Originally posted by izchan
jedi, you kind of lost me in the new poem of yours.
You mean lost in a good way? or lost as in what the fuck are you rambling on about now?
It didnt make much sence to me and yet it does in some ways I dunno, I just wanna enter this comp. Thats all I dunno what to enter darn it I have to many poems.
I found this in one of the poems I done with Theo and I changed it aorund to fit 20 lines tell me if you guys think its decent enough to be entered please-
My hated love
(couldn't think of a better title any suggestions let me know!)
The light breaks up into shards of dark
as this shadowed love delves into my heart
my dreams begin to fall apart
Despite of your anger
Tearing me, changing me for the worst
Of all this love I gave to you
I never want to lose you again
Even though all you give me is a cascade of pain
The yearn for you still lives on
My breath becomes shorter I grasp for air and you appear
My life, my love, why did you leave my side?
You grimace and stare from above
I'm nothing to you
Lower than the dirt in your thoughtless mind
I’ve become your anticity, a prisoner bound to your heartless love
I think of my past when I was happy, it seems all like a dream a blur to me
Your love ruined my life and left me to die
Your love is like a leaf once its dropped over a waterfall
it never comes back...