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Nicely done, DragonSon & Arcane. Very dark, and very good, Arcane.
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My is zorro and free world of hand all bads!
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right.....*confuzzled*
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Fears the boots
Forum King Join Date: May 2003
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Here's my submition for a short story...
I Part One It's always dark around here. The light of decency and basic human morals never seep through the deeper levels of this city. Nothing around here decent human beings would want anything to do with; Sex, debauchery, gambling, sloth, greed. Everything that would make a Priest cringe in disgust. Everything...and I like it. For this is where I thrive. I step out of the dark doorway from my dank one-room apartment;if you can call this hellhole an apartment. My dark, sweeping trenchcoat and thin, dark raybans hide a figure ravaged by time. My steel-tip boots echoe through the alleys and dead-ends, startling rats and various other street vermin. I pull a vanilla envelope from my inner pocket and stare at the wax seal. Two scythes below the crucifix, the symbol of my kind; Death. I break the seal for my next assignment. Out onto the alley ground falls a picture and a brief bio on my next--victim. He looks like a cross between the Cript Keeper and Jesse James; feeble,frail, yet beneath that thin exterior lies the heart of a thief and a murderer. His name--James Crandolf. Sins--Murder, extortion...nothing out of the ordinary. Apparently he's locked up in the State Penn., which shouldn't be any problem to get into, seeing as I am Death, and hence, cannot die. As I stuff the information back into the envelope, I enter the city's streets and hale a cab.... ==================================================================== To be continued..... -DragonSon- |
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Fears the boots
Forum King Join Date: May 2003
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Oh, damn. I forgot that Lee had made a Short Story thread, I'll post it there, too.
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Pretty good. Sounds like my kinda place so far...
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Major Dudette
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: Wales
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hey guys, I haven't got anything new other than this verse I came up with, Spike Milligan gave me the idea for it but here goes -
'Oh I see' You say with a grin When really you don't Your blind You saying it really To hush my voice Quieten my thoughts And silence my mind. Its a bit stupid I know but meh. My Website Deviantartness Yay This signature was brought to you by the colour Red and the number 14 I'm A Purple Ghetto, So Follow Me To Sanity!! *Runs Off* I Have No Idea Where I'm Going...... |
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ditto tavernology!
![]() ![]() ____________________________ November Rain by Lee Unforgotten past Weaving a path of loneliness, Through the loom of time. Sanctified moments, Crossed bitterness and hate, Crucifying a bleeding heart. Tearful disdain, Wrought with sin, A silver thread knotting with pain. Uncovered melancholy, Branded anew with sorrow, Could there ever be a better.... Tommorow? Like Poetry and art? Visit my DeviantArt Site: www.lilithlairpoetry.deviantart.com |
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Major Dudette
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: Wales
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Nice poem Arcane, me and Tavernology done this piece together-
So Called Friend [jedi gemstone] You criticise me And deny I exsist I'm not your friend Not even the air of mist Not even the slightest movement in the wind Just a hollow nothing Breathing over and over again Your pain bears upon me Like a raindrop to a bitter tear You are the only downfall withered in my life Like a shivered cold leaf to the sea Yet I still think you like me I cant get it in my head You hate me and dread me instead [tavernology] I breathe, I watch, I wait. Waiting for something, anything, from you. A kind word, a smile, a look, Even a glance in my general direction. As I walk along the hallway, I think to myself: Like water to a fish, I am all around you, I breathe for you, Yet you never notice me. The wind blows, it chills me to the bone. I am not hollow. I am not nothing. I deserve more than this. I shed a single, solitary tear, As I realise this is my fate, This is my destiny: Anonymity. [jedi gemstone] What did I do That made you hurt so bad So we began to grow apart A new person, a new story A new chapter of your pointless life One that has no meaning, or no end It just rots alone in a dusty shelf I don't comprhend, all my life But at least I make an effort Where as you who is scared and afraid Ignores and just differs I walk alone, Thinking again [tavernology] Like water to a fish, You are there, but I cannot notice you, For I have no need to do so. To me, you are not real, So why should I care About how I make you feel? Why should I care whether or not you exist? Like god to an atheist, To me, you are not there. I need proof that you exist, And even if you showed it to me, I couldn’t care. I am too wrapped up in my life, With all it’s intricacies To notice you. You never displayed any interest to me, So why should I notice the difference Of if you are there or not? Why should I care about one such as you, When nobody seems to care about one such as me? enjoy
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Fears the boots
Forum King Join Date: May 2003
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Anytime you're ready Lee, I'm ready to start working on something with you.
