Old 3rd January 2006, 10:51   #1
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Thumbs up My First pack - Prerelease

ITs about half done as of now - a 4 more presets are in the works, and i still have to tweak some of these (and think up a name for UNTITLED)
Any Comments would help me immensly.
Anyway - Here it is
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Old 3rd January 2006, 23:36   #2
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Cool pack, some very nifty ideas and styles in here, im pretty sure i'll have to steal atleast some of them to use myself

My favourites of the pack are as follows:

Black Kandy
The convolution and color fade create a very nice mellow effect, but the preset lacks some serious music response, though i don't think you can even apply it very well to this kind of presets.

Central
I quite like this one, but the on-beat pumping doesn't fit in my opinion or at the very least tone it down a bit.

Never Strikes Twice
Hands down one of the coolest lightning scopes i've seen ever, gotta steal that from you.

Sparkle
Ooh, shiny and somewhat original too only bad thing is the music response which could use some tweaking.


Well, for a first pack this is definetly a good collection, but i think you need to focus a bit more on the reaction side of the preset in the future. Most of these presets seemed to work the same no matter what kind of music you were playing.

Well, keep up the good work

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Old 4th January 2006, 02:44   #3
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Very good stuff. I think that as far as reaction goes, you're fine (I dont listen to very beaty music ). The colors and such are really good, too.

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Old 4th January 2006, 03:31   #4
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Thanks Tugg, and JFASI. I'll try and tweak the response before the release -
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Old 4th January 2006, 06:53   #5
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For a first pack, this is quite good!

As Tugg mentioned I think you need to focus more on your response, because so far it seems you have a rather good style-- the presets are very pleasing visually-- but they do become a bit repetative.

Anyway, my favorites include Black Kandy, Evil Eye (If you only slowed it down a bit, this would be a pretty sweet flow.), Flurry, Power, Sparkle, and Untitled (Which could use just a little fix up with the background, e.g. change the coordinates to 16 X 16 and zoom in, and perhaps add a bit of rotation or even a scatter in an effect list before the interleave with adjustable blends on the input and output.).

But again, this is a rather good pack. And at only 13, you should have some grand ideas and visuals to present to us in the future! Keep it up!

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Old 4th January 2006, 07:44   #6
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13 years old work? Not bad, but mostly great .

Great Work
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Black Kandy
Holy shit, what can I say bout this.. It's really cool preset and such of simple. The convolution on the top works as well and produce nice spread effects.

Flurry
One of my favourite.. Nemo's style.

INTRO
Uh, I've tried it before and it came up such like you done here.

Organized Chaos
Such a great techno preset. It's killing me



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Old 4th January 2006, 12:34   #7
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Old 4th January 2006, 12:38   #8
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Also, If anyone could do a remix for me to add to my pack - i would appreciate it
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Old 4th January 2006, 12:54   #9
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i'll have to steal atleast some of them to use myself
If your stealing from me - can I steal your water reflection effect from here here little jellyfish for my half-done electric eel preset? PLZ

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Old 4th January 2006, 14:03   #10
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Well when i say steal, i mean the idea, i never directly use components of others (unless remixing of course) I just can't understand other peoples codes.

But i think i've stated in my comments what you can or can not do with my presets, just give credit and you're all clear.

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Old 4th January 2006, 15:02   #11
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Saw the pack yesterday, was amazed but had to go, so now here's my big comment for this great first pack:

-PYW [goo mix]
up:nice mix,
down:but the main effect is still from DasNoob, so not one of my favs

-Black Candy
up:gooey, yummy, the best b/w preset I've seen in a while! I'm not that much into b/w but this one is a +fav.
down:beat response only

-Central
up: good oldschool preset, really good trip factor
[could use more colors for my taste, though]
down: gets too bright sometimes [although my music became mellow at one time], beat response only

-Evil eye
up: very good flow, simply a joy to watch
down: colors a little too much colormap shine, beat response only [I'm copypasting now]

-Flurry
did that came from the "macOS flurry screensaver?" thread?
up: if, well done! if not, well done + good idea great preset, +fav! did you write the rotation by yourself?
down: beat response only

-Intro
after having seen Flurry I thought: how old may he be? and was quite stunned when I read 13... you've got some skills for your age, looks promising!
up: funny sphere
down: overall apperance to RGBish imo
tips: ~second Movement is useless I think and thus the AddBorder too, simply set the sphere in the 1st Movement a bit bigger [d = if(above(d,.42),... or sth like that].
~and the super scopes could do with only n=2 since the z-dependent linesize is hardly visible with such little rotation and you'd avoid the ugly line-jittering.
~an intro doesn't need to be responsive but let's do it here: in the texer you could've used getosc() to have a random but music dependent positioning of the dots.

