Another Artistic Thread - POEMS

[izchan]

A little bit distracted lately and no new poems to post but I would like to say this.

Arcane, dude ... that was beautiful!!!

WR. ... I would like the MP3 version please.

That said. Good night.

[Bazman63]

Thanks izchan. @Arcane, that's a nice piece of work. @WR, I love "Plain". Fine stuff.

Sad Things.

There are sad things that are,
And sadder things that are not,
Saddest of all are things that never will be.

A broken winged robin, lying still on a frosty ground
Could not bruise my heart more,
Nor a faded rose petal falling
Cast darker shadows on my soul.

It is sad that we never met as lovers in the spring,
Sadder that we are not lovers in the summer,
Saddest, that we never shall be lovers in a golden autumn.

And if I asked you to touch my lips
With yours,
Would you?

[EnDurA]

I gave Breaking Myself to a friend to see if he could turn it into a song (we're starting a band and are need of some lyrics), this is what he came up with

(Bennett)
Here you leave me
Lying broken on the floor
You've taken apart
Everything that I stand for

(Bennett)
As days turn into weeks
And weeks into months
I'm still left broken
In pieces on the floor

(Bennett)
But I know you don’t mean it
I know it’s not true
But will the pain ever end?
The scars ever heal?
The pieces put back?

(Ben)
Will my body get HEALED!!!!

(Ben)
And here I am again
Breaking myself for you
Breaking myself
Never again made NEW!!!

(Bennett)
The pain I've endued
The tears I've cried
The sadness I’ve felt

(Ben)
Is ALL INSIDE!!!

(Ben)
And here I am again
Breaking myself for you
Breaking myself
Never again made NEW!!!

(Bennett)
You were gone

(Ben)
(All this time I broke myself for you)

(Bennett)
And you were gone

(Ben)
(Not even noticing that I sold myself for you)

(Bennett)
And you were gone

(Ben)
(WHAT AM I GOING TO DOOOOO!!!!?)

(ben)
And here I am again
Breaking myself for you
Breaking myself
Never again made NEW!!!

(ben)
And here I am again
Breaking myself for you
Breaking myself
Never again made NEW!!!

(ben)
NEVER
AGAIN
MADE
NEWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!

[Jedi Gemstone]

Wow that song rocks
Wr can't wait to see the rest of it.
Great poems everyone.
I'm cuttrently working on a poem I wrote on a situation this person's going through (someone my mate knows) so I'll have that up soon.
Keep up the good work guys.

[Magic_Midget]

Hope the guy that singing the one liners...can scream deeply...no more Linkin Park Chesters imitations. BUt great lyrics man!

___________________________
Submissive by Lee

Bring me down to my knees
As you bast in dominance over me
You hold the keys
To unlock freedoms held.

I lay down all arms
To let you walk over my body
As I brim with anger, hot as stones
Yet you control with an iron fist
And an icy touch to add.

I toil you with gifts from afar,
Prepare your daily milk baths
And never can I look up at your dignity,
The one you hold so high up.

The days grow longer, you're turning gray,
Mistress, you're weak and feeble,
And I grow tired of working everyday,
But you still hold the key to my freedoms,
Around your wrist, .....I can solve that...

*grabs butcher knife* ....freedom at last ...woot!!

[Magic_Midget]

Twilights Echo by Lee

When the wind blows I feel your presence
The leaves move with the breeze
Creating and outline of you
Then disappearing, just a tease.

When the clouds open to bring rain
Letting the wetness soak my body
Feeling your hands cleanse me,
Yet in reality there is nobody.

When I smell the morning dew
I always think of you
But you're never around
Leaving damp footprints on the ground.

When I walk along the shore
Picking up a seashell to hear its wondrous voice,
Thinking it's you again talking to me
But once now I've lost the one I adore.

When I visit your gravestone
Worn with age, the letters etched
'God will always be with thee',
I still feel sometimes that I'm alone.

When the sun sets, and the stars shine
I still feel you close, but you're so far
Away from me and the world
But you'll always be mine.

[White Raven]

Abeyance

Still waiting
In unwelcomed solitude
I thought I saw you walk beneath my window
It's just my mind
Playing tricks on me.

I'm still waiting, as the rain hits that window
Watching it slither down the glass
I wish you'd come back.
My whole day's nothing but a blur
The only parts in focus are
The moments where I'm alive
And the moments where I'm alive are
The ones when I'm with you

I've sat here for hours, I haven't moved once
You said you'd come back
So I'm waiting here, like always
I cry when you're gone
As stupid as it sounds, I just can't live without you
Breathing becomes difficult and
Feels like my body's lacerated

I'll always be here
Waiting for you
I can't tear myself from the gamble
'Oh you're not here yet
Just another second or two
Just another minute
Just another hour...'
When will those hours turn into days?

I feel as if I'm slowly losing you
My lifesource
My gateway to all that is good and clean
When I finally get my hands on you...
You're quiet...
Is something wrong?
I can't breathe anymore
I'm being suffocated
The clouds aren't so high up anymore
They're pressing in on me...

I know the sky has fallen
At least in my world
Because when I woke up this morning I looked out that window
And the city was in a fog of grey
The clouds have descended.

I'm always faithfully waiting for you
It's not really a complaint
I just wish you'd come home to me
Because now I'm waiting all night...

You were here, it seemed, for seconds
Mere fractions of that, too
And now...
It's back to waiting...

[Tavernology]

Love that last one WR.

[EnDurA]

Originally posted by [Arcane]
Hope the guy that singing the one liners...can scream deeply...no more Linkin Park Chesters imitations. BUt great lyrics man!

now how did you know that we are all huge LP fans?

[Magic_Midget]

i dont think i never heard a rock band sing dual parts. Linkin Park crossed my mind because they did.

[izchan]

Endura ... ... again ... like to hear that on mP3 please?

am in draught ... been working on a new design flow, and my brain is constantly delphi codes. can't seem to make the poem juice flowing.

But all in all, the work is great guys, I love the way the thread has grown. Hopfully, more people will pinch in their work and make it even better.

Thanks and kudos to all.

Enjoy.

[Bazman63]

Untitled


Too young and full of energy,
He could conquer worlds,
Lay waste to great civilisations,
Cause havoc and chaos,
To kings and there bishops.
Star exploding energy,
Beautiful like a comet,
Ploughing the heavens,
In unstoppable haste.
The capturer of worlds, slayer of foes,
Champion of mothers.
This titan of a man,
Is my nine year old son.

[izchan]

Bazman ... .. what can I say ... ... I thought I was looking at godzilla when I read the poem ...

God bless the kid.

: No more than ...

No more than a thought
the kind that bring knees bending
No more than a whisper
the kind that make man weep
No more than a man
the kind that brought an end to the world
No more than a belief
the kind that only belong to dreams
No more than this life
compared to the others that have passed us by

wrote this while sleeping.
found it on my table when I woke up this morning.

Enjoy.

[Bazman63]

Thanks Iz'. I wrote it a while ago. My son is 17 now.

You say you wrote your last piece while you were asleep. How Strange. It's good though. I like it.

[izchan]

there are times when I wake up in the morning and I find little peace of writings on my night table, things that I will scribble because I have a sudden thought or a dream that was vivid. I write them down on my little book or the papers that I keep beside my bed. I read somewhere that it helps us understand ourselves better. You will be surprised at some of the things that I find in the morning. It is troubling sometimes to me when I read it, and I go "Whoa! who writes this stuff" because I cannot remember why and how I could write something like that. It is like there is another person hidden within me that only comes when my counscious mind is asleep.

I started doing this around 10 years back and have never stopped.

Try it. You will surprise even yourself.

And thanks for liking the poem, because I liked it as well.