Old 9th May 2002, 09:51   #441
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Well .. Alan, when you decide to educate me on my totally densed brain ... please do so subtly ... as it might break from too much wisdom ... ... joke .. joke ... .. as for the FEAR? ... .. it was the fear that I would have died without contributing anything significant to my short lived life.

Anthene ... yes ... one of my favourite female poets has comed back to us ... ... I love your new work. It is especially true with the only those that wants to see things can see the difference within our meager sights.

QHOBBES ... WELCOME to the club ... a very well written peace of poetry. By any chance is it RAP lyrics? ... because it certainly rythms quite well if you wish to make it so. And the fact is the rich kids ALWAYS gets the best of averything other than life itself ... ...

: The best and the better
Quote:
Might have said that I could do better
or should have it been I might have done worst
either one would have been just an excuse
to move away from the pain inside

Holding on to a broken dream
I swear I could still make it happend
yet reality sets in and my spirits drops
where is superman when you need one

So I settle for the smaller answers
to my bigger questions
ignoring my basic senses
that those are but lies and illusions

Then one summer day comes by
and I have come to see the simple facts
that nothing in life is ever easy
those that are important are worth our lives
and nothing less would have been enough
to quench the thirst of being right
just so we can all say
that we died without doubt in our eyes


got inspired by Anthene ...

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Old 9th May 2002, 14:25   #442
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I'm impressed with the creativity and talents of these writers, especially ones from the internet. I haven't written a poem in a week or so.

Blue skies and sunny days;
Overlooking a sunset bay;
Birds nesting in a tree;
Dropping shit all over me;
Covered in manure that is white;
I get hit in the head by a pink kite;
Rubbing my bruised head;
Got hit by a dude that was half dead;
Heading towards the ER;
Tripped over a homeless near a bar;
Suffering a broken nose;
Is this the life I chose?
Or am I on the verge of becoming a black rose;
Either way, I need stitches and a bath;
So get the fuck out of my path....

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Old 9th May 2002, 17:36   #443
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wow these are beautiful!

Can someone post for me a poem I can give to my guy? I live in Nevada and he's in NY, haven't seen him for 2 months, and good love/I miss you poems ?

Very much appreciated.
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Old 9th May 2002, 23:20   #444
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Against the L.A.W.

Lighting fireworks at the crack of dawn
Neighbors don't care, they just yawn
But when the police come in
It's as though we committed major sin
Lock us up and put us away
At least they made their quota, just another day

Sheriff Joe is a media whore
Having no friends must be a real boar
He came and the crime rate has risen
Why do you think we have the most populated prison? (True!)
He answers death threats like a phone call
Voters are the chain, he is the ball

Blame Hollywood for violence and sex
When half of our congress is rated X, X, X
Talk about peace in the Middle East
Bread equals violence, the Feds are the yeast
Drilling in Alaska will force oil spills
Big Tobacco's bribes will cover those bills

Curfew is major b.s.
Yes officer, that house is my address
Can I vote on laws that effect me?
No, pathetic fool! We decide rules for thee
You guys are full of red stars
Freedom of speech will land you behind bars

By: Lyle A. Wilson

izchan, no they ARE NOT RAP LYRICS. Just because it rhymes doesn't
mean it's RAP, I just write stuff that rhymes.
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Old 10th May 2002, 06:39   #445
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Welcome Blondie ... ... well fellows should we help the ladie?

Lee, another insight to the humorous way you see life is a real pleasure to me. That piece you write is really funny ... ...

QHOBBES, not RAP? well ... it felt like it to me when I read it, that's why I was curious. But none the less, a good portrayal of the lens you see the world in. A real treat indeed .. .. keep posting, dear friend, I would personally love to read more of your work.

