Another Artistic Thread - POEMS

[Orgone_Man]

I've been having a dry spell... but I think it is gone now. This is based off of a dream that I had.

[izchan]

Orgone ... ... impresive ... excelent.
Always did enjoy your brand of wordings.
The pic is most appropriate. How in the world do you find them. Or does it find you?

: An afternoon at the park

Siting on a bench
minding my own business
comes along a toddler
crying his heart content
baffled by the intrusion
I stood and began to walk
only to find the toddler
following me about
I tell the kid to go away
"Find your mommy" was what I said
yet the toddler hear me not
kept on crying without a thought
so I wandered around
with him behind
looking for a mother of this child
yet minutes passed by and it dawns on me
that the toddler is a lost child
not just to me
thus I pick him up
and began to stride
seeking for a confused mind
only to find plenty looks of disgust
of this toddler that won't shut up
at the end I resigned
taking him to the policeman hut
asking them for assistance
thus the end of my afternoon lunch

Later that day I passed on by
to check on the status of the child
what I was told shook my mind
for the child's mother had just died
a mugger came and stabed her heart
just to grap twenty five bucks
leaving the child to his own demise
and the mother was left to die
my heart sank and wept inside
for the evil that was done
a child was condemned without a mother
just so another can be richer
what a sad world we all live in
for money is now larger than life

A news ... so now a poem.

talk to you all later.

[Orgone_Man]

Originally posted by izchan
The pic is most appropriate. How in the world do you find them. Or does it find you?

basically, I stroll through google images untill something jumps out at me, then I utilize irfanview, paint, and/or adobe photoshop untill I have what I want. (i've just started using photoshop, so the pics can only get better from here on out ). Most all of my pics look nothing like they were originally except for the basic form.

[Jedi Gemstone]

Hey guys, sorry I havent posted in a while.
Orgone_Man I love your rhyming couplets. Really gives an atmosphere to my head and that picture is pretty
Iz "An afternoon at the park" stands out in my mind like a fresh coffe spill, your poems are good.
Arcane, I echo Iz on this one your poems do get deeper and more open in a kinda sence. heres one of my poems I don't know if I've posted it yet if I have I do apologize-
Suicide II

I've lived my last day
In this perilous life
I sit on the cold hand kitchen tiles
In my hand in a knife
The candle beside me
Flickers and groans
I let my pain take control as the knife cuts through me
My heart just moans
Like a great burden has been lifted
I drop to the floor
Blood spills and floods around me
I now live no more.

and theres this one-

words everlasting words
which mean the world to me
words leave imprints n the heart
friends leave footprints which never depart
you know what?
your footprints remain in my heart
they wont even fade
just get deper with a spade
with you by my side I feel stronger
we share each others pain
each others tears
each others fears
you saved me from suicide
my pain within
you renewed my hope with an extra thick surface
thanks to you I'm here today
never to go away
till my dieing day.

wot do u guys think?? I'll put up some more later

[Magic_Midget]

Your poems grow more deeper and deeper into the depressed conscience..Hope u feel a bit better everyday...
Here's a short one for a change...
________________________
Dark Cloud by Lee

Inebriated by the spirits that haunt the inside,
Controlling my movements, my mind, my essence,
Leaving the real 'me' under it's command.

I hold myself, digging my nails into my arm,
Deeper and deeper till the blood flows,
Only seeing rot and decay in my eyes.

I'm changing, into 'something',
For the worms began to seep from my pores,
My mind already losing it, falling into the dark void.

A cloud of spirits invades my life,
Metamorphing into the thing that entered,
Left behind a corpse, and my essence within a dark cloud.

[Cleanup]

A children's poem by me. I need suggestions on it, too. The rhythm is a little awkward.

The Nightly Hero by Cleanup

Dripping tentacles, oozing ventricles,
A single red goon lies within my sight!
A forked tongue, with compound eyes,
Has come to deliver for my demise,
But I'm not giving myself up without a fight!

The fiend has come, when I'm asleep,
To crush my bones and chew my feet!

Pulsing arteries, scaly spinidies,
The thing has everything imaginable!
With piercing claws, and fur to spare,
He has come for me in my underwear!
He is everything that isn't nearly fathomable!

