Old 4th March 2003, 02:05   #721
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: Frictions of the mind


wrote this in McDonald this morning, while looking at a 5 year old playing. It made me wonder, and so I wrote it down.

hope you enjoy it.

see ya all later.
Wow, i really like that. I dig the philosophically edged poems. Here is one that is on the same lattitude if not longitude:

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Old 4th March 2003, 04:33   #722
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Great poem Orgone Man!
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Forgotten by Lee

Cast down into the pits of this realm,
Air smells foul, a river flows swift,
All around, lies a wasted land,
Filled with the screams of the dead.

Haplessly wandering the darkened path,
Seeing the horrors only found in a hellish dream,
A nightmare so unreal,
Butt, I have yet to wake up.

Talking to these unknowns seem to lead me nowhere,
Their sullen faces, hollowed in by the weariness,
Speaking to me with hoarse whispers,
And then crumble to the ground like dust.

It said:

"The longer you stay,
Your memories will fade,
Becoming a nonexistent soul,
Your days here will grow old."

Chilled by his last words,
Hoping he would say something more,
About a way out of here,
Only muttering,
"Your beginning to the end...is near".

Walking on to a cliff,
Down below, a horrid sight to see,
A river flowing with the damned,
Trying not to picture that it could be me.

Hope is around the corner though,
On the other side there lies a portal,
To where it may lead, I'm sure it's better than here,
Making a running leap of faith...

**POOF**

I opened my eyes,
Did I make it?

I hear the few words in the background
That would later find out my fate...

"Your son has been in a horrid car accident with another driver that was very drunk.
His status is not very good, he has permanent brain damage, and is slowly losing consciousness as we speak"

"Your son is suffering greatly, his body will succumb to the fatal injuries and pass on....I'm sorry"

With that last sentence, I slowly lose grip of my life,
Bright lights appear and a portal opens,
I leave the real world with a smile upon my face,
Only to step into this godforsaken place....again.

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Old 4th March 2003, 05:32   #723
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Hey everybody.
Everyone’s poems are awesome
I love reading them all.

I'm currently working on this huge poem but it's not done. So I thought, because I haven't written a poem for a while, that I'd better put a filln' till I'm finished my real project - Because of this the filln' poem is not the best and sounds more like a statement than a poem. Therefor, I will understand if you do not like it.

So, here it is:
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Friend

You were built for me
and I was built for you
Because I am free
Free enough to travel this far
To see you
Because were free
Me and you
Why do I know this?
Because we both can dream
So cross-over the Mountains
And we'll travel together
We'll sit by the rocky stream
Where the shyful pastures meet the sun
Why do we journey together?
Because were family
I won't let you bleed
I won't let you die
Because were family
How do I know this?
Because we both can dream
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It's ok if you don't like it
It's not my best work

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Old 4th March 2003, 05:52   #724
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I just whipped this out in a fit of utter over-complacency.

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Old 4th March 2003, 08:53   #725
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Knight Fairy. Its not bad. Will like to see the finished work soon.

Orgone. ... yes I definately likePreferable peak.

Here is something that you made ME think ...


:Age
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What is age
I was asked by a boy
to some might say
it is death cometh now
yet strangely I believe
that there is more to it
for age seems to be
my path to redemption

In my eyes
age is but an indicator
of how far I need to go
the larger the number
the closer I am to freedom

But most significant of all
age seems to me
to be marker of my travels
it is as if when I was born
I was flung far from home
only by traveling back this path
would I smell the flowers of peace again
age then becomes my journey home


Chew on this. Wrote it in a hurry.

Talk to you guys tommorow.

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Old 6th March 2003, 07:50   #726
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Great philosophy on Aging Iz! Liked it alot!
Here's my contribution: it's a poem/pic project im workin on. I got the words now..just got to add it to the pic!
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Fade To Black III by Lee

A lonely teardrop equals a million sorrows,
It hurts to remember it clearly like it was yesterday,
But my life changed drastically and fell away,
Only to look forward to a painful tomorrow.

I only see what's the outcome in these dreams,
A handful of lies being told,
And the reflection of my soul screams,
As it lies there naked and cold.

I bow down thy head in grief,
What has befouled my very existence,
That changes the color of my skin like a leaf,
Hope lies in the furthest distance.