Here is today's work ...
: Little thoughts of mine
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None but the silent surounds my life
even in the busy street
I am alone and sacred
reaching out trying to find my way again
seeking your touch to ease my pain

Too long has my life been empty
I wished that your hands upon my lips
telling me that tommorow will be better
and my illusions will break
where I will be in your life again

There are so much that I want to tell you
but words are just not enough
all that is left is I miss you
praying that you know my heart is true
and I await your sun to shine for me again
here at the other side of midnight


I don't think this will be suitable blondie but hey ... your call ..

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Old 14th May 2002, 11:26   #446
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After hearing a very bad motivation talk last night ... I went home to write this. Not my usually chirppy self but hey ... even GOD have his bad hair days ...

: Dreaming in a lullaby
Quote:
A penny for everytime I think of you
and I will be a zillion times richer
yet a penny for all the time you do
and I will be a tramp around the corner

My love for you is the one thing
that keeps my sanity here
for no logical reasons can comprehend
the pain I now endure

sometimes all I wished was a day
where you will look straight into my eyes
and trully mean the words you say
not some lyrics you heard from a song
I would gratefully die in that instant

Yet only in my dreams will that be true
for you will never love me so
your heart belongs to another soul
one that will never cherished your heart

So maybe we are not that unalike
for we both live in pain's delight
hurting ourself in the name of love
two fools dreaming througout the night

Finally I realize how much is wasted away
for a love that was never mine
merly illusions in my mind
nearly sold my soul to the blight
all these for a lie

Thus slowly I turn my head and breath again
a smile forming upon my weary face
suddely free of my inner fight
I am awaken from the lullaby
Then maybe someday you too will realize
your true love have just passed you by

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Old 14th May 2002, 14:18   #447
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I'm trying to get into the groove of writing funny and lovey dovey poems....but it's pretty hard...

Unbroken Love by Lee

My angel, thou still love thee,
Forever and whenever possible can be?
Hold me closer and care for thee,
So thou can love me.

Nurse me back to health,
And I'll return the favor with my
wealth,
Give me your attention and desires,
So I can make your heart burn like fire.

Bathe me in the sea,
Kissing gently all over me,
Can this love last forever?
Will this mean we'll live together?

Holding our hands together,
Feel thy warmth, getting better,
There won't be any goodbyes,
Because our love will never die.


Blondie: will this poem work??

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Old 14th May 2002, 20:01   #448
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My Own Blood by Lee

Struggling in a sea of my own blood;
Trying to stay together;
Against this massive flood,
.....Don't wanna get lost in it forever.

As I swim in this cesspool of red;
I believe I won't survive this onslaught;
I know that I'll drown and be dead,
But I won't give up, the beast must be fought.

Using all my strength and willpower,
But I soon lose as my fear grows and towers
Over everything....

I'm just a lost soul in my own blood,
Darkness surrounds it,
And I feel like shit,
I start to see the light,
I knew I have lost this fight,
A fight for survival;
A fight over inner strength,
I destroyed myself with the cold edge of a knife,
I await the arrival into the afterlife.

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Old 15th May 2002, 01:29   #449
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Easter Sunday, 2001 (Joey Ramone Tribute)

Everyone's doing the Blitzkrieg Bop
In the 70's, with hair like a mop
The KKK Took My Baby Away for good
You played punk music 1st, you could
Gimme Gimme Shock Treatment forever
But now it seems like never
I'm sick of all this Censorshit
Joey, you invented punk, you were "it"
Who is Sheena Is A Punk Rocker?
You're posters decorated my locker
We all attendead Rock 'N Roll High School
There, everyone was cool
You and I Wanna Be Sedated
Music never a #1, never rated
You're an Outsider, outside of everything
Now you and punk music are nothing
I'm no longer a Pinhead
But, Mr. Ramone, you're dead

By: Lyle Wilson

izchan ill give you the URL someother time
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Old 15th May 2002, 07:09   #450
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QHOBBES ... I have to really say this ... your poems are so lyrical ... ... I could almost hear the melody accompanying each word ... ... good job. The tribute was a nice gesture ...

