Another Artistic Thread - POEMS

[Jedi Gemstone]

Oh My God.....knightfairy that poem is so beautiful, its the best poem I have read in a while a real sence of ohh whats the word imagery and understanding yeah. You used figurative language brillinatly I'm gonna save thst poem and keep it

[Avion]

If you look at what trinity 3 says, you'll see he always uses
2 big words. - one at the begining and one at the end of each sentence.
the first word is the same amount of letters as the second word, and the first word also starts with the same letter as the second.
just thought you may not have noticed that little trick
of mine.
so, yeah, enjoy it.

[White Raven]

KnightFairy:

That's beautiful. I have a way with words, but nothing so well as that. I commend you.
I must say though... Reminds me of the character Gabrielle in my book... Startling similarity... Hmmm...

Putting that thought aside, I hope you write more like it.

[Avion]

I am most flatered by your complaments. I will make sure that I will have plenty of poems ready to post for you guys when I get the chance to come by for a while

[Magic_Midget]

The Spirit Whispers by Lee
A continuation of Fade To Black

Tearing me away from reality,
Wallowing into a surreal fantasy,
My own personal hell turning me inside out,
No one to silence my cries or shouts.

My peers abandoning all hope left inside,
Left to myself alone, nowhere to hide,
From the fear that lingered below,
A heart that perspired hope, began to mellow....

Couldn't stay in this same cell,
Waiting for hope to come time can tell...,
Need to unrattle the chains from my wrists,
Freeing them with the blood from my fists.

My bare hands tearing away the black wallpaper,
Scraps of paper lie on the floor as I continue,
But to my dismay lies an empty color...black....,
Hope fading once again....I can only tune out to a nearby voice....

*....laughter....*

"come with me.....come..with me......"

A distant twinkling amidst the blackened landscape,
Faint, but stronger as I inch closer to the torn walls,
The voice growing stronger like...like from outside,
Renewed strength and vigor within......I take a step back...

..and run towards the wall....

Smashing the black velvet of my life,
Entering the allustrial brilliance of the sunlight,
Sounds of laughter and voices can be heard,
And one familiar person walking towards me...

Laying his hand on my shoulder,
A warm smile on his face...

"....come with me....a new beginning awaits..."

He sprouted his wings, such brilliant white feathers...

"Oh...and join me with your new gift"

My body felt different, like it grew a new part,
Walking to a near lake and peering into it's subtle waters,

Gold blonde curls, no more straight laced jet black twists,
New bright face, no more depressing eyes or a sag.
And the wings I so longed for to come true,
Now becoming part of me....

----------------------------------------------------

Borne into the skies in which I fly,
No longer shedding the tears I cried,
A new beginning aspires,
It burns in my heart like wildfire.

Transformed into beauty that existed,
Deep inside a soul once twisted,
Only to break free,
And become my inner beauty.

I now start life over with a new degree,
A word now etched into my body...."Free",
Away from the pain, away from sorrow,
The hope will remain after tomorrow.

[izchan]

Yes ... definately more to come ... ... I am so happy that one of our thread members are so well liked ...

White raven ... ... you said you are good with words ... so us some work ... I think we will all like to read what you have in your private storages ...

No poems today ... have tonnes to work.

Talk to you all later.

[Magic_Midget]

yes...we loved someone else posting in here besides me and izchan...gets boring reading izchan's and my poems constantly.

[Jedi Gemstone]

Wow Lee that poem is brilliant I loves it Heres a pretty crap poem but still I think its worth your times to read-

The Soldier

A soldier
Stands in solitude
Alone they stood
Together they fell
Bodys decompose
Their bloody flesh hangs lifelessly
A gentle wind blows
Whipping this young soldiers hair around
Weapons of war have been fought
Guns were loud like birds calls
Now silence has fallen
Guns and screams sound no more
The dawn of hope rises
Bleached a tinted red
The sun sheds tears of lonliness
The soldier looks out over the horizon
Sun glaring her face
Clouds glide by
Undaunted by this atrosush sight
A victory is blasted
Tears roll down the girls cheek
Its fall among the dead bodys
Vanquished in a pool of crimson red
This war is over
What about the next war?
Or the war after that?
Wars will never solve anything
Just cause death and pain.