Continuous changes take over me,
I'm beginning to fade,
Ending only in the murky 'black',
The place where I was made.

Fading....fading...into the eternal waters,
Never to rise again...but only leaving a partial goodbye,
Reflections arise of me every night,
But disappear upon the morning light.

May only tears my fall to the ground,
Leaving only the slightest sound,
Each equals a million sorrows,
Hopefully my day will be better tomorrow.

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Old 6th March 2003, 08:59   #727
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Can't wait to see what the pic is ...

I wonder. How many people actually still visit our pages. Has the thread grown so large that it no longer garners attention from new members?

it is after 19 pages now. And reading through the whole thread does seem to be a task by itself. And yet strangely I feel the need to read it all over again. maybe it is just my monthly "fallout" syndrom ... .. the the bad pizza that I ate last night.

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Boxes of memories
block my view ahead
as if the past had a grudge
grumbling inside my head
silent whispers that haunt my dreams
promising things on confusing thoughts
am I going crazy
why do I fall
when answers lay bare for me
able to see them all

So no reasons left
no where to run
no longer fun
I ask for it to end
so that I might start fresh again


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Old 6th March 2003, 10:10   #728
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Surprisingly enough..izchan...you are indeed a dedicated Poet of Winamp...cuz most of your posts are in this thread only..never seen you post anywhere else

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Old 7th March 2003, 03:10   #729
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Ah the reason for that is that I post only when I feel the urge to speak or to clarify on other threads. It is hard enough that the members are getting quite worked up over the discussion we have, that I do not wish to make them feel as if their oppinions are not good. I just wished to have decent talks where individuals can express themselves without feeling being victimized.

True, my voice has been a little quiet for sometime.
I use to post quite often on another long thread, which is the first one I participated in this forum. Actually ... ... I have atleast 100+ post that is from that thread alone.

Anyway. Will try to move out more, just so that people know that i am still here.

: Hush words
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Being silent over the years
have trained me to be more thoughtful
spying the small things in life
I better understand its potentials
not wishing to make things worst than it is
I speak only with my heart open
even then we still get hurt
over the fact that we are mortal
on the facts that we can all be wrong

So mistakes made are then forgotten
yet trully I only wished to be forgiven
so I keep these thoughts of mine
bottled up within the genie's shrine
hoping that one day will come
when someone will rub it
wishing to know the truth behind
all the lies that we live in
for the secrete of the devine life
is the ability to differentiate
the cruel and the benign


talk to you all later.

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Old 7th March 2003, 03:27   #730
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I can relate to "hush words" sometimes. The first half sums up how I feel when "out in the world" and not in the security of "at home" or "around friends". Good stuff.

This next one of mine is to be read as if someone finds a written dialogue between two people and begins to read it.


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Old 7th March 2003, 04:00   #731
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Old 8th March 2003, 15:07   #733
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Hey guys Jedi's back Sorry I haven't posted in a while but heres some of my latest work-

Death

Death has perceived me
To my last drop of blood
I sit here in darkness
Surronded by misty air
My future is foggy
My past is shrouded in forgotten memory
I can see my present up to my finger tips
The rest is a total mystery of tommorow.

Death has perceived me
For the whole of my life
I stand by the waters edge
It beckons me
I wade in to find it cold and harsh
The riddles of the deep question me
I don't know how to dispute their debrief.

Death has perceived me
Its walked all my steps
I kneel in the earth
Drowning in rain
I aprehedn my future still
My past is lost in the raining shower
Which has sunk to low for the roots of memory to soak
My presents wet with sorrow.

Death has perceived me
Its been in every shadow
I crouch by a burning flame
It calls my name
I dare not put my hand any closer
But I better think again
A force pushes me
I'm burning in hell.

Strive On

My happiness is vanquished
In an evapouration of dreams
I don't understand
What my life means
I know it means something but what?
Sure shit happens but we still strive on
To get the gold at the end of the rainbow
Thats why we endeavour the worst
Knowing we can never hit rock bottom
So we'll stand on the rocks and the bad times will pass
Nothing lasts forever other than love
Just remember I'm here for you
If you can't suceed alone
We'll suceed together
And keep hold of your dreams
Every clouds has a silver lining
A blessing in disguise
So nothing is it seems.