Lee .. ... your poems are always and going to stay that way ... unique to your own sense of what the world is. No matter much you try to put LOVE into it .. ... which you do ... ... it always seem to sound gothic to me ... ... but hey ... anyone with an EVIL in his nick can very much write the bloodiest poem and still say LOVE in a nice way ... ... good job ...

: Mothers day
Quote:
Never had I ever expected
the truth that was always there
when you took your hand away
I knew that I would cry again

I wished there was another way
to hold you in my life today
but somehow GOD had a different plan
and it does not have you in there

So now alone in this complex world
thinking of your simple smile
I hope I too will learn to be
a mother and friend to my child
for you have taught me well
my shinning star
my mother
my smile
something for my mom, as she is now with GOD.
Amen.

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Old 15th May 2002, 14:14   #451
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izchan...you have a good choice of words in your poems...I love it...

Lone Flower by Lee
May 15 2002

Small misty dew drops
Drips off a rose petal
And falls on cold hard metal.

A lone flower in a cold world,
Thorns grasp the threads of life,
Pierced through the void like a knife.

Petals, gray and pale;
Against the cold north wind,
Shaking furiously, from limb to limb.

It stands here waiting to die,
Hoping that they help him
To close these sad eyes.

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Wasting away in the horrid cesspool of life,
I want to end it all with a knife,
Cut it deep into my skin,
And cleanse me from my sins.
Take the blood and drink it down,
Turn my smile into a frown,
Make me feel worthless and a nobody,
Obliterate and destroy my dead body,
Cut it up and toss it around,
Hit me hard and throw me to the ground,
Death could be so much fun;
But I'm too lazy to go through that,
As you might know I'm fat,
So let me end it with my shotgun.

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Old 17th May 2002, 00:57   #453
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Empty Cafe

You never forget a building
Painted in a true red color
Claiming the gray and empty street
While the tiny chairs and table
Stand guard against no one
Not like it used to be
When the chairs and table were warmed and worn
By something other than the sun
By words and whispers flowing across the tabletop
Or the hand of a quiet man,
Only wishing to see the lives of others
Passing by, while his world stops
Or a man and a woman
And their wordless coversations
Still echoing up and down the street:
The home of the red haven,
A place of the warm shroud of oblivion.

This is the picture that I took that this poem is about. I wrote it for my mom on Mother's Day so it could go along with the framed picture I gave her.
"Empty Cafe"

Neargh.
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Kali-itous 2: An Academic Epidemic

Kan’t seem to get that girl out of mind
And she seems so sweet and kind
Life without her would be like hell
I would rather just be a single cell

She’s not perfect, she’s just right
Like heaven, she’s the white light
Why, oh why do I like her?
Before this my life was a simple blur

10 years, 20 years, where will I be?
Maybe then I’ll see her face on the TV
She’s the best disease I ever done had
She makes me so happy, so f-ing glad

I don’t care if we do never talk
Maybe some day we’ll just walk...
Forever and for never, just to the very end
Will she ever be my girlfriend..?

You are welcome to try
To get me to say my “good-bye”
I’ll always like this chick
She’s just like magic, like a card trick

Now this is coming to a close
So I’ll hand her a single red rose
In hopes of a immunity shot
Because, oh God, is she hot!

By: Lyle Wilson
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Old 17th May 2002, 03:07   #455
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QHOBBES, I am impressed by your rhyming skillz. Maybe you should turn some of your poems into songs...

Scsw, that's a sweet poem dedicated to your mother...keep it up


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Running Away by Lee
May 16 2002

Running away from my troubles,
Hiding in the corner sobbing tears,
Hoping someone would calm my fears,
Instead my mind would crumble.
Underneath the pressure of my pain,
Squinting out tears, falls like rain;
It hurts so much inside,
Knowing that you have lied,
I want the pain to end,
And never wanting it to happen again,
To be forced into this lair,
Locked into my own despair,
All I wanted was to be cared for,
But you bounded me to the floor,
Knocked unconscious by your words,
Powerful tones of anger and hate,
I was just felt so used,
Beaten black & blue, abused;
I want to run away from here,
To get away from my fears,
So I can finally and peacefully die,
To silence my cries.
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Old 17th May 2002, 03:11   #456
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skillz? thatz newz to me!
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Old 17th May 2002, 03:20   #457
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You got l33t rhyming skillz
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Stone Face by Lee


As I sit on a lonesome rock, weeping solemnly;
Looking towards the dark skies,
Tears shedding from my eyes;
Black like night, as I hang my head sadly.