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: Heart felt
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Major Dudette
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: Wales
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Heres a new poem I've been working on-
Loves Oblivion Lights twinkling Curse into oblivion As I fall in to the surrounding darkness I don't know what to do With you on my mind All I want to do is go back Go back to the past Go back to those days Go back to the happiness Before it all went away Traveling back now I remember us You smiling like you always did Us holding hands in the park Us, us , us What happened to us? Cast into neglect Along with the light Without you I'm standing in the dark A luminous place In the light I created Of what was left in my life Your picture just there Your crisp ice eyes Were I would carefully tread Seeing your soul Brown waving hair Smooth and gentle I used to play with it When we was us I crumple to the floor and stare I can't get us out of my head What happened? Where did we go wrong? could you tell me where we stand? Trying to get your entracing vision Away from me I shut my eyes your there I can't escape you Tender smile Pearly white teeth I'm being pulled under again Bathed in our memories Lavishing my skin Reality comes to me and my vision fades Cast into torture A sky made out of a dreary fantasy Rain tips from aloft What to do now I just don't know My dreams have been invaded Dwindled and faded Like the stars I wish to be Cast into the midnight sky Bringing hope Bringing smiles Not bringing depression Upon my life I sit alone in our empty house Its been hollow with lies Since you walked out All my friends think I'm satisifed.... They can't see my soul What would they know? An everlasting rainfall A knock on the door Sad and faded I wish it would be you My heart knows not Which way to turn Down the path loves a land mine Tread carefully back to you I sit alone, not daring to move In the dark. hope you guy like it My Website Deviantartness Yay This signature was brought to you by the colour Red and the number 14 I'm A Purple Ghetto, So Follow Me To Sanity!! *Runs Off* I Have No Idea Where I'm Going...... |
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Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Adelaide
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Very good, Jedi.
Anyhow, here's one of the ones I put up at DragonSon's forum thingy: Impulses I am no longer in control. Darkness & Death reign supreme Within my mind. They have always been there, And ever shall. The Rage grows, Uncontainable, Uncontrollable. I cannot control the Rage Within my mind. I cannot control the Darkness within my soul. I close my eyes to try. My eyes open, the Rage consumes me. I can smell their fear, The fear of my victims-to-be. It sweetens the Blood. I can hear the screams, I can feel the snapping of bones. The snap of a neck in my hands, The crunch of ribs upon my knee, I can taste the blood, I can see the carnage that I make, I can feel the blood spray across my face. I smile as a feral animal, Closing in for the kill, Their jugulars between my teeth. I enjoy the destruction that I reap. I pause. I take a deep breath. I close my eyes, surrounded by the bodies of the slain. I open my eyes once again. I look at my blood-soaked hands. The blood fades, the vision recedes. Normality resumes it's course. The world is whole once more. The rage has subsided. I am in control once more. Everyone is still alive, None the wiser about how close they came to sweet oblivion. I contained the uncontainable. For Now... Person who spots the homicidal manaic wins a cookie! |
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i've been so busy that i forgot the partnership thing...sorry..i'll try to come up with something. But here's a subtle, romantic piece that I made using various photographs plus some words slapped on it.
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Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Adelaide
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Very cool, but parts of it are kinda hard to read.
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i always have a problem with that...i think sometimes because people's monitors look different than mine. Thanks for reading though!
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Join Date: Apr 2002
Location: Canada, now UK
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IN PROGRESS
Echoes of unfilfilled lust Unrelinquished choices Left in nothing but dust Frosted windows and fading spring Failing light And ashes left in a ring It's being together in separation Wanting to express It all, just to you, my One And never to let it degress Had to stop because my Mom made me get off computer... just as feathery as ever |
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Major Dude
Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: East Coast of Aus
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Untitled
When i dream i see you like you used to be You were mine and mine alone None spoiled our happiness But it all seems so different We've changed, but for better or worse? I find myself looking at a shadow, A vague memory of the past All you are now is a dream What has happened to you? What has happened to us? Will we ever be the same? But perhaps change is good But how can something so good taste so sour? |
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I miss the poem with art thing ...
... it takes more than talent for that, it requires heart ... ![]() Bravo ... none today, maybe tommorow ... ![]() enjoy. |
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Thanks izchan...glad u feel that way!
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Major Dudette
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: Wales
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Arcane, that picture is like breathtaking and that poem is sooooo cute.