-Lifted
up: good coloring, icy look, music response is better here. +fav
down: nothing I could spot

-Mecurys Rising
up: v cool flame and ice effect you've created here!
down: the object in the middle disturb though, looks like you had a good idea, but the grey thing didn't quite turn out that good

-Never strikes twice
up: nothing to say - awsome bolt effect!
at first I thought you used the grassfield from ShockValue's football preset and looked for the DynaMove but found none and then I saw you made it with movements alone!
down: although you have some good effects here I couldn't watch this for some time to enjoy, couse it still needs some style tweaking [this shouts for a remix ]

-Organized Chaos
up: a very good rendition of a SimpleAsPossible preset +fav
downs: none

-Power
up: metaballs, flow, mosaic, interleave. long story short: you pulled about every old trick to create a pleasing and +favable preset!
down: response is ok, but could be better

-Sparkle
up: fast 'n stylish, good movements, response is ok,
down: [though only volume]

-Strands
up: quite nice 3d movement/distortion imo
down: standard coloring

-Trailer
up: though the concept is known, a preset that hugged my eyes! +fav
down: beat response only

-Untitled
uncertain about this one, a bit color tweaking maybe...


Yeah, all in all really good pack!
work on your music response and most of all keep making presets!
I'll maybe do a remix or two...

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Old 5th January 2006, 02:41   #12
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Thanks - and BTW I didn't mean to include Power, it was one of the regects (but now I think I will)
:edit: And Kar-ma - Flurry, was made before that thread (the version I posted then was another colour style I chose before coming back to this

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Old 6th January 2006, 11:19   #13
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Wow, great pack.. How long are you into AVS now?

faves:
evil eye
never strikes twice (that feedback needs some work though)
organized chaos
power
sparkle (!)

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Old 6th January 2006, 15:23   #14
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[B]13 years old work? Not bad, but mostly great .
Actually I'm 12, (i'll probably be 13 by the time its released though)



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Wow, great pack.. How long are you into AVS now?
About 2-3 months

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Old 6th January 2006, 19:18   #15
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Last call for any remixes (the full pack is fisnished, I'll compile the installer in a couple of days)
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Old 6th January 2006, 23:08   #16
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Wow! 13? Three months?

I've been doing AVS for 1 year and I'm sixteen and I still don;t get the same results
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Old 7th January 2006, 00:44   #17
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Kudos to you then, karma

1 remix for you...

Be careful with it as I don't remix much usually
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Old 7th January 2006, 13:09   #18
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awesome presets for a first pack. love your style here. although i'm not into making presets now anymore but your work makes me feel like getting back into AVS


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Old 8th January 2006, 03:20   #19
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WOTL - wow! nice mix! I love the colour, and that rotation bar DM. The whole thing kinda looks a bit like Frames of reality, but not.
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Old 8th January 2006, 04:17   #20
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Power reminded me a bit of framey's work, as well. Again, this is a very good little pack. I hope to see more from you!

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Old 8th January 2006, 08:28   #21
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Old 8th January 2006, 12:44   #22
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small bugfix
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Old 8th January 2006, 23:45   #23
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I'll Upload it to DA (and here) as soon as i can get pimpbot to work
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Old 9th January 2006, 15:05   #24
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If you're going to steal something, at least try and change the coding a little, jeez.

code:
Texer2 code from Fireworks, from my Second Pack

n=1; rx1=(rand(200)-0.01)*0.001;

ax=ax+rx1*0.3;
ax1=ax1+sin(ax)*0.6;
gx1=getspec(0,0,0)*2;
x1=x1+gx1*cos(ax1)*0.2;
y1=y1+gx1*sin(ax1)*0.2;
x1=if(above(x1,1),-1,x1);
y1=if(above(y1,1),-1,y1);
x1=if(below(x1,-1.01),1,x1);
y1=if(below(y1,-1.01),1,y1);
wh=w/h;

rx1=rand(100)*0.001;

x=x1;
y=y1*wh;
green=0.6;
blue=0.6;
red=0.6;

code:
Scope code from "Sparkle"

n=1; rx1=(rand(200)-0.01)*0.001;x1=0;y1=0

ax=ax+rx1*0.3;
ax1=ax1+sin(ax)*0.6;
gx1=getspec(0,0,0);
x1=x1+gx1*sin(ax1)*0.2;
y1=y1+gx1*cos(ax1)*0.2;
x1=if(above(x1,1),-1,x1);
y1=if(above(y1,1),-1,y1);
x1=if(below(x1,-1.01),1,x1);
y1=if(below(y1,-1.01),1,y1);
wh=w/h;

rx1=rand(100)*0.001;

x=x1;
y=y1*wh;
;sizex=w*0.005;sizey=sizex (?)


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Old 9th January 2006, 15:11   #25
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God damn it karma, why did you have to do something stupid like that

I will take that permission to use my stuff back, you can not use any of my presets or their components for your own creations ever.

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It looks pretty though, call it a remix and go crazy. Just don't take credit you don't deserve. *shrug*

I'm highly suspicious of every other bit of code now though.

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Old 9th January 2006, 23:15   #27
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Sorry

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[B]If you're going to steal something, at least try and change the coding a little, jeez.
Sorry, I gave you credit once I started commenting on them, but I should have given you credit for it before then too. And I've scrapped your code and wrote my own movement. SORRY. SORRY. SORRY.
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Old 9th January 2006, 23:45   #28
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This is going to be a good one...

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Old 10th January 2006, 01:53   #29
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Its uploaded now http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/27480412/

It will be on winamp.com as soon as its reviewed
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Old 12th January 2006, 07:36   #30
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Old 12th January 2006, 12:14   #31
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