My soul cries for love, it wants some TLC;
It bangs against the bars of hell,
Trying to break through, but it never fell,
Giving up, tears welling up inside of me.

I now sit here and cry my sad tears;
Black and tainted drops fall,
I soon turn to stone, having no fears;
For now I stand tall.

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Old 17th May 2002, 05:24   #458
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MrMagick and I were wondering if anyone would mind (if we could find a way) if we put all of these into a book format? I know that Poetry.com has a book publishing link....thats not cheap though{ $674.00 for 15 hardback books}. Just a strange thought from us.
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Thanks, Lee!

I enjoyed your poem very much. It's quite sad, but beautifully written.

And I LOVE the Goo Goo Dolls! They're one of my favorite bands.

Neargh.
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there you are,
with eyes so blue.
all i want,
is to be with you.
look into my eyes
and see much cheer,
because when im with you,
there is no fear.
all i want
is someone to care.
and without you,
i just could not bare.
it doesnt even matter
that your eyes arent blue.
because all that matters
is that im with you
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Old 17th May 2002, 20:38   #461
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*wow*

thank you very much for those love poems, I printed them out, very much thanks!!!
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You're welcome Blondie Girl..

Red that poem was a tear gusher...*sobs* great love poem

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[B]In My Arms Tonight{/B] by Lee

As I cuddle your body,
In my arms tonight
I'm glad I rather have you than nobody,
In my arms tonight.

As I hear your soft voice,
In my arms tonight.
I'm glad I get to hear it, let's rejoice..
In my arms tonight.

As your eyes twinkle under the moon,
In my arms tonight.
We lean closer to kiss ever so soon,
In my arms tonight.
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To A Wishing Star.... by Lee
(sonnet)
Twinkling in the moonlight, eyes like sapphires,
Ev'time I see you, my heart burns like fire.
Throughout the land and sea, across the world
Over the vast mountains and through the trees.
I only find you under a spring tree.
Your inner beauty and long brownish hair
cannot match the other brunettes over there.
Your voluptious sexy red lips and smile,
Something that I haven't seen for a while.
You are everything to me, Wishing Star
I could buy you diamonds, even a car...
Many other gifts and nice luxuries,
But this is all about love and desire
Only for yours and mine to be admired....
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Two love poems to cherish

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Shatto ... ... poetry.com had published some of my poems before, but I have never baught a single one of them.

If you like to put those poems that I wrote into a book, just let me know which one you will be taking and when plus where will it be published. You can take it, but I just need you to notify me on what you are doing.

As for the others, you have to obtain their agreement to print those works. So for those who will like to help these guys out, please get a black and white copy of that request ok?

Shatto, you can mail your request to me in izchan@yahoo.com ... ok?

Here is something for today ...

: Incident life
Quote:
As green fields spans my gaze,
I feel like a speck in the world
nothing will change around us
even if I ceased to exists

Yet that is not what I wish my life to be
that insignificant dust in the wind
I would love to make a difference
in this life that is me

so up and away I will go
striving my steps to the road
changing one man at a time
and bath in the pure light
strange poem that I wrote when I woke up this morning.
did not know where it came from, but it is still on my note book.
go figre.