Drink and Drugs

Bruises fade
But the pain remains the same
A young girl screams "no more"
Her father hits his wife who falls to the floor.

Crys of pain fill the room and bounce of all the walls
The girl curls up in a ball of tears
Her father grabs his wife and strikes her once more
This was one time to many.

The girl gets up and runs out the door
Her mother lies dead on the tier
She lives no more the father stands by her body
In a morbid mess she lies.

The little girl stands by a cliff
Tears swelling in her eyes
She jumps off and plummets into the unkown
Lieing at the bottom motionless.

The father hasn't realised how much he lost
He abused his wife
Neglected his daughter
Due to drinking and drugs.

the midnight sky

stars are pretty
in a midnight sky
with a moon floating silently by
peace lingers in the air
a gentle breeze blows
the waves lap upon the golden sand
I sit there in total silence
wacthing the clouds sail like tiny boats in a deep blue sea
if only every moment of my life could be this peacefull
then I might stop this suicidal way
and my life would be better and i would be happy
If only my wish would come true
no matter how many times i wish upon a star
i know my goal isn't that far.

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Old 9th March 2003, 23:06   #734
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well.... all of my shit is gone b/c I got my account at angelfire kicked for some odd reason...
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Old 10th March 2003, 09:52   #735
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something tells me that I should say ...

HI un0 ...

today I will keep silent.

work is heavy.

Talk to you guys later.

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Old 10th March 2003, 18:20   #736
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Gots another poem, wrote it earlier when I was supposed to be doing my homework...oh well.

You where never there

I sit here alone in the dark
Thinking of you
Nothing here
Wind blowing gently against my hair
Curtains with holes flutter
Rain lashing outside
Thunder and lightning, bolting, rumbling outside
Time stands still not ticking an inch
I feel neglected and pain
Agony, torture and insomnia
I cannot sleep, I cannot rest
All my voices call in my head
Lost in a whirl of my misscarry plan
My mind lies in rags at my feet
Defeat and deceit surrond me
The room I'm in is like a dark shadow
Never leaving my side
Shutters rattle and rage at the window
Floor boards creak and moan
The walls are rotten like the hold a thousand memorys
You where never there and never will be
I might as well face it
I'm alone in this room, alone to die
I break down in tears and cry
My heart seizes and my body shakes violently
I lie in a gruesome , macabre mess
My death lingers in the air
Yet you however where never there.

I was thinking earlier today we should all start our own poetry community type thing. What do you guys think?

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Old 11th March 2003, 03:11   #737
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Good day people.
Here is one for the day.
Don't wait for me ...

: Messy business
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My brain is slowing down
my soul is sipping away
I am so messed up
I can tell night from day

sitting in a cubicle
contemplating my life
only to see a blue board
with a window with silver linings
the window to my world

For what is worth
I still do my share
but at the end of day
it is them that gets the fare

so why bother killing myself
over these petty benefits
only to end up later
with a retire plan
that shoves me to "LUCKY OLD FOLK CARE"

So live and let live
thats what I say
for time waits for no one
enjoy it while it is lasts
for the end is coming here

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Old 11th March 2003, 17:01   #738
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Izchan why are you telling us not to wait for you? I would wait for you heres a poem I wrote last night-
Its why I'm here,
because of you,
You've stuck by my side,
Through rise and fall,
You make me wanna smile till my cheek bones ache,
I Love you more than words can say or describe,
I'll be with you,
Be with you through it all,
Mark my words,
I'll alwasy be here by your side,
Just look when your doubtfull I'll be there,
Through thick and thin I'll be there,
Come rain or shine,
Hail or storm,
I'll be here I'am here,
Guess what,
I aint going nowhere.


one of the happiest poems I've ever wrote hope you all like it.

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Old 12th March 2003, 02:12   #739
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Jedi ... ... I am so touched ... ... you might not have written it for me ... ... but I feel that you had ... so thank you. You are a GEM!!!! ...

A thought for the day.
Why do people live within their problems when they know there is a better life somewhere else?

: Redemption
Quote:
I know I am knee deep in it
I understand there is nothing I can do
I fully accept that my time is up
but why am I still going on?

