Nice to see that you are working on things, but I don't like the preset. It is basicly just a rehash, and a pretty bad rehash at that, of a mathatmacly(sp) advanced and amazing preset.
First advice-Aim smaller-for your first presets you shouldn't go try diggin into the coding of things like 3D scopes, advanced raytraced DMs, etc.. But start smaller and work up. An analogy would be trying to build a pyramid without bulilding the ocean, you need a solid ground to work on. (I know that is probably not that good of an anology but it worked in my head). Instead what you should do is read up on things like FSK's AVS tutorial, Atero's AVS Primer, and just search the fourms to learn new things.
Second Advice- Being a highschool student doesn't mean anything. I myself am in 10th grade and taking Honors Algerbra 2 in school, and last year failing honors geometry. A good quote would be from mark twain, (or I think it's his), "I never let schooling get in the way of my education." What I am doing, I am learning precalc, calc, and some forms of discreet math from onling sites, and I am also reading as many things as I can to learn more oustide of school.
Main advice-It's not shamefull to start out with n00b presets, everyone had to start somewere, (except maybe UnConeD, but he is not normal), so start small and work your way up.