Another Artistic Thread - POEMS

[Jedi Gemstone]

LMAO Knight that poem is hilairous, made me laugh

Lee and Iz thanks for your kind words

Raven your poem is good if you want any help coming up with something just pm me I'll be glad to help

Random very good poem, I love the rythm you put in it really gave it a good effect.

Well I'm off to find somein inspiring to write about, night guys.
^_^ZZZZzzzzzzzz

[Magic_Midget]

For some reason...I think you came up with that poem while watching the "Chimp Picks Is Ass and sniffs" clip cuz that poem reminds me of it so much.

Lemme dig up a funny one from long ago:
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My Case with Mexican Food by Lee

Lying in my bed tossing and turning,
Trying to sleep, but my heart is burning,
It could be those damn burritos,
Or those spicy jalapenos,
That I ordered from Taco Bell.
Shit, if that was the case,
I go back there
and shove my fist into their face.

They don't know what my butt goes through;
Comes in hot, it's going to come out hot;
Searing my anus and all its tissue;
Maybe staining the toilet and the lot.

And when I lift my leg and fart;
It comes roaring out like a go kart,
Stanks like hell, smellier than mom's;
I think I let out a nuclear bomb.

Don't light that match though;
Unless you wanna be roasted;
Though my farts are lethal;
Enough gas to get you toasted.

So that's my case on spicy foods;
Don't wanna get me in one of those moods;
Painful cramps and gassy ass;
Better get out of the way before I pass.

[Orgone_Man]

wow... the poems have taken a wacky turn... I might put that last poem that I wrote up tommorrow (the one that nobody has seen yet b/c angelfire fired me) (:][)

[Jedi Gemstone]

Orgone how true that is first it was all deep stuuf and darkness when I posted my dark poems and so did Lee now it seems to be happy stuff, next minute its probably gonna be love or somein.

[duh]

My Life

I was born back in 1985
17 years and still don’t how to survive
Gots me a lousy dead end job
But at least I’m not a stuck up snob

Use to ride bikes for fun
Now I pirate music and code html
And I ask myself if I’m ever done
Plenty of friends but no social life
Can’t seem to ever get a date
Sit on my ass when I’m depressed
February 15th, fuck too late

Jason agrees the human race is wrong
Jeryl and Adam smoke my bong
My house seems to have one door
My life is just the opening bore

I’m trying to change
Like changing the kind of shit I do
Shooting pool and foul at the range
Wasting all my time there
Just going nowhere really fast
Riding way to incredibly quick
Give me jump and I’ll give you a body cast

Well that’s the way this cracker crumbles
My closed mouth just results in mumbles
Cause right now I can’t do shit
You’re always trying to fuck with it

By: Lyle Wilson

[Jedi Gemstone]

Duh very intresting poem, nice to see a new person post here.
Knight Fairy helped me with this poem so its done by both of us-

I feel neglected and cold
No-one to love me
No-one to hold
Out of everything I thought
Nothing ever was like this
Like a whole new world exists
Like a dream that became a myth
But something happened
A new door opened up to me
A new world born unto thee
There I found new air to breath
New hope to see
I feel like a new me
The way I should be.

Hope you all like it

[Magic_Midget]

QHOBBES? welcome back...

Gem...with the help of KF...that was a very well thought up and flowing with beauty...excellent write!
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Euphoria by Lee

Can the winds of time calm the aurora of thoughts
That provoke the inner sphere, my mind;
From its most destructive grasp,
Unleashing the horror into dreams.

Can the hourglass of time condescend
Against the fissure inside these dreams,
To hurry against time, and close the seams,
Waking me from my unrestful nightmare.

Can the waves of the ocean in which I visit
Relax and ease the soul from within,
Calming the fury engulfing my life,
Laying my conscience into solitude.

Can the injustice between death and I
Conceive an agreement that I shall live,
Releasing the tension I withheld for so long,
Ending my nightmares, fury, and unrest.

[White Raven]

The Silence

The silence, it consumes me
Grows louder with every soft breath
It is a massive eagle, talons in my chest
It's weight, it pushes me to the point of breaking
It weighs so much, the silence's sound
Is so deafening
The primeival nature of the creature's way
The creature that is the silence
It frightens and threatens
Malices and chokes
It's breath and movement
Heavy but silent
Silent but loud
It's horse head looks up on it's thick neck
And the silence turns and disappears
Because a baby cries.

[Orgone_Man]

Jedi: I like that new poem also, it flows well.
White Raven: Sounds like you are writing about Transcendental Meditation there. Am I right, or am I right? Or am I right?

The beginning of this one is a bit wierd just to throw off random onlookers:

[izchan]

JEDI, duh is not a new member, .. just an old guy with a new name. Welcome back lyle ... ..

everyones poems are incredible. I am still the silent one now.

so here goes.

: Ultimatum

seeking for the words to say
what it is that's killing me
bit by bit it takes its bite
sheering away my last delight
even great man fall one day
who am I do say otherwise
but when the day comes by
I would like to say goodbye
stating that I did it all
my very own way

don't say it ... i did not plagarise the song ..
just liked the way it sounds ...

enjoy.

[Orgone_Man]

[izchan]

quite day in the city.
People are kind of etchy over the SARS issue. Plus the war and everything else ... so solemn.

Hopefully everything will be back to normal later on.

: Programmer woes

Time is ticking away
while I sit and brude over my lunch
thinking of the activities
that accompanies late friday dinners
another update on the war front maybe
or just search for more components to use
just another boring programmers life
waiting for his projects due
yet another friday afternoon
with nothing better to do

bare with me .. my mind is drained ...

[Orgone_Man]

Originally posted by izchan
quite day in the city.
People are kind of etchy over the SARS issue. Plus the war and everything else ... so solemn.

Hopefully everything will be back to normal later on.

: Programmer woes


bare with me .. my mind is drained ...

My mind was drained for a couple weeks there too. It seems like the urge to write this stuff just comes at randomn times. Has anyone ever figured out the catalyst for it?

[Magic_Midget]

Awesome pictures that accompany the poems OM!!
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Endless Thoughts by Lee

Can the winds of time calm the aurora of thoughts
That provoke the inner sphere, my mind;
From its most destructive grasp,
Unleashing the horror into dreams.

Can the hourglass of time condescend
Against the fissure inside these dreams,
To hurry against time, and close the seams,
Waking me from my unrestful nightmare.

Can the waves of the ocean in which I visit
Relax and ease the soul from within,
Calming the fury engulfing my life,
Laying my conscience into solitude.

Can the injustice between death and I
Conceive an agreement that I shall live,
Releasing the tension I withheld for so long,
Ending my nightmares, fury, and unrest.

[Orgone_Man]

I wrote this last night when I was studying for a big test.