not very good but still. Heres another one for today-

You Were Never There

I sit here alone in the dark
Thinking of you
Nothing here
Wind blowing gently against my hair
Curtains with holes flutter
Rain lashing outside
Thunder and lightning
Bolting and rumbling in a distance
Time stands still not ticking an inch
I fell neglected and pain
Agony, torture and insomnia
I cannot sleep, I cannot rest
All my voices call in my head
Lost in a whirl of my miscarry plan
My mind lies in rags at my feet
Defeat and deceit surrond me
The room im in is like a dakr shadow
Never leaving my side
Shutters rage and rattle at the window
Floor boards crea and moan
The walls are rotten like they hold a thousand memorys
You were never there and never will be
I might as well face it
I'm alone in this room alone to die
I break down in tears and cry
My heart seizes and my body shakes violently
I lie in a grusesome macabre mess
My death lingers in the air
Yet you however were never there.

Hope you like them.

[Magic_Midget]

Excellent wording in the second poem. Very dark very descriptive, I'm always a fan of your works

[RanDom_ErrOr]

War is peace

the inner struggle that noone knows
the outer conflict that doesnt exist
what one man thinks they will believe
but what others feel they must follow.

war is peace and peace is war
they fight and fight and fight some more
rape and pillage is all they do
the parents scream out till theyre blue.

the war goes on until theres peace
when no one finds anything but greif
in their greif there's nothing but war
in their war there's nothing but joy
in their joy there's nothing but peace
and in their peace there's nothing but war.

war goes on until we die
until the time where we are high
so in this time we must fight
or we will be the victims of the plight
and in our sight we will not see
the only victim is no one but me.

so time goes on until we die
till the time where time stand by
and when its standing where will we be
but other than in our memories.

[White Raven]

My love a dragon you were
Soaring above the clouds
You shone when the water touched your lips
that was when I saw you.
I had been waiting for you
Though I hadn't known
Sitting atop the broken life of a tree.
You were dirty but beautiful
Strong with your youthful glory
Why can't we just get rid of this world
Let's be in our own
I can't take this spinning wheel of chance
Because my love you were the dragon
And still you are strong in your youthful glory
How you shone at the blade's end of battle!
Whatever made you turn your head and meet my gaze...
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^Crappy

I'm so uninspired right now... I need to think up some ideas... -.-

[izchan]

I have to object on some of arcanes comment.
It gets bored reading MY OWN POEMS only ...
but an absolute joy to read everyone elses ..

so keep it coming.

Jedi. Excellent word. I concur with Arcane on this one, [You were never there] is a very good read.

: Never there

Even when the sun shine on me
my shadows never reached your side
your eyes never catch my presence
my being there was invisible
I am just like air

You said that you were not loved
that no one understands your pain
yet never for once wondered
who made your morning coffee
who gave you flowers every day
it was all granted without fee
as if I was never there

Moving my thoughts to better times
when I can still see your smiles
when you smelled of morning dew
I missed those more innocent days
when you loved yourself more

So I am here no longer
not in your world anymore
you grieve your tears inside
shutting out my reaching arms
with only anger as your friend
as I watch sadly from afar

[izchan]

Random ... i feel your poem, ... it really touches my soul.

Raven.... wow !!! ... very well done.

Hope to see more.

enjoy.

[Avion]

monkey sit'n in a tree
he's funky just like me

jumpin in the sea
he's got a fricken knee

he laughs like a bee
and runs like me

smack'n my buns
oh it's some funs

monkey is funny
I'm have'n sex with a bunny

Monkey is runny
just like my tummy

Oh it's so funny
he makes a lot of honey

monkey wears some shoes
monkey likes his booze

it is so nice for him
he picks his ass with a finger

LOL

[izchan]

KNIGHT ... you have just grossd me out on that new one. :P

good night people.