First off I have been away for a few days and another explosion on the of posts on the forums well done people.
I enjoyed twisted galaxy. Great effort. With Electrifying bacteria and borders in general they seem at lot more difficult to get just right. (or maybe thats just me and I cannot do them)
Sadly for you SM we have been doing the presets for some time now and the regular milk posters among us are getting to a decent level of quality - so it is even more difficult for you (or any newbie to preset writing) to make a decent impression. And Krash never goes easy on anyone but he is nice and friendly really.
Maybe look at the ealier posts (a few months ago) to see the quailty (if that is the word) of the presets then. I think you will be surprised by your efforts.
But for the moment it is fine to stick to just the per-frame part. I was a got month before I attempted to per-pixel too much maths and all that.
Keep it up and I hope you could become our newest regular preset writer so we can all enjoy.