I see the futility in the effort
I feel the urge to run away
I hear words of discouragement
but why do I still persist on it?

I made my decision on this matter
I will sleep on this bed I made
I know the consequences of failure
and I choose something other then defeat
I will not give up on you
and you will not give up on yourself
for the road will only end
when all hope have died within
for then life has no meaning
and that is what I can't stand
for I choose to live again

I am currently in a phase of choice. A junction in my faith and life. The decision I make will shape what my future might be. And the consequences that I will face.

There are people who says, "I have no choice" ... well ... I say ... "I choose otherwise" ...

Enjoy the poem.

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Old 12th March 2003, 19:07   #740
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Jedi ... ... I am so touched ... ... you might not have written it for me ... ... but I feel that you had ... so thank you. You are a GEM!!!! ...

awww thanks Iz you always put a smile on my face
Heres another poem I was working when i was supposed to be doing my music homework-

The sun rises in a heartless sky
Angry birds cry
Humanity fled
Gone to mars they said
The ground is hotter than normal
The north and south poles begin to melt
A swift tide of the worlds oceans
The land gradually is lost to view
Nothing is left exceot the sea
How could we let this be?

and another suicidal one-

I've lived my last day
In this perilous life
I sit on the cold kitchen tiles
In my hand is a knife
The candle beside me
Flickers and groans
I let pain take control as the knife cuts through me
My heart just moans
Like a great burden has been lifted
I drop on the floor
Blood spills and floods around me
I now live no more.

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Old 14th March 2003, 02:13   #741
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Very grim, Jedi. Be weary of your feelings, for it will lead you down to the dark side.

... always wanted to say that to SOMEONE who actually understand it.

: Illusions of the mind
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Make beliefs truths
lies and deceits
sweet empty words
promising the unpromised
Sugar coat faces
honey combed tounges
giving you everything that is dung

Voiceless whispers
silent encouragement
invisible arms to hold us true
blind loving eyes
seeing only the best
giving us everything without complaint

Broken down souls
lost in the mist
limping slowly back into bliss
if only more would willing see
there is still hope given for free
to those we wish
a new path to eternity


Again ... ... I choose otherwise.

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Old 14th March 2003, 03:05   #742
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Sitting in the rain, under the light of a single lamp post.
She waits for what will never come.
Her true love gone to a place he will never return from.
Sadly she waits, Waits and not knowing.
My creative writing teacher liked it.
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Old 16th March 2003, 14:50   #743
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Iz I understand what you mean
Idiot your can't be an idiot if you write something as good as that
heres my participation for today-
Memory box

The sun sets down
Darkness covers the land
You take my hand
As we walk along the sand
Like a new birth of night
The moon rises high in the everlasting sky
We walk close and you bring me closer
Like two spirits never to depart
You'll remain forever in my heart
I'll cherish this night forever
In my box of memories
Which I never lose or forget
a box which remains in my soul
I'll never let go
Then you'll know that I'll always love you.

hope you guys like them.
and another one asociated with sunsets-

Sunset

The sun sinks low
Beyond the brink
reds, yellows
lilacs, blues
Splash across the sky
Darkness gently laps by
Soon it regins the land
Like a giant wave
Wont go out
Until the morning sunshine shouts
Yet till that time I'll sleep the night away
Stars will fade like autumn leaves
On comes another day.

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Old 17th March 2003, 04:59   #744
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idiot ... ... welcome ... ... and plase post more
I see what your teacher see ... POTENTIAL ...

: At the other end
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Another day has gone by
the time in which he calls a life
slips silently away
taking a route of decay
when hearts beats slower becuase of age
the mind grows dimmer because he is gray
the muscles seems softer while he plays
of what use is a pair of shades
when he can no longer tell night from day

oh what bitterness this old man has
when his love of life has gone to pass
holding his old walking stick
slowly limping into dark
whispering into the night
"Oh! I have seen better days"
not seeing the dim lit candle light
at the other end of the passage


and another grumpy old man poem ...
I say ... ... otherwise ...

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Old 17th March 2003, 17:42   #745
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another poem from..me..and off i go for another week....
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Rude Awakening by Lee

Awakened by the voice that calls my name,
But when I open my eyes, no one's there,
Only a gentle breeze that coarses my face,
Going back to sleep, knowing something had came.