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Square Root of Negative One Divided by Zero, The

All we really ever have is nothing
And impossible equals everything
More is less and less is more
These things always turn out to be a boar

Nada es necesito
Esa, un Coke, y un burrito
Perfection is such a load of crap
Never satisfied, these people just need a nap

Always move forward, never straight
Take the back alley and jump the gate
"Go ahead and cheat a friend...
You can justify it all in the end"

Fighting fire with fire will do...
Nothing! Do we ever learn anything new?
Don't respect my author-i-tay!
Good drone, you did learn, hip hip hooray *sigh*

Life is the only thing you can ever really lose
Yet we spend most of it just taking a snooze
I don't ever want to see you dead
"Peace on Earth was all it read"

Now absolutely nothing makes sense
It just keeps on getting less and less dense
But we'll still be having loads of fun
Cause all you need is one

=Error

by Zero Lyle Wilson
Quotes from "One Tin Soldier", used without permission, 3/24 of this
poem copyright it's respective owner.
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Old 19th May 2002, 18:09   #465
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Hope

Blond hair, blue eyes
starlight, twilight
Teardrops falling softly
pale lips tremble slightly
Old terrors fading,
New beginnings blooming.

Ebony skies
Twilight dies
Night cries startle
fears shimmer brightly
Children running swiftly
Terror chasing quickly
Nowhere is safe.

Light ahead, shinning bright
Arms outstretched, clasping close.
Terror stops dead in its tracks
turns and flees.
Safe now, new beginnings
A new family.....home.

Casey Faye


I'd been having a reacurring dream about this. Probably cause I want to adopt a little girl(when we can afford it).
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Old 20th May 2002, 05:27   #466
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Here's one I wrote in grade 10. (a long time ago)

Running On...

How can you say
That's what I
Thought is a
Feeling in the dark of
Night is a scary
Time doesn't
End is just the
Beginning to
Understand what I'm trying to
Say what you
Want some of
This can't be
Right is the opposite of
Left on the right
football is the only real
sport a fine set of
teeth are for
Biting a chunk out of
Life at the end of time
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welcome telinstryata, it is always nice to have a new member join us. your poem has a sense of pureness that is quite interesting. Somethng that we all loose at one time or another. maybe Someday I can look upon that trueness again and sing its tune.

QHOBBES. Mathematical Genius ... . That is all that comes to mind. How you can say the same things i did and still tell a far different story is amazing. Always a treat to read your works

Shatto ... well ... a child ... is it. contribution to the world it is. May light shine on you always. (too much star wars, causes me to speak yoda like)

Anyway, here is my two cents for today.

: Story of life
Quote:
With my broken fingers
I type my life
in slow keystrokes it begins
into words and then sentences
ultimately a story of me

Some say that life is but a dream
yet a dream is still ours to keep
why whould I forsake the one gift
that was given and not taken from him
blame not the dreamless sleeper
but the thief of destiny
succumb into its monarchy
we become but slaves to the stones of glitter

so with eyes wide shut
we move into the light
afraid of the pureness that will burn
even at the gates in heaven
we fear the most is Hell's Wrath
never trully understanding the truth
in which only a fool can tell
for a fool knows the simplistics works
of enjoying and cherishing life
and life will then embrace us into its arms
broke my finger yesterday in an accident. Now slowly healing.

Hope you guys like this.

Sometimes it is just being me that counts
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Old 20th May 2002, 06:31   #468
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hey all. isaac, i really liked incident life, something about it, maybe some purpose i lack. but, i'm really sorry about your fingers; how'd that happen? and how long will it take for them to be mostly operable again ? nothing new for me today, i havn't written in a long time, and nothing really comes anymore. oh well, it'll pass, i hope. in the meantime, i'll just post every once in a while.

that untitled poem i wrote a while ago is still that way. i'll keep y'all updated.

