painting, poem, or etheral illusion; can ever replace your eyes in front of mine
So I muse and dream, thoughtlessly in my newly found divine
Yet even in this heavenly hell, still there is one thing missing
It still comes to no avail, since no one in that other world is listening
Seconds to days to years without number, softly time slips without care
I know it'll end soon, just like the last time I was there
Then the doubt creeps in, what if I never will leave
Trapped in this hellish heaven, the mere notion makes my heart grieve
Depart my mind, I'll abandon this mental paradisical creation
If only to rejoin that dastardly prison, yet the prospect of you brings new found elation
Abort this false vision, times up for this mental distraction
Bring me home inside my skull, indulgence is it's own satisfaction
Eyes awake and flutter softly, the colors still paint the sky
Fingers grasp and hold you tightly, lungs release an azure sigh
The bluish hues dance amongst the tye-dye sky, eyes focus - they see the angel's eyes
Mind shakes within it's boundary, even more so to it's surprise
Tears are pouring from inside those eyes, falling gracefully upon my face
Emerging from metamorphasis of cosmic lies, attempting vainly to find it's new place
I stare at the divine crying, mind finally clears to find the meaning
A smile upon my face, a flutter as my eyes are gleeming
A kiss upon your lips, life shifts back to reality
Embrace that lasts, for eternal instance of mortality
Through the bleakest end, along every renewed beginning
Life in love, seems to be worth winning
Thank you.
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You did a good job at making your poem have a sense of history.
I have had trouble in the past when making poems largely about my dreams or describing a dream; most never understood or new what was going on lol(couldn't relate to them). But that was well written. I was able to read all of it still wanting to read more after every sentence. And I personally understood all of it.
You have a skill of words I have not acquired,...yet lol

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Old 3rd February 2006, 19:46   #2583
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Toasty boy that poem is absolutley amazing, one of your best pieces yet I must say! Fantastic hunny.
And Theo you do have a skill with words lol I have proof of it so

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These are two poems that I wrote a few years ago, during some very intense times in my life.
Quote:
Freedom to Live

Daddy, what did I ever do to deserve this?
All I was trying to do was live out my life.
I never meant to kick and swear.
Be the child you never intended me to be.

I'm sorry, I promise.
I really mean it this time.
All I desire is my freedom to live.
Is that really all too much to ask?

Mommy, who are you trying to fool?
I know I've been a bad boy,
But must you over exaggerate it?
I swear I'll stop. Just please, no more lies.

I'm sorry, I promise.
I really mean it this time.
All I desire is my freedom to live.
Is that really all too much to ask?

God, why must you keep doing this?
Am I not meeting your expectations?
Is it because I've betrayed you?
Or maybe, are you just an inconsiderate bitch?

I'm sorry, I promise you...
Quote:
Don't Let Go

My precious little life
Tainted and disturbed
I know that it's too late for me
But I'll do all I can to save you
Please don't go down the same path
That I've once traveled
It's not a pretty sight
Remember all our talks?
Do you not believe me?
Trust me
You do not want this
Let me save you
Help you
Free you
I won't let go...

Spiral out, my friend. You will find your way back to yourself, we all will.
I'll be waiting, and shall see you on the other side...
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Thank you theodis, and also, you have a very different skill with words, and don't think anything other. The first poem I remember reading of yours simply blew my mind away.

Thank you jedi, I really like it as well.
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I leave for a few days and the thread grows ... half a page.

: Bag of treats
Quote:
Many a things we miss
not because we see them not
they register to some extent inside us
but not enough for a synaps to expand
so on we go and move along
seeing and not seeing at all
the dreams and hopes gone forgoten
because our mind ignores them
stranger things have thread this land
but none more disturbing then this
man will kill and kill some more
yet man believes in forgiveness
so that he might kill again
in utter clean concious


words. nothing but words.

welcome to the poems, denkensiefursich. welcome.