Awakened for the second time tonight,
This time, a touch on the cheek,
Opening my eyes, but there's no one around,
Only a letter beside my bed on the ground.

I examined the letter found,
It only said turn me around,
There lay an inscription on a card,
That said, 'Meet me in the graveyard'.

Leaving my warm comfortable house,
Walking a few blocks to the main gate,
It was dark and bit eerie,
But this is what it comes down to be.

Surpassing the tombstones on the lot,
I heard her voice again, but so near,
Thinking why I dragged myself into this,
But there sat a woman, made of mist.

Awestrucked by the beauty in her eyes,
She only whispered through the wind,
Saying to come closer to her,
I couldn't believe the unexpected.....

I walked up to the tombstone,
But I felt something pulling me up in the air,
Looking at her once beautiful face, lies a diseased corpse,
Eyes glaring of red, and a smile crept upon it's face.

"Naive little boy, can't take me for granted ya know,
Your ancestors, how I beseech,
That they used their powers to turn me into a lich!
But I've learned a few tricks of my own...."

And with that I felt I was tearing away from my body,
I can only bear witness, that my demise is coming,
Closing my eyes for the final moment...
........................silence.....................
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Awakened by the chirping of birds,
Man, I had a bad dream,
But, why the heck am I so light,
And my voice.....so...w..hi..s.......p..er...y?
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Its been an odd number of years now,
I had been so naive that night,
But why did I drag myself into this,
Cause now I'm just an element called mist.

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Old 18th March 2003, 03:33   #746
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wow ... fantasy reading ... ... nice going arcane. Total new experience for me.


I don't think I will be writing today.
writers block ...
But we will see.


: Misery
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Letters to my heart
unopend and left a drift
songs to the soul
unheard and walked away
troubles within the mind
untended and growing fast
like cancer to the body
killing every hopes that has come
guilt is a deadly being
for it eats away our strenght
and only in forgiveness
are we spared the pain
the wounds will never go away
even when it is healed
for it serves to remind us
that we have once failed


Maybe I will write after all ... ... blocks ... such strange thing. One moment it is there, the other ... pooof ... gone.

enjoy.

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Old 18th March 2003, 07:02   #747
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its a new genre for me to explore in izzy...i found it quite rewarding..

And your poems...whether writers block or not..they still sound good

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Old 19th March 2003, 00:11   #748
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Arcane, well ... I hope to read more of this kind of work, for I believe that you have grown considerably over the thread, much more depth inside your poems now .. ... and I like it.

Keep posting.

: Shards in the mind
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Broken glasses blocks my sight
like shards in the mind
no thoughts are clear anymore
tainted by the ignorance of man
so we go into another war
for justice and for peace
with spilled bloods and guts
we attain a final saying
in GOD we trust
in DEATH we begin


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Old 19th March 2003, 02:32   #749
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I started vol. 5 and this is my first poem:
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Sharing A Dream by Lee

Carried by the wind, my soul travels;
Onward to a distant faraway land;
Where the sun never sets;
But lays low over the horizon
Leaving a pinkish haze amonst the clouds.

A heavenly paradise only dreamt of in dreams,
I scour the land for any signs of life;
Upon my amazement, I spy a lone woman,
Sitting on a cliff above the surf;
Instinct says I must meet her....

Walking up behind her, eyeing her curves,
What more can I ask from this pretty woman;
Her head turning around, passing me a sly wink;

....i've been expecting you......

Expecting the unexpected she got up
And held me in her arms,
All I felt...a warm passionate kiss from this stranger,
Pure bliss, eternal exctasy, all the feelings you can imagined,
From just one single kiss...

Asking her, "Do I know you"?,

....only...in ...a.... dream..

I don't want this to end....

.....we'll meet again...lee...lee.....*fading*

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Waking up only to the moans of my girl in bed...
Murmuring my name......

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Old 19th March 2003, 02:36   #750
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Ah friend ... your poems are definately getting very GOOD!!
enjoy every word.
every second in fact.

Pleasent dreams ...