Endura and Tavernology good poems guys keep em coming, I always like a good read. White Rvane can't wait to see the rest of that poem. Well as for me I ran out of darkness, I aint had many great ideas really that I haven't posted. My Website Deviantartness Yay This signature was brought to you by the colour Red and the number 14 I'm A Purple Ghetto, So Follow Me To Sanity!! *Runs Off* I Have No Idea Where I'm Going...... |
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Fears the boots
Forum King Join Date: May 2003
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Here's one I did a few months ago, I don't know if I had posted the poem here, though.
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Location: Adelaide
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DragonSon, that one is very good. You can actually read it, and see the picture well, too. Very nicely done.
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Major Dudette
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: Wales
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Great poem DragonSon.
I've been out of ideas I need some inspiration, well later guys. My Website Deviantartness Yay This signature was brought to you by the colour Red and the number 14 I'm A Purple Ghetto, So Follow Me To Sanity!! *Runs Off* I Have No Idea Where I'm Going...... |
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I agree with tavernology!
______________________________ ...Come Out and Play...? by Lee Lost in a nonchalant sky Open to the empty world I, living in a lie Victimized by this girl. So afraid of waking From harsh reality Paralyzed inside, but shaking My hollow eyes weary. Didn't intend to live in fear Helpless in my little room Waiting as my death drew near Only to have it pass this tomb. Nights turn into days But in here, constant darkness Disillusioned by sorrow that won't fade An the ever longing bitterness. "Won't you come out and play?" That voice echoing down the glass hall My ears bleed as it bounces off the wall. I want to run away from her Or let death take me for sure. Slipping on broken glass Falling in a heapless pile My face turned upward to the young lass A lifeless face with a smile. "You lose." Like Poetry and art? Visit my DeviantArt Site: www.lilithlairpoetry.deviantart.com |
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Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Adelaide
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Shadows
In this shadowy void, Darkness & Death rage for supremacy. An eternal struggle to be embraced, Unwinnable, Unending, Unbreakable. Half in love with easeful Death, Not truly wanting oblivion's sweet embrace, Not truly wanting nothing, Not truly wanting anything. Suddenly the light shines, Obliterating all doubt. None of it matters, Nobody cares about anything. So I give up, I absolve myself of it all. I no longer care. I am free once more, I am myself again; Hollow, Empty, Dark, and Meaningless. I am happier this way. Silent Xrytizah. |
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Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: East Coast of Aus
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Location: Adelaide
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His sentence makes sense. Read my prior post, if you think it doesn't.
In the meantime, another couple from me... Desires Cold & dim, Shadows of the rising darkness, Heating my blackest desires, Rising aroma of dark love. Silent Xrytizah Softness He desires soft love, Heart hammers. She will harshly laugh, Ending man. Silent Xrytizah Reality: You become rampantly desired; Faceless and longing, Love's fate sealed by a laugh. Silent Xrytizah |
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Major Dude
Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: East Coast of Aus
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just the "I agree!" bit made me think of 007
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lol....i do agree so much too EnDurA!
____________________________________ Wheel of Agony by Lee Not a fleeting moment goes by When your gnarled face passes through my mind Your cynical voice playing games in my head And the feeling of hatred when you're near. Not a passing day goes by When I thought we were together Love was blissful, lasting forever Pleading it all back now, you just said goodbye. Not a starlit night passes by As I stare out the window of shooting stars The thoughts of you haunting me for afar Wishing these nightmares would die. Not a lifetime went when you're still here Haunting my very conscience with vile hatred But someday the chain will be broken And I will make my passing into the next life. Like Poetry and art? Visit my DeviantArt Site: www.lilithlairpoetry.deviantart.com |
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Wildly Confused
(Major Dude) Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Minnesota
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A poem about what goes on in my head during the average day in school
--------------------------------------------------------------------- What is the arctangent? What is the life? Am I the only one here? What is the arccosine? What is the soul? Am I the only one with life in a water tower of blue paint? What is the arcsine? What? Are people ignorant or just careless? What? I am not here? What is the sigmoid of a bleeding brain. ?What: Flowered infinity is.......? And the little bird who says hi has disapperead. Calm down, relax, oh, your brain is not ok! Or is your brain ok, but your mind astrew what. ??? Will you take you old life and skill with you? NO!!!!!!!!!!!! Ah yes, but it will never turn to dust as long as you still love it. "It's like saying give a man a Les Paul guitar and he becomes Eric Clapton, and of course that's not true, give a man an amplifier and a synthesizer and he doesn't become...whoever; he doesn't become us." - Roger Waters |
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questions to life's problems...excellent poem of the mind pixel!