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-Silver Tracers
Sparkling flashes
Whimsically slicing through tooth numbing cold
Arms wrapped tightly around for warmth
The numbness itself helps more
As it's mind peircing effects take hold
Dulling and nullifing senses
Leaving a delicate ice carving behind
Vulnerable, desolate, yet unfaltering
Silver streaks dance amongst shimmering sparkles
Caustically slicing through a fire quenching cold
Body engulfing itself in desperation
Against that ever encompasing cold
The emptiness helps more
Seperating the mind from any real world
Such short distance of silence dividing
Devious shimmering silver silence
Flying across the divide
As cold waves wrap into it's destructive effect
Swirling and twirling in it's death spiral
Coldness amplifing and focusing it's poignant meaning
With redeemed purpose
Watch the statue crumble:
Carelessly? Headlessly? Thoughtlessly?
Unintentionally?
Self-centering act of self-deteering measure
Simply self-defense
Silver bullets magnifying coldest air
Statue but rooted in listless purpose
Hopeless, hopeless, hopelessly rambling
Silence deepens, coldness weakens,
The mind, finally shows it's face
Statue battered, broken, but one melting drop
Softly shimmering along icy surface
Undetered by neighboring ambience
It's simple fall,
All,
Else,
Fades,
Coldness no more
Silence no more
Distance no more
Emptiness no more
Warmth and security
Embrace yet ambiguity
Words materialze from icy pool
As statue condences into form
Snowflakes falling upwards
Gravity knows no meaning
Elation, floatation, resuscitation
Yet a simple wish, to melt your nervousness away
Through harshest cold coupled with deepest silence
Simpler still,
Just to melt away the lie


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Old 12th February 2006, 07:11   #2588
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Bones tremble, nerves sharpen
Edging away from such peaceful tranquility
Relaxation slips beyond memory
Just the absence of shattered reality
It works it's way from feet, trough hands and spine
This peircing, biting, vibrating sensation
Inching ever closer towards serene mind
Feel it coming, coming, coming
Building up along it's journey
With one soul purpose,
Destroying fragile mind
Breath quickens, pulse races
Hands shake while eyes quake
The mind, final destination
For train of unknown design
Tracks along the nerves and tissue
Billowing clouds of mental ash
This mania, mania, mania
Thrash about, throw such beautiful elegance out
Ruin in it's wake
Train wreck upon the mind

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And up comes the maniac depresive phycopath with a chainsaw.

Don't we all just love monday mornings? ... :P

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Old 14th February 2006, 04:38   #2590
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Chainsaw eh? My monday wasn't that bad as a matter of fact, the weekend was slightly oblong though...
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: Stranger still
Quote:
With what we have
we forget the past
of forgotten pain
and unreasonable cast
what more can man
ask from this life
of what is truth
and waht is lie
I confuse myself with words again
only to stumble upon a grain
mighty is the ignorant sword
for all life ends with a dot.

this poem was compose while I was sleeping.

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Old 17th February 2006, 19:37   #2592
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I hate monday mornings it means chemistry, which means confusing, followed by art which means being tired and not bothering to do any work. *sigh* i hate fridays wanted to punch one of the guys in my class ahhh good timing 'bad day' by thet daniel guy has randomely started ot play on media player lol ironic. Anyway thought I'd pop down to wish you all a belated valentine and hope you are all well I'll pop back when I can be assed to write something remotley intresting!

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I love chemistry. ^^

Happy valentines day to you all as well. Expect another relationship soaked poem soon.
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Happy V Day ...

and I adore chemistry, love art and passionate about maths.

PS: I am a dork.

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Math if used correctly can be pretty damn romantic. I mean, all those X's have to add up sooner or latter.
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toast ... your brain is perverted.

i like.

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I personally love it...

I actually might finally post a poem. It's sitting up on my desk upstairs but I'm too lazy to go get it right now.
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: Plainly obvious
Quote:
No more excuses
let it all hang out
it aint the end of the world
if the world see you nude
what are we afraid off
fear of being vulnerable?
or just being ordinary.
we are who we are and thats it
if they don't like what they see
they can move tidly along
and leave me be
So what if the world ignores me
or that girls don't give me time
I can still breath
and that itself is a miracle
because I am still alive today
and they are somewhere out there
dead in a sea of memories
good bye friends of aristrocacy

This must be one of the few things that is stuck in my mind for some time because I wrote it all within a minute with only minor corrections to the words but not the meaning.

What does that say about me?
I like walking around nude? :P

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Fly away with me
Spread your mind into the sky
Fly away with me
Feel the wind upon your eyes
Just fly, fly away, with me
Far away across the sea
To a land were memory fades away
Just fly, no one needs to know
No one we need to tell
With me, just fly, into, our sky
They can't stop us, no one ever will
As long as we fly away
Without a care, without a thought
Simply off to fly away
Breeze upon our passing, drift amongst the clouds
Lost in a flying paradise
Just fly, fly away, with me
Into our beautiful azure sky


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Toast .... that is a beautiful lyric. :P

So where is the melody that should go with it.

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