Originally posted by mysterious_w
First off, use correct English spelling and grammar.
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Well, to answer your question, start with learning what does what before you start bithcing others off.
Further it's hard to for me rate your preset, since I don't know which parts you ripped and what it yours. But let's stay on the safe side and for a few seconds assume the code's yours...
The pattern looks okay, but everytime I try to take a closer look I hurt my eyes from the strobing onbeatclears and way-too-fast bass spin. Better code a new bass spin that's somewhat slower. Shoudln't be too difficult since you can code that other scope.
(I really prefer the second Color map off though by the way)
Furthermore, the top and bottom really need some filling.