_______________________________________ Headlights by Lee Nothing was meant to be The sulking pain that I see A mentality reared towards depression Devoting my life to self-degradation. Of all the paths that lead in Only two led out, heaven or hell I could feel death at times so near The shadows lurking in the walls I fear But my hope rised everytime the church bells Rang the tune of angel's cries. Now silence pervades my dark room As fears run in circles on impending doom My eyes see are only a dying headlight Fading into internal darkness and out of sight. Like Poetry and art? Visit my DeviantArt Site: www.lilithlairpoetry.deviantart.com |
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Very nice, Arcane.
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Fears the boots
Forum King Join Date: May 2003
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Damn my inspiration-less ass...
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Usually, you get something to inspire you by reading other's poems, watching a movie, or listening to music. I guess that means I'll post another one.
_______________________________ Dead Like Me by Lee Death's presence was near today, Breathing down my neck, a sly grin, My soul he wanted to take away, When my blood met knife and skin. Uncurled, a laughter filled with delight, And the blood, slowly draining from me, My eyes, fading...unable to withold the light, Visions of fire and brimstone I only see. Leading me through the maze of lost souls, Their doomlike gaze as they walk aimlessly, Frozen, the tears from their heart, so cold, Too bad we're just passing through purgatory. Into the fire I envisioned, Death led me, Agony rose with the smell of decay, Bearing in mind, the place of insanity, With the demons handy at bay. Thrown into the pit of bodies, charred, Eyeless sockets and sully grin, My new home, my freedom eternally barred, Just because of a knife slitting deep into my skin. Like Poetry and art? Visit my DeviantArt Site: www.lilithlairpoetry.deviantart.com |
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Nocturnal Tears by Lee
You, sending me away From the light of day To the end of darkness deep Carrying the nocturnal tears I weep. My fragile heart cries A piece of me dies Tearing me apart Stabbing my heart. Bright stars do fade, Left with emotional decay, A bottomless pit of despair, I don't think no one cares. As I lay in my bed, I think of the shit you have said, Gaze at the stars, I weep, An hour longer, I now sleep. Like Poetry and art? Visit my DeviantArt Site: www.lilithlairpoetry.deviantart.com |
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Wildly Confused
(Major Dude) Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Minnesota
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by [Arcane]
[B]questions to life's problems...excellent poem of the mind pixel! lol thanks!
"It's like saying give a man a Les Paul guitar and he becomes Eric Clapton, and of course that's not true, give a man an amplifier and a synthesizer and he doesn't become...whoever; he doesn't become us." - Roger Waters |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Adelaide
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Freedom
This world presses in, I want to escape. The way is blocked. Obstacles I must overcome. Boundaries I must cross. Freedom awaits. The freedom I have chased, Chased for so long, Far too long, but I cannot stop. Especially when I am so close, So close I can all but taste it. The taste of freedom lingers, Like the aftertaste of a lover’s kiss. I cannot stop now. I am too close. Freedom shall be mine, I shall be free of the shackles, The shackles that you impose on me. And I shall be free at last. I will be freed of my prison, Free of your rules, Free of your influence, Free of your interfering, Freed from you. You have no Power over me. I will be a Free Man. Silent Xrytizah. In case nobody noticed, I need to move outta home... |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Adelaide
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Honor
Here lies an honorable man, In a world with no honor. I once held my honor high Higher than life, love, or death. But this world has none. So what was the point? There was none. There never shall be. I abandoned my ideals. I abandoned my ideas. I abandoned myself. Then you came. Once blocked by honor. Once blocked by friendship. Once blocked by the past. None of that matters anymore. I once held my honor close. Close to my heart, To the exclusion of many things. Now that spot is hollowed out. Should I hold you there instead? You say the words I long to hear, But you do not mean them. You say you do. You may believe this. But I know that you do not. What have I done to deserve this? I do not know. I wish I did. If I did, I would do it a thousand times; More if need be. Just so that you would feel the same. But I know that you do not. Once this would have bothered me, Excluded you from my heart, But I no longer care. I shall let this play continue, To the end of this act, It shall suffice for now. I need something. I know not what. You are here. That shall suffice for now. In a world with no honor. Silent Xrytizah. |
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:Silent
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