A wooden bat, a bullet to fire, is all I need to further conspire,
But no such thing is in avail to me!

Toxic salivation, hissing blobination,
At last I see what may be my life yet!
A loose floorboard, with a nail to match,
Has come and soon the thing is scratched!
It barely knows whatever it has met!

So now it's gone, and in minutes I may - go to sleep,
For I have once again saved the day.

[Avion]

Hmmmm...
Jedi Gemstone?
from looking at your poems I can say that
you are a very strong minded young women
it must be the jedi powers, LoL.
everyones poems are amazing but the jedi is growing stronger.
*hug*
*cough* - hug myself I mean - I gotta stop doing that


As for myself I'm putting some last touches on this kind-of big poem that I said(a while ago) I was working on. It's almost done. I'll probably post it before this week is over. Why so late? things are a little busy around here at my house and are going to continue to be busy for the rest of the week, so yeah.

so I'll see ya later.

[Jedi Gemstone]

Originally posted by KnightFairy
Hmmmm...
Jedi Gemstone?
from looking at your poems I can say that
you are a very strong minded young women
it must be the jedi powers, LoL.
everyones poems are amazing but the jedi is growing stronger.
*hug*
*cough* - hug myself I mean - I gotta stop doing that

awwwwww so sweet (sorry I'm hiper) why thanks you knightFairy I've never been so flattered in my life or at least I dont think I have been probably forgot but still sometimes I can be a very stron minded person my head rules my body literally. but anyway thanks
*hug*
Heres a poem I just came up with-

The red river swimming
Drowning my senses
I look around for a dingy
All I found was a thingy
But it sunk to the bottomless ocean
Never to be seen again

I get pulled under
Losing the air in my lungs
I try to swim away from this fear
A single pure thing drifts out in the sea its my tear
Dissapeard in a single wave
My hope keeps draining

With one urge
I've sunk so low pressure builds
Like a force field
Yield......
The only option left
With nothing left but agony I let go of my soul
It dissapears in a flash
My dead body sinks in peace at last

what do you guys think?

[izchan]

It was nice, Gem. As for knightFairy ... don't I get a hug?

Keep posting.

: The Journey

It was a night like any other
the moon was hidden beneath it all
only the street lamps gave its warmth
I walked the road with a pace
hoping to reach shelther faster
but the stretch seems to stretch even further
as my legs slowly began to falter
then there not far from me stood a girl
walked up to me and sayed
Hello handsome, whats your name?
my name is Desire.
are you tired from doing so much more?
oh honey, why do you bother?
just come and sit near me
and you will know life differently
don't you think it is much easier
to just sit down and admire me?
At first I did not know what to think
and wanted very much to stay
my legs could use a rest
and she was a real beauty
Yet something inside of me
kept screeming for me to keep my pace
so not knowing what to do
I did the most obvious thing
I chose to follow my heart
and kept going on
slowly leaving Desire behind my trail
Even though my mind said otherwise
my heart holds me true
and it pointed me to go further on
for at the very end
there is shelter for my weary bones

A mild attemp to be different.

enjoy.

[QH0BBES]

Fightin’ fo Nothin’

For all those who don’t know
I’m about to deliver a blow
I’m going to tell it like it fuckin’ is
About how we sit back ignore our kids

We’ll pay four million for a bitch ass bomb
But we’ll never give a cent to a teenage mom
We’ll try to find better ways to die
And waste tax dollars on renaming FRENCH fries

We’ll give a man 50 years for petty theft
Ignore anyone who thinks their wing is left
Abortion is wrong? But over-population is right?
No wonder so many people die in clubs of the night

Blowing up planes is terrorism
But dropping bombs on a city is considered fine
Damn, if you want someone dead, just use your 9
With a cowboy in office, I’ll stick with anarchism

Bush wants to blow up Iraq
Chaney? Hope he dies of a hart-attack
Colin Powell just wants to be on CNN
Fuck this; just give me a 5th of gin

So when this bitch is over
Is everyone going to be a rover?
Or is “she” going to drop the bomb on us?
Cause, frankly, I don't want to hear you fuss

By: Lyle Wilson

[Orgone_Man]

This one is kind of weird...