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beautiful... keep them coming! I wish I knew how to write poems...
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i would venture to say that you probalby could if you tried, and that in all likelyhood we'd encourage you to try

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Old 22nd May 2002, 04:45   #471
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broke my finger while I was trying to save my sink from falling onto my foot.



as for blondie ... writing a poem and telling a story is no different. it is a matter of putting words onto pictures in our mind and heart. Most of the time, it does not even come close to the reality of what we see, but it is close enough than nothing at all.

here is todays work

: A little different now
Quote:
Might be a different world
if I did not walk down that boulavard
if I did not stop for that sunday paper
and I did not lay my eyes on you that way

Things might not have mattered
if I did not make myself breath again to live
if i did not pray to GOD for this chance
and I did not make every one of my bones to move to you

complexity is now simple
because I can't think pass you
because my life surrounds your need
and because my life is now complete


Am I in love? or am I sick? .. don't know ... but was there ever a difference?

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Old 26th May 2002, 04:03   #472
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I wrote these a while ago probably about 6 months ago im not sure... they arnt really that good or my best but, Im just posting them to post them:

Before:

She was hurt and no one could help
Everyone just walked on by
She tried to be nice and stand out
But no one ever notice her
No one cared
They told her she was ugly
They told her she was fat
They hit her; they raped her
She told people but no one listen
And if someone did they persecuted her
Everything was her fault
She couldn’t have done anything to help
So what was she to do?
First she tried to hurt herself
To make the pain inside disappear
She wanted to end it all
She was going to...
She tried pushing everyone away
So not to hurt them
Like they had hurt her
She was useless.
Just when she tried
Something or someone intervened


Then:

This person walked into her life
She thought he was the greatest thing
Little did she know he was hurt inside
Much like she was
She wanted to make him happy
She did all she could
Then she found out the truth
She had not known this before
What she had thought
Turned to be something else
So she decided to back off
And let what was be again
Then maybe her dream will come back
But for now she will go back into the hole
The place she was before she knew him


So Now:

She is going back to the way she was
She doesn't want to share her feelings
Just like before
She gets hurt every time she does
Her eyes light up when she sees him
But he doesn’t notice that
There is so for him to worry about
So he had a reason not to notice
He means everything to her
But I don't think he sees it
Even if he does see it
She wants for him not to worry
Her feelings will be better off untold
At least until a later date
For if she lets him know now
It would be the most foolish thing
For all she wants now is for him to love her
To love her on his own


Future

She can not see what will happen
So she will hide what is inside
He needs to want her on his own
For her to want to be with him
She doesn't want to share him
With longings for past loves
But she will wait until her is ready
Ready for just her to love
If he never returns to her
She will know inside
It was better to let him go
Than to keep him in pain
The pain of the question "What If?"
And if he returns
The answer would have been satisfied
And they could go on
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Old 27th May 2002, 04:01   #473
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Very thought out poem Athene..and I can relate to that in a man's POV of that poem. I was in that situation a few months back but now I have completely turned it around towards the good side of things...great poem
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Running Away by Lee

Running away from my troubles,
Hiding in the corner sobbing tears,
Hoping someone would calm my fears,
Instead my mind would crumble.
Underneath the pressure of my pain,
Squinting out tears, falls like rain;
It hurts so much inside,
Knowing that you have lied,
I want the pain to end,
And never wanting it to happen again,
To be forced into this lair,
Locked into my own despair,
All I wanted was to be cared for,
But you bounded me to the floor,
Knocked unconscious by your words,
Powerful tones of anger and hate,
I was just felt so used,
Beaten black & blue, abused;
I want to run away from here,
To get away from my fears,
So I can finally and peacefully die,
To silence my cries.

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Old 27th May 2002, 04:03   #474
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Old 27th May 2002, 04:25   #475
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Letting Go by Lee


Falling away from my despair,
Into the epitomy of eternal happiness,
Leaving my personal hell without a care,
Letting go of my sadness.

Never wanting to turn back,
Never wanting to return,
I just want this all to burn,
And to turn black.

Forgotten memories returning,
Exploring my surroundings, learning;
How to live a good life without any trouble,
Burying my sadness in a dark puddle.

