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    I wrote this poem earlier as I though about how cold hearted some of these people are... I call it "My Faith Inside"


    My faith in humanity,
    has been taken away,
    all the sorrow and pain,
    that we cause everyday,

    All the lust and greed,
    all the murder and rape,
    all the loss and regret,
    all the evil and hate,

    The torture and hurt,
    is too much to bear,
    all the anger and pain,
    and foul smells in the air,

    All the death and distruction,
    and revengefullness yet,
    they act on these things,
    without any regret,

    The nature of men,
    is too much to bear,
    the sould of mankind,
    don't seem to be there,

    You can hope for "world peace",
    and many have tried,
    but..theres no hope for this world,
    for theres evil inside...
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Now I usually don't post my poetry/stories on the web...the last time I did so it eneded up stolen.. you may have read it "All I Wanted" but I felt I had to post this one... I feel it to be completly true.. and that is what scares me... people show compassion twords one another these days.. thers so much pain and suffering in this world.. I don't know why I even bothered with this.. I bet anything someones just going to post and make fun of me for doing this..oh-well.. I don't really care.. I have said what I felt needed to be...
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  • #2
    There is a poem thread It's in the arts\design forum .. here is a link to it..

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    • #3
      Angela, this poem is a very good one. And it IS true. I can only hope that Humanity can survive like this.
      "Love is what you make of it, if you wish it to last for all time, then you must be willing to risk it all for the one you love."

      - Sean T. Wiliams (1983 - )

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      • #4
        ::sigh:: ya..I know.... Why are so many people so cold hearted? you know how I am Sean.... When I see someone hurting.. it hurts me... i detest being an empath.. and im not even as strong with it as you are......yet...thats why I want to be a councler so damn bad...

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        • #5
          Just remember Angela, being an Empath in this world of hate is not easy.
          "Love is what you make of it, if you wish it to last for all time, then you must be willing to risk it all for the one you love."

          - Sean T. Wiliams (1983 - )

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          • #6
            Originally posted by idiot
            There is a poem thread It's in the arts\design forum .. here is a link to it..

            http://forums.winamp.com/showthread....postid=1068322
            *hides*

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            • #7
              thanks.. i know about it allready.. i wanted to post it on this forum because this is where i have been posting is all... and i wanted the poeple i was talking about in that poem to se it.. i have like a million poems i wrote..most of them..like the one above suck...pretty bad.. but it helps me put into words what im feeling at the time...

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              • #8
                Originally posted by Gabrielle Lunar
                but..theres no hope for this world,
                for theres evil inside...
                Ah, don't make such a bleak conclusion so soon... The counsellors' first golden rule: Don't conclude. Keep asking questions.

                I'm lucky to have a clinical psychologist as a neighbour and both being health professionals we occasionally talk about the human mind and human suffering in general. My good neighbour often emphasises the need to understand the context under which a person acts. For everyone, from "normal" people to clinically insane inmates, perceives his world in a certain way, and his actions are the most sensible according to that person, in the circumstances as that person sees it, within a world as that person perceives it.

                A good counsellor asks the client about essentially everything -- in order to re-build the sort of world that the client thinks he is living in, and to empathise with the client and understand his motives.
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                • #9
                  thats very wise griffinn..... ::shakes head:: whew... ::goes into happy mode again:: Yeah... your right.... I'm not going to allow them to get to me... :smiles:: I want to major in child phychology.. but I don't know if i can handel med school is all.. I might have to end up being a councler instead... ((::grumbles:: i really can't spell worth a shit )) I just know I want to help people.....

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                  • #10
                    aww. you wrote a poem about me, that is sweet
                    DO NOT PM ME WITH TECH SUPPORT QUESTIONS

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                    • #11
                      /me disables stereotypical 'wise beyond years', 'i feel for everyone' script, as a newer, better version is apparently on the market.

                      Gabbie/Angela: got a URL?
                      "My heart hates uggos." –J.D.

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                      • #12
                        I don't post much of my poetry... last time i did that it ended up all over the net..but if you want i will e-mail a couple to you though

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                        • #13
                          Oh dear.
                          "My heart hates uggos." –J.D.

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                          • #14
                            yeah..this one is called "all I wanted" it's the one thats allready all over the net so i don't care if it gets stolen again....

                            When we first met at that old park,
                            I thought it was a dream,
                            but you were in reality,
                            exactly what you seemed,

                            Your loving touch gave to me,
                            hope for one more day,
                            I'd be dead if you had not,
                            come along my way,

                            Your warm smile is all i want,
                            to get me through bad weather,
                            your comforting touch is all I need,
                            to get me through forever,

                            I never wanted much from you,
                            but you gave me eyerything,
                            I always asked for just your love,
                            but you did it all for me,

                            I'd always had a tearful cry,
                            deep within my soul,
                            but when you came into my life,
                            my mind and heart felt whole,

                            A thousand words couldn't bring you back,
                            I know because I tried,
                            and neither could a thousand tears,
                            I know..because I cried,

                            You left me with a broken heart,
                            and some fond memories too,
                            but I never wanted memories,
                            I only wanted...you...
                            ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
                            This ones about a girl who is depressed because the one she loved died.. ::sigh:: most of my poetry is so damn morbid.....

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                            • #15
                              Jaz: pass the bucket, for some reason my lunch is starting to disagree with me.
                              DO NOT PM ME WITH TECH SUPPORT QUESTIONS

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