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Old 19th March 2003, 03:24   #751
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I've been having a dry spell... but I think it is gone now. This is based off of a dream that I had.

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Old 19th March 2003, 06:34   #752
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Orgone ... ... impresive ... excelent.
Always did enjoy your brand of wordings.
The pic is most appropriate. How in the world do you find them. Or does it find you?

: An afternoon at the park
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Siting on a bench
minding my own business
comes along a toddler
crying his heart content
baffled by the intrusion
I stood and began to walk
only to find the toddler
following me about
I tell the kid to go away
"Find your mommy" was what I said
yet the toddler hear me not
kept on crying without a thought
so I wandered around
with him behind
looking for a mother of this child
yet minutes passed by and it dawns on me
that the toddler is a lost child
not just to me
thus I pick him up
and began to stride
seeking for a confused mind
only to find plenty looks of disgust
of this toddler that won't shut up
at the end I resigned
taking him to the policeman hut
asking them for assistance
thus the end of my afternoon lunch

Later that day I passed on by
to check on the status of the child
what I was told shook my mind
for the child's mother had just died
a mugger came and stabed her heart
just to grap twenty five bucks
leaving the child to his own demise
and the mother was left to die
my heart sank and wept inside
for the evil that was done
a child was condemned without a mother
just so another can be richer
what a sad world we all live in
for money is now larger than life
A news ... so now a poem.

talk to you all later.

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Old 19th March 2003, 16:08   #753
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The pic is most appropriate. How in the world do you find them. Or does it find you?

basically, I stroll through google images untill something jumps out at me, then I utilize irfanview, paint, and/or adobe photoshop untill I have what I want. (i've just started using photoshop, so the pics can only get better from here on out ). Most all of my pics look nothing like they were originally except for the basic form.
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Old 19th March 2003, 20:11   #754
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Hey guys, sorry I havent posted in a while.
Orgone_Man I love your rhyming couplets. Really gives an atmosphere to my head and that picture is pretty
Iz "An afternoon at the park" stands out in my mind like a fresh coffe spill, your poems are good.
Arcane, I echo Iz on this one your poems do get deeper and more open in a kinda sence. heres one of my poems I don't know if I've posted it yet if I have I do apologize-
Suicide II

I've lived my last day
In this perilous life
I sit on the cold hand kitchen tiles
In my hand in a knife
The candle beside me
Flickers and groans
I let my pain take control as the knife cuts through me
My heart just moans
Like a great burden has been lifted
I drop to the floor
Blood spills and floods around me
I now live no more.

and theres this one-

words everlasting words
which mean the world to me
words leave imprints n the heart
friends leave footprints which never depart
you know what?
your footprints remain in my heart
they wont even fade
just get deper with a spade
with you by my side I feel stronger
we share each others pain
each others tears
each others fears
you saved me from suicide
my pain within
you renewed my hope with an extra thick surface
thanks to you I'm here today
never to go away
till my dieing day.

wot do u guys think?? I'll put up some more later

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Old 19th March 2003, 23:53   #755
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Your poems grow more deeper and deeper into the depressed conscience..Hope u feel a bit better everyday...
Here's a short one for a change...
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Dark Cloud by Lee

Inebriated by the spirits that haunt the inside,
Controlling my movements, my mind, my essence,
Leaving the real 'me' under it's command.

I hold myself, digging my nails into my arm,
Deeper and deeper till the blood flows,
Only seeing rot and decay in my eyes.

I'm changing, into 'something',
For the worms began to seep from my pores,
My mind already losing it, falling into the dark void.

A cloud of spirits invades my life,
Metamorphing into the thing that entered,
Left behind a corpse, and my essence within a dark cloud.

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Old 20th March 2003, 01:30   #756
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A children's poem by me. I need suggestions on it, too. The rhythm is a little awkward.

The Nightly Hero by Cleanup

Dripping tentacles, oozing ventricles,
A single red goon lies within my sight!
A forked tongue, with compound eyes,
Has come to deliver for my demise,
But I'm not giving myself up without a fight!

The fiend has come, when I'm asleep,
To crush my bones and chew my feet!

Pulsing arteries, scaly spinidies,
The thing has everything imaginable!
With piercing claws, and fur to spare,
He has come for me in my underwear!
He is everything that isn't nearly fathomable!