Now I'm looking towards the sky,
Blue and sunny, let out some tears,
Toss away any fears,
Let your soul free, let it fly.

Loving myself in every way,
Knowing that I'll never hate,
I know I'm going to be okay,
Cause it's never too late
To start all over with new look,
Sounds like a tale from a book,

Letting go of my sadness,
Falling away from my despair,
And entering eternal happiness.

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Old 27th May 2002, 04:43   #476
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Don't go...
Goodbye.

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izchan, thanks for your comments

For You

This poem is for anyone
From New York to The Valley of The Sun
For the students, the rich, and the bums
To the hip-hoppers and the chums

If you have ever been stabbed in the back
You know the feeling, you feel like jack
There is no more trust
You were broken as easily as piecrust

If you have been made someone’s ex
Don’t know what to do, don’t know what is next
You feel like shit and suicide
The grass is always greener on the other side

If you have ever lost a loved one
Sit around and cry a ton
They are in a better place now
Never forget them and make a vow

If you have ever been screwed by a teacher
God, some seem like a mythical creature
They can all be a pain in the ass
You just wanna ditch their stupid class

These last statements are for anyone who’s perfect
I hate you and got next to no respect
Dickhead, fuck face, self-righteous whore
On the way out, your ass, kicked, by the door

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To all those that have a part in this ... this is for you all.

: unsaid intentions
Quote:
seeing you in these eyes of mine
there is nothing else that I can say
other than the angels that you are
my life becomes brigther because of you

Reasons are but words
trying to emitate my feelings now
no painter can come close
to the prefectness I see in my mind

so now I write this
saying nothing but all that is in me
hoping agains odds that you can understand
all the feelings I have for you to see
you are my passion
you have remade me


Thank you all.

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Old 30th May 2002, 10:00   #479
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Hello people ...

: If
Quote:
If there is a word with power
that word is you

If there is a word with commitment
that word is we

If there is a word I wish to forget
that word is I

If there is a wish I love to meet
that would be life
not technically a poem, but hey, it works, no?

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Old 30th May 2002, 11:51   #480
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Here's some stuff i did for my ezine, it's not very good, but you might like it in some small way, cute?


The neandothol behind me
By steak

Theres a neandothol behind me,
i think he has no brain,
he feels that air and oxygen,
are simpley just the same,

He really is a top class primate,
it shows ultimatley in his talking,
if you were to know him, you'd feel,
he's nothing compared to steven halkin.

Theres a neandothol behind me,
he has no sony walk-man,
so he makes do with tsshing his voice,
like a halk trapped inside a tin can.

The god of idiots would be proud,
they've really created a masterpiece,
they must have taken months,
to put this guy together spliece by spliece.

People like that disgust me,
Sometimes i wish they wear'nt alive,
I feel the world would be a happier place,
if only they would just die

i know though, deep down in my brain
that i do not choose the fate of them
i know that we are very diffrent
and maybe they wish for me to condem

But i don't care, i really don't,
because i still feel bad,
it doesn't matter really that much,
he still really makes me mad.

And in the end thats all that matters
your own thoughts, not theres
if you were in their bodys,
you'd probally not like thier hares

and:

Ode to coco the cat
By steak

It must be hard on you,
my dear sweet co-co,
doing nothing all day,
your such a beat do-do.

eating, sleeping,
walking, exploring,
purring and squealing,
doing nothing that’s boring.

You find a nice spot,
all hot in the sun,
and just sit there all day,
soaking up the fun.

You do what you feel like,
pure-ly for the heed,
your such a little tyke,
that is the life I need.

At night you hunt,
and torment your pray,
and run and jump and hop,
and play.

You can see all the things,
moving on the floor,
they cannot escape,
your ultra-fast paw.

to be a cat.
to be a cat.

must be hard.


and one i like from my friend phoenix:

The Whole Story
By pheonix

We'll start our story at the end,
go on to the middle then back again,
but a story with no beginning
is more than I can bear
so we'll go back to the finish
and start our story there.


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