[Jedi Gemstone]

Originally posted by izchan
It was nice, Gem. As for knightFairy ... don't I get a hug?

Keep posting.

Awww poor Iz feelings left out *hug*
Heres a pretty crap poem came up with the other day-

I know your trying to help me
I see what you want to do
But theres no point
Its all a waste of your time
The knife is poised in the same position
Above my wrist
Like it has been for the past year
After all this pain
Now knowing my gain
I want to die
Instead of bitter tears when I cry
Yet you still perceive the truth
While I'm sat there
A hand takes my knife
A warm arm around my shoulder
A light kiss on my cheek
His there to save me
its you.......

[Avion]

Hey everybody.
I finally finished that crazy poem I said I was working on.
There are a couple of things you need to know first.
The poem is taking the perspective of three people.
I will call them the Trinity
not the religious Trinity: Father, Son, and The Holy Spirit
I'm an Atheist, so there's no way I'm using that Trinity
No, I'm using Trinity's second definition in the Dictionary
Which is: a group of three people or things
Each Trinity has a different style of poetry
so enjoy...




.This One is still Alive.

Trinity 1:
the sky was broken deep
a pale light made her seep
talonus hair slid across her face
the wind was setting her in place

she held onto herself
mindfull onto her keep

she cryed out-ward to thyself
frightened she could not sleep

Trinity 2:
I hear her sing sometimes
she likes to wear flowers in her hair

she draws the lake
she draws the man
but the man always drowns
for she sees no-one strong enough
strong enough to save her

she crys so much
she dreams
that the sky would die
no-one will stop her, she will defy

I sometimes see this castle floating in the sky
the castle is a world with-in a world
it is a mystical land filled wiyh her and them
I sometimes see her flying her kite in the sky
as she walks through the flower garden
she smiles for she is young and free
unlike me, alone, traped and consise, darkened to thrive

I don't want to see her die
I don't want to see her cry
please don't go away
I'll hold you, I'll kiss you
just don't say you'll die

Now she knows war is coming
a battle for her empire
a battle for her life
to be what she wants to see
she knows she must not lose

but she holds back
I wish I could save her
I want to protect her
she can not hear me
I guess she'll never know...

...there after you
why does she not fight
she is not of the lie
her eyes of mistreated sight
they hold her with there contentious trite

revengeful hand that breaks
serpants of her watered eyes
drugful shadows that do not make
emotional lies that will never mate

Trinity 3
Cataclysm of her catacomb
benthos around her bestrew
trepidation laughed at her tritagonist
leaving tenresse to breed the tetrapterous mind

Trinity 1:
I also tried to slaughter the end of me
why must people stare
just let me be
just want to see
a longer living me

past has been rough...
True, killing those I hate would stripp them bare
"hurt the little boy, it's a dare"
Try and make them breath in my head where they dare not stare
but I grew far from there

I see her threw me
just don't let her see
this breaking ocean this breaking me

stained lies worship the sun
animals beg for the kill
many are the sun who build
chains will keep them still

Trinity 3:
salubrious land is sapiential
disiderate crys out desuetude
galvanize the wicked and wrong
you'll save them all

Trinity 1:
one day I'll be with her
one day I'll find a home
a home of my very own
and I'll never let her down

I'll care for her
I'll protect her
I'll make love to her
I'll save her

because I know one thing
and that is...
This One Is Alive



Hope you like

[izchan]

Knight. Wow .. talked about different dimensions ...
I had to read it 2 times before I got it straight ... ... but yeah ... I think it is good. But somehow, it became too complex somwhere. Maybe it takes too much of my own imagination to fill in the gap, so it becomes a bit hard to swallow.

I have nothing to post today.
not writers block, rather ... very heavy word load.

So keep the posting coming.

Ps: what does it mean under QHOBBES name when it says (BANNED)?
Is it for real?

[Avion]

The Trinitys are talking about the same thing it's just their taking turns. Like at a camp-fire, when everyone sits down and tells a story.
The first person says something, than the next person adds onto it but with their own style.
If some of the words are words that you don't understand than just go to http://www.dictionary.com/