A wooden bat, a bullet to fire, is all I need to further conspire,
But no such thing is in avail to me!

Toxic salivation, hissing blobination,
At last I see what may be my life yet!
A loose floorboard, with a nail to match,
Has come and soon the thing is scratched!
It barely knows whatever it has met!

So now it's gone, and in minutes I may - go to sleep,
For I have once again saved the day.
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Old 20th March 2003, 02:09   #757
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Hmmmm...
Jedi Gemstone?
from looking at your poems I can say that
you are a very strong minded young women
it must be the jedi powers, LoL.
everyones poems are amazing but the jedi is growing stronger.
*hug*
*cough* - hug myself I mean - I gotta stop doing that


As for myself I'm putting some last touches on this kind-of big poem that I said(a while ago) I was working on. It's almost done. I'll probably post it before this week is over. Why so late? things are a little busy around here at my house and are going to continue to be busy for the rest of the week, so yeah.

so I'll see ya later.

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Old 20th March 2003, 20:41   #758
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Hmmmm...
Jedi Gemstone?
from looking at your poems I can say that
you are a very strong minded young women
it must be the jedi powers, LoL.
everyones poems are amazing but the jedi is growing stronger.
*hug*
*cough* - hug myself I mean - I gotta stop doing that


awwwwww so sweet (sorry I'm hiper) why thanks you knightFairy I've never been so flattered in my life or at least I dont think I have been probably forgot but still sometimes I can be a very stron minded person my head rules my body literally. but anyway thanks
*hug*
Heres a poem I just came up with-

The red river swimming
Drowning my senses
I look around for a dingy
All I found was a thingy
But it sunk to the bottomless ocean
Never to be seen again

I get pulled under
Losing the air in my lungs
I try to swim away from this fear
A single pure thing drifts out in the sea its my tear
Dissapeard in a single wave
My hope keeps draining

With one urge
I've sunk so low pressure builds
Like a force field
Yield......
The only option left
With nothing left but agony I let go of my soul
It dissapears in a flash
My dead body sinks in peace at last

what do you guys think?

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Old 21st March 2003, 02:15   #759
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It was nice, Gem. As for knightFairy ... don't I get a hug?

Keep posting.

: The Journey
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It was a night like any other
the moon was hidden beneath it all
only the street lamps gave its warmth
I walked the road with a pace
hoping to reach shelther faster
but the stretch seems to stretch even further
as my legs slowly began to falter
then there not far from me stood a girl
walked up to me and sayed
Hello handsome, whats your name?
my name is Desire.
are you tired from doing so much more?
oh honey, why do you bother?
just come and sit near me
and you will know life differently
don't you think it is much easier
to just sit down and admire me?
At first I did not know what to think
and wanted very much to stay
my legs could use a rest
and she was a real beauty
Yet something inside of me
kept screeming for me to keep my pace
so not knowing what to do
I did the most obvious thing
I chose to follow my heart
and kept going on
slowly leaving Desire behind my trail
Even though my mind said otherwise
my heart holds me true
and it pointed me to go further on
for at the very end
there is shelter for my weary bones
A mild attemp to be different.

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Old 21st March 2003, 06:29   #760
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Fightin’ fo Nothin’

For all those who don’t know
I’m about to deliver a blow
I’m going to tell it like it fuckin’ is
About how we sit back ignore our kids

We’ll pay four million for a bitch ass bomb
But we’ll never give a cent to a teenage mom
We’ll try to find better ways to die
And waste tax dollars on renaming FRENCH fries

We’ll give a man 50 years for petty theft
Ignore anyone who thinks their wing is left
Abortion is wrong? But over-population is right?
No wonder so many people die in clubs of the night

Blowing up planes is terrorism
But dropping bombs on a city is considered fine
Damn, if you want someone dead, just use your 9
With a cowboy in office, I’ll stick with anarchism

Bush wants to blow up Iraq
Chaney? Hope he dies of a hart-attack
Colin Powell just wants to be on CNN
Fuck this; just give me a 5th of gin

So when this bitch is over
Is everyone going to be a rover?
Or is “she” going to drop the bomb on us?
Cause, frankly, I don't want to